Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#461

such an intense update jenny...
by da way how arnav have khushi's photo with him..is he knw her before??
den how come khushi didnt recognized him?? is he wants to protect her from any mishap..bt why??
arnav was suspected to b da murderer??
da story is become intresting day by day..
luking forward for mystery to b unfold..
continue soon:)

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#462

Very interesting!

Both of them are mysterious

there are hints that he is the killer but i think he is not

a wild guess- is khusi lavanya's look a like. May be thats why the photo

Edited by arnavbarun - 12 years ago

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songcouple

@songcouple

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Posted: 12 years ago

#463

😊 icant guess who is the killer ...
i just know its attraction between arshi

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#464

Is Arnav the killer...?

Is he after khushi or is he attracted to her...? So much suspense... Can't wait for next update

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msmarple

@msmarple

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Posted: 12 years ago

#465

Hey Jenny!

The update was very interesting...the story & Arnav- oooh so mysterious😊

So he is stalking Khushi is he? and looking contemptuously at her photograph...

eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.

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monsi08

@monsi08

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#466

Hmm so now maj ASR is in the radar !!!

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-Shilpaa-

@-Shilpaa-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#467

now who's this stalker with a limp??
and the man living with Khushi is still a mystery...
And does Arnav have any ulterior motive behind following Khushi?
Arnav having her photo with him only strengthens my beliefs...
Is the stalker and the killer two different people???? And is Arnav one among these two????
I'm getting more and more confused with each update Jenny di...
And giving Arnav's POV, or atleast a part of it, would be of great help...

And all this mystery and suspense is really getting into my head...
And you are an amazingly talented writer I must say.. U write all kinds of stories with such beauty...
And I just can't wait for the next update...
please please please update soon...
waiting...
And I'll be stalking... :)

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#468

Jenny, I'm intrigued, but I confess I have no idea what's going on...

Is Arnav indulging in a wastrel's lifestyle? Is he actually guilty of killing his wife and her lover?

Is Khushi actually a prostitute in this?? Is Arnav the serial killer?? I'm going to have to go back and re-read..

Most of all...why is Arnav interested in Khushi??

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#469

This seems like such a murder mystery movie...

The Arhi moments are so ...as you intoxicating..it's like Arnav is going to through inner turmoil...it's like he's fighting a battle still inside his head...

...Khushi is trying hard to keep away...but ..his pull towards her is way to magnetic...

Waiting for the next one...Jenny,...Awesomely written!

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Diya Ganguly

@Careless_Artist

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Posted: 12 years ago

#470

Wonderful Update!!
KhushiEs thoughts were around Ex. Major Arnav..
Bytreal by you wife and Best friend made Arnav cold as he is now...
He didn't feel guilty by murdering them...
I think whoever in that situation would not feel guilty as well..
Waiting for next..