VirMan OS: Date Rush - Page 11

I just realized that I actually got 80+ likes!😲 🤪

Originally posted by: beauty14

Since you have officially become UK'S most talented writer, I dedicate an award tooo ME!😃...for supporting, blackmailing, threatening, irritating and annoying you to post such fantastic creations!Haha...Sorry, Jen no award for you this year, but try again next time!😛

You have no idea how much hardwork I have put into forcing you to post all these amazing os's! Don't think I forgot about the other one though! Still working on that!😆

And Jen thanks for mentioning me in your speech!🤣

I love ya too Jen!🤗

I feel honored Jen that you have given me the credit for thinking of the world's best title! ( NO, I am not being conceited, just felt like saying that because you and I both know how horrible I am with names and titles!😉)

Okay and the banner, Jen! Did you realize or not? I wrote the wrong name in the banner!🤣

I wrote bathroom rush, instead of date rush! Lol...everyone's probably going to be like ab inhe konsa rush tha bathroom mein! Jen, get those dirty-minded thoughts out of your head this instant! Sharam nahi aati tumhe!😃

Okay coming back to the update, now is the time to give my serious analysis on your os and share my honest reviews, so Jen this time I will be serious and share my "serious thoughts'' with u!

In all seriousness,

OH. MY. MERCIFUL. GOD. Seriously, how many pairs of pants does Manvi own? Like the one day she needs them obviously coincidently her sister, who wears a skirt every single day of her life decides to wear pants! Yes, I am very angry, you want to know why!?! Well, I don't have time for your response, so I will answer anyways! I am very pissed off because you made Manvi sound like she is some poor girl who only owns two pairs of pants!🤣

And also you made her sound poor again where she doesn't have fifty dollars to give to Katrina! How does she not have fifty dollars to pay back her sister, yet she is driving a car which runs on gas! And let me remind u gas comes in car through a gas station and at that gas station u have to pay MONEY to get that gas in the car...so what if Manvi ran out of gas and she had to pay for gas, phir kya hota uska? Gas is really expensive, it's like 5 dollars a gallon, bechari Manvi toh bilkul hi gareeb hojaygi!

And then Katrina has so much money that she can buy about a million skirts but Manvi only had two pairs of pants? Jen what kind of injustice is this?😡

Next time Manvi better be super rich, or else... You know what will happen to you! *evil laugh*😈

By the way don't think my serious analysis is done yet, hold on I still have more complaints for u!

How dare you try to embrass Manvi infront of so many people? What would have happened if someone saw her in her undies? Sab kuch satya naas ho jaata phir! And then main tumhe goli maar deti!🤣(Just joking, promise I don't even know how to use a gun, I am a very innocent and angelic person!)

Shukar hain Virat was there, otherwise I have lost all umeed from u Jen! And what was with those crazy girls, why were they ripping Manvi's clothes off when their target was clearly the other one, TEEN SENSATION,VIRAT VADHERA! Hello, do you people not realize the difference between a smoking-hot six pack machine and a beautiful looking skinny WOMAN? Like huge differences between them, I mean the obvious reasons are one wears Sky-blue panties 😳 and the other one wear's checkered boxers😳! Now, do I have to go into more details, or is it clear now?😛

AND BIGGEST COMPLAINT-----> MANVI TANDON? 😡

KYA ZAMANNA AGAYA HAIN? WHAT THE HECK IS THIS?😡

I will deal about this matter with you later when I also have the right torture devices with me as well!😈

Looks like someone is getting naughty shaughty!

Obviously, ur not supposed to be looking down at her underwear, sharam nahi hain Virat ko!?!😉

Guessing favorite colors by looking at each other's inners! Good one Jen! What's next, now?😳

And Jen what is with you and this new obsession with no pants? Like first you make Manvi not have any pants and now Virat?

Why don't u make them both naked, so you can fulfill your wish of not letting them both have any clothes!🤣

Chalo atleast you didn't make Virat a creep, thank god Manvi ki izzar bach gayi and he didn't do anything else except a harmless kiss and giving her his pants! BUT WHAT YOU DID DO WRONG WAS THAT YOU LET VIRAT GO IN HIS BOXERS IN FRONT OF SO MANY GIRLS? Uski koi izzat hain ya nahi? Jen civil rights is something right?😆

Jen, what dreams were you talking about?☺️

Ahem...Ahem...Please keep those thoughts to yourself and let us mere innocents live our life peacefully!😃

Jen, you made my hot macho-hunk into a tickle minister?

Like first you make him a perve, then an almost-nanga, and now this? Is there any more damage left to be done! And then there's always got to be a kabab mein hadi everywhere right? Vicky ka bacha!

And the end obviously it had to be Virat! Who else could it have been?😃

Loved this part! Haha... on the first meeting she got him out of his pants already, so next meeting mein ab kya boxe... (You can finish the rest of it for me!😉)

He smirked and arched his eyebrows."Only on the first date and she's already managed to get me out of my pants."

Finally done with my long,serious anaylsis!'

Jen if this is not long enough for you then I suggest you just go jump off a cliff or something because at this point this comment is bigger then the actual os itself!😆

OH. MY. MERCIFULL. GOD. YOU BETTER POST A SEQUEL AND A PART TWO OF THIS OTHERWISE GET READY FOR THE AVANALNCHE!

This was just mindblowing os di 😃

Sorry for being the most late in commenting 😛

Originally posted by: Ankita1997

This was just mindblowing os di 😃

That bathroom thingy was something u know 😆😉

She wearing his pant aye hayee 😛

They were actually going to date 😳

and I loved these lines

"He smirked and arched his eyebrows."Only on the first date and she's already managed to get me out of my pants."

😉

Originally posted by: Ankita1997

Sorry for being the most late in commenting 😛

Hi.. Jenny.. 1st of all i m really really sorry for not reading ur this amezing os.. I jst love it.. The way u portry manvi n the rockstar virat is fantastic.. I love it.. Manvi's badluck end me gud luck bn gya.. Awww.. Virat is so loving n caring n understaning guy.. Bt i hv a que why he drag manvi with him in that male bathroom.. Is it becoz manvi's skirt was riped n the reason was virat..? N the cnvo b/n virman was too gud.. N their naughty masti was best N that last line of virat was mindblowing. Lv it.

Originally posted by: Aashalovevirman

Hi.. Jenny.. 1st of all i m really really sorry for not reading ur this amezing os.. I jst love it.. The way u portry manvi n the rockstar virat is fantastic.. I love it.. Manvi's badluck end me gud luck bn gya.. Awww.. Virat is so loving n caring n understaning guy.. Bt i hv a que why he drag manvi with him in that male bathroom.. Is it becoz manvi's skirt was riped n the reason was virat..? N the cnvo b/n virman was too gud.. N their naughty masti was best N that last line of virat was mindblowing. Lv it.

Originally posted by: .LiveLaughLove.

Thank you so much, Ankita. Everyone who read this os loves this line. 😃 😳

Originally posted by: .LiveLaughLove.

Hahaha, no problem. 😊