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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aruni50218


And its us readers who want arnav to gift something to khushi on her birthday, which is also their wedding day 😆

Thanks guys for the replies.
@Twiggy - I got that bit, that was quite clear that he'd reject the marriage again.
What really got me confused me was (a) the comments about the air being cleared between the two and all their problems and differences being resolved. Some comments also abotu how they were excited about the wedding! and (b) the reference to the gift.
I couldn't understand when these had happened,
I guess for me they have not really resolved the issues, the only one they have agreed and decided upon is that the wedding is on. The underlying problems still exist.
@Aruni- thanks for the clarification about the gift
@Tanu- you guys and your excitement!!! totally confused me, you lot!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update...loved it...dialogs were amazing...this conversation was very much needed to clear the air between the two. In the first half arnav was dominating but loved the way you turned the tables...they both are poles apart...it would be interesting to see them fall in love...it will take time but the journey would be very interesting for sure :)...I m desperately witing for their life after marriage...can't wait for the next update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful...

Loved their conversation...

Do continue soon and thnx for the Pm !
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Posted: 11 years ago
yeah dear anonymous
it has been 3 days since last update.

plz update now...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi, hope you are feeling better now J I was caught up with office stuff and could not read last update so finished both chapters in 1 go. And what updates , full on high voltage drama , AWESOME . I always believed Khushi will choose Arnav and it has nothing to do about obligation or gratitude. She did commit to him first & she will stand by her decision , come what may.

And I would not say any of the characters were wrong in their approach .. I mean, come on let's just keep us in their shoes & look at things from their perspective ... Rishabh who has always been the only guy in her life since childhood and has an advantage of being her closest friend can be under an illusion that she would also love him back, it happens, dosent it ? I just believe it was his overconfidence that backfired & I do agree he would have handled it in a better way but then he was desperate and "desperate times call for desperate measures" , he just acted in whatever little time / space he had . And Arnav , well for someone who has grown up amidst treachery & distrust will always have a negative approach on things .. He just cannot blindly believe in people , even if these people are those closest to him .Let's not forget he was betrayed by his "own mom" .. I mean , what worse can happen to anyone L

And Khushi.. little girl has really grown up.. Iam so very impressed by her .. it is totally understandable that she was confused , shocked & scared (may be) by the whole situation .And if she wanted some time to sort out her thoughts there is nothing wrong in that. I mean I would never want to be in that position , it is just so distressing & unfortunate to know that people close to u will get hurt by your actions & decisions. But the way she approached the whole situation was truly commendable. The maturity in her thoughts , clarity in her feelings and the confidence with which she spoke to both Rishabh & Arnav shows her strong character and also how she has evolved .🤗

Ahh, Lines I absolutely loved ,

'Let . Me . Go' she repeated when he did not even move a muscle for a few seconds.'You think I haven't tried THAT' the anguish in that voice was unmistakable.

Awww totally felt for Arnav.. Man is helplessly in love , I hope he showers his love on Khushi , she does need & deserve it .. And we can see flickers of passion in Arnav & Khushi Interesting , very interesting ... Waiting for next update...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow...dhamaka update...future mrs.raizada just rocked...love it...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti46

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khushi is out of love with rishabh,may be it was illusion for,living in a dream..offcourse when u didnt get any response from side u slowely start forgetting abt it but then also a tiny hope remain always..

para 4 showed,despite how much she is sunshine for others ,se has her own probs and she had to deal alone with it..
she needs someone in this matter,any girl would not want any drama on her marriage...its 2nd time for her..

study,,,,
oohoo,,poolside much better hota..koi naa..



now THEMOST AWAITED CONVERSATION
i was glad to read so much arnav's line...i assumed much cajoiling from khushi's side ,and that wat happened..their whole conversation was like

ek main ,aur ek tu
tere piche piche main
mere aage aage tu..

'Because.. because ...ummm... just because I said that I need time to think doesn't necessarily means that I wanted to marry him. He is my friend and I needed to handle him with respect and care. I can not be rude to him. He is my friend for ten years Arnavji, ten years


this para was so good...she is so right she cant leave her 10 year old friend,she had a crush on him but now when she is out with it,,,i guess its ok .

