Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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SS88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#451

Well,I'm pretty sure the Major is not a murderer. So, the question is, why is he stalking Khushi? And what's with the smile?

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Amira

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Posted: 11 years ago

#452

I am so confused, but that is probably what I'm meant to feeling right now. Why is arnav following khushi? Is he this 'jack the ripper' guy? If arnav is not attracted to khushi, then what does he want from her? Why is he always where she is? So many questions and very few answers! Can't wait for the next update

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#453

Loved the banners Jen.

You've got me confused Jen.

Arnav can't be the murderer.

But then why was he following Khushi?

And why is he looking at her picture?

And Arnav and Khushi are attracted to each other.

I am totally conphoosed.

When do we get the next update?

Edited by 1chilly - 11 years ago

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anu1017

@anu1017

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Posted: 11 years ago

#454

Nice banner Jenny!! The story is so intriguing, loved the update😊

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ILoveFF

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Posted: 11 years ago

#455

Very gripping ... Curious to read more

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kclovearshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#456

Res for KC 😉

What a bone chilling update Jenny!! omygod, the end 😲 will come back to it shortly.

Thank God, it was Arnav!! Even though Khushi acted all bravado and philosophical infront of the Manager, the smell of death be it was only her figment of imagination has its effects and Khushi is no different! Just loved how Arnav held her and soothed her frayed nerves!!

Was he following her to keep her safe, apparently he has also heard about the serial killer! Though its serious, he joked around that it would be one of her besotted patrons, to ease her mind? But Khushi was not in a frame of mind for any jokes wouldn't blame her though!

I was perplexed that Khushi thought Arnav was lying when he says he is drawn by her hazel eyes.!! Why so, is she seeing something we are not seeing so far? With the realization came disappointment because she wanted to believe in him and then the rage for being still hopeful of something. What has made Khushi so cynical in life that she is not willing to give herself a chance?

I don't thnk Arnav was joking when he told her to avoid wearing heels. It was wise of her to let him walk with her to her apartment!!

She expected a kiss from him 😉 You are not crazy Khushi 😉 such are Arnav's charms!!

His past brought a chill in the spine. I still think there is more to this story that what meets the eye 😕 Jenny, I don't want him to be a murderer even if he had PTSD!!

Arnav is still a Mystery almost an Enigma 😵 His staring a picture of Khushi, I have an eerie feeling about this 😲 I hope Khushi's instincts are false!!

Omygod the last line, don't tell me he will be accused (falsely) of a serial killer 😲😲

You are an Awesome writer Jenny 👏

Cheers

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Archna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#457

Fantastic update. The night is described so wonderfully. So Khushi caught his lie that she kept him bringing back to her. This mystery is getting deep now.

Can't wait to know what is the story behind arnav following her. According to the eye witness arnav was following Khushi.

It's so exciting. It getting more interesting now.

The banners are fantastic.

Thanks for the update and pm in advance.

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Sarikaa97

@Sarikaa97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#458

Amazing chapter...can't wait to read more:)

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bkamber

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Posted: 11 years ago

#459

A murder suspense thriller.
Suspense starting to unfold.
A past connection to Khushi, but Khushi does not know him.
How & why does Arnav have Khushi's photo?
Stalker or protector?
Will Arnav be on the police radar as a possible suspect?
...And still...who is the "he" in Khushi's life...perhaps Arnav knows him.

Enjoyed the chapter.

😊

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Raila1014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#460

Ok Major Raizada is creeping me out. Is he a saviour or the Jack the Ripper?m why would he carry her picture? Why would he questioned whether someone was really following her? I hope I am mistaken. Oh if i was Kushi, I would think about carrying something to protect myself with, a weapon of some kind . . ,