TRUST.the word,,,i think from now on arnav needs to belive this word very often,her future wife cant ask everytime
"do you trust me na"
offcourse he can take time,but he better start working on this very soon

'And what if you betray me after marriage?' he questioned tilting his head a little.

'I have done it before. I can do it again' he was riding high on retaliation.

how much i back arnav,this was not right .ok he was riding high on emotions so just blurted out ,but then also he cant hurt khushi in this way..
she is innocent in this whole rishabh-asking her-for marriage-front of arnav-fiasco..\

i guess its same innocence for which he has fallen for..(not lovE)AND as convo was faling in arnav; favour tables do turned..

and then
the classic pulling-trapping -to the -study door happend
thanks anonyji ji, y toh pichle update mai hi ho jana chahiye tha..😆
but better late than never.

Sorry
Listen to me Khushi. I said I am sorry dammit'

'Please Khushi. Let me explain'

haye ladoo,good going girl 5 second k andar these 3 precious words from sadu...not bad...khushi hi sudhar sakti h ise...😆

arnav you cant hurt her ,she is your oxygen..last evening's result was suffred by your room..u cant let her slip ..


She looked away. But her resistance subsided considerably for he was standing close, not touching but still, close. A shiver hummed down her spine, which she desperately willed to go away.


haule haule ho jayega pyar..

'Let . Me . Go' she repeated when he did not even move a muscle for a few seconds.

'You think I haven't tried THAT' the anguish in that voice was unmistakable.

i ws wide eyed.arnav singh raizada and blurting feelings,,cute..but then his damned control..he stopped,,yeah night nice thing to blame..


'Even if I don't like it. As you husband' he looked at her intently.

'You'll have to trust me Arnavji. Give me chance. I won't let you down' she tried to reason.


seriusly arnav,as your husband..u will dominate her..ageed u r feeling insecure ,,but seriusly give her chance...not every one is like his mother...confusions,smallmistakes,little misunderstandings are part of any relationship...
relationships are not always rosy-rosy

'You've just let me down not too many hours ago, and you are asking for another chance already' he pointedly reminded. 'What's the surety you won't do it again after marriage?'.

Her heart thudded at the mere thought of an allegation of infidelity. Marriage, for her, strongly encompassed an undying devotion to her husband in it. But again, how can she prove it until he marries her. 'I did not Arnavji. Please trust me. It was a momentary slip of tongue. And I'll never even dream of breaking your trust in life... Ever ... I swear on my dead parents' she tried her best still.



for the last line i wanted to smack arnav's head..this was too much ..he brought her till the point thst she had to bring her parents.good thing was that he understood in next para and made up..





now wat wedding,yes yes...give good wedding update..just like indian weddings are big ,fat and yeah khushi;s birthday...
ab toh khushi n bhi bata diya...ab toh gift dena hi parega,,,,u cant escape from it


He looked at her olive green eyes that were looking back at him innocently and apprehensively. She doesn't even realize the magnitude of power she holds over him, does she? Well, that was part of her charm too.


ok spo pointed this line ,spo i saw this linetoo...but wat caught my eyes was...



The mild fragrance that wafts in the air around a rose bush laden with beautiful supple roses, particularly after the rains. Up close, he had acutely registered today, Khushi smells just like that. And when touched, his grip on the knob tightened, the feel of her skin is same as the petals of those very flowers. His irises darkened for the briefest second,


dont worry arnav ,even my eyes got widened after reading this..😛
i think my RA (romance addicted)partners will agree on this

P.S-wat do you think of last line suchi and bindu di??😆

P.P.S-hmm so many update dialogues,sorry anonyji..cant help it..

"the feel of her skin is same as the petals of those very flowers
went to dream land
btw..started to think..which place they ll go for honeymoon
ps: hope ..suchi does the same



Edited by thulasi_arshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
as always a beautiful update..
so she finally realize that she does not love rishab..
why arnav always hurt her...but i know he wont hurt her intentionally.. but still..
loved they way khushi handles the situation...they r totally opposite in everything..
but that why opposite attracts..just waiting for marriage rituals which we missed in MKM1
hope to see some naughty or romantic side of arnav..we all know it not possible but u can make him😆 do..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mind blowing chapter...
I love the desire he has for her...

I love the way they talked and made everything okay between them..

Love the way they fight.
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was awsum chapter good that khuhsi clear his doubt ...
continue soon
thanks for pm

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