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Srilatha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part one was really nice with some romantic touch .

Coming to part 2 yes I was in tears , because I have seen my dear one loose her father in an accident and I know how much she cried and how much she misses him. Here Arnav lost his whole family 😭 . Yes sometime GOD is really cruel we dont know why he does and in return what he gives us.

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 11 years ago

#482

res me n

I was almost first di to be first bt damn i gt second 😭😭

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Part I

Khushi is such a impatient soul loll raizada effect u see 😳😳 And wooo arnav ignored her royally i mean khushi ko ignore kiya😆😆

Diii i said u na mjhe woh lehenga pic dekhna tha😡 were is it u described it so beautifully bt were is it my imagination is nt woking on it

Diamonds ommmfffggg did he really put diamonds on her lehenga

She presumed it was payal lehenga wich she is ogling on bt actually it was for her awww how happy arnav must be seeing her soo happy wid d lehenga designs

I cnt wait for his when and where now bt if i think it should be farmhouse night onlybcz honeymoon is too ahead to wear may be he is waiting for her cycles 🤣 to get over

Sometimes she act stupid really lol 😆 i found everytym only 🤣

She was sad bcz she didnt enjoyed her marriage rituals and arnav consoling her was d awesome part i enjoyed dat part

Again monkey gang wat is it i m confused😕 may be i m to naive in al dis till nw..😛😛

I prefer the second dance in dere room wich arnav said he is ready to do in dere room i m sure khushi also must be waiting for dat dance

Hayeee i so loved dere collection talks mjhe v dekhna hai☺️ wat ol r dere in d collection to knock arnav down waisa isnt he already knocked down by khushi last night in night attiire😆😆

Loll payal mom is praising her and she is only thinking of him in dis praise 😳

Now he is jealous and thinking all gutter abt payal cousins also trust u raizada to think of somethng sort of this😡😡

Payal teasing was simply awesome

Cousins need to be approved kab se 🤣 🤣

Loll ab akash taking a nap ismein v raizada ka prblm hai😕😕

Akash is such a tease mann bt i loved his teasing specially in all dese matters😆😆

Part II

I m happy everyone liked d lehenga arnav made for payal poor soul trying so hard to hide d lehenga of khushi frm her😳😳

D whole convo btwn arnav and payal was so emotional mann i was cryng reading dat part 😭😭

Payal also played a major role in arnav khushi life along wid shashi wich i feel she helped arnav in d bery beginning and also she made khushi realized arnav loves her and only her 😛😛

Bichara arnav khusji ka crazy antics ka aga hamesha haka baka reh jata hai 😆

Did u just talk to the baby 🤣 ommgg dis is indeed funny loll dii love u damnit soo muchh 🤗

Nice and most awesome way to divert mind of mrs raizada 😳😳

The kiss and khushi pevet mind thinking was hilarious hormones ☺️

Indeed she is impossible mr raizada

Did he just talked to him like he is speaking to any business client of him😲😲

Shashi is damn smart i must say

Diii mjhse nai hoga d farmhouse part is too emotional

I dnt think i will be able to make justice to wat u wrote

Hope u knw wat i m saying waisa i already have said u wat i think of it

Loved it

muahhh di

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#483

OMG...Di...the lehenga...its description...so beautiful...mujhe yeh wala lehenga pehenna hai Di...

THIS is for HER...wow...and poor girl is feeling jealous...and little sad...Aww...but her expression when time comes, will b worth it...and her husband who understands every tiny details of her cant possibly miss it...

Aaww...Khushi is feeling sad that they didnt have an elaborate wedding...and his instant reply if she wanna get married again...

we know he is just joking...but his this gesture is really sweet...

and they might not have the best wedding,but it was way too better than a much lavish one...

and dance with the monkey gang and dance with him...ufff Di...how much i love this line...

"I dont care what you wear but make sure this is always exposed. Every single min, Every single event, I wanna see it all the time."...Haye...besharam Raizada...

Awwee...Arnav is tensed about Payal's cousins age...possessive man...

Akash fall asleep due to nervousness...he is really crazy...loved Arnav-Akash's constant little jibs...and Akash teasing Khushi...

Arnav-Payal convo was beautiful...I just adore the friendship they share...and then Khushi joined them...her amazing words...got emotional once again Di...and Khushi's baby talk is really cute...

WOW...loved the way Arnav distract her...and their romantic moment...awesome...

Arnav called her dad to invite...Ufff, this man is still like a stubborn sulking kid when it comes to Shashi...

OMG...the farm house is so beautiful...both within & outside...good choice Di...

AND finally his opening up...Rona aagaya Di...when he was telling about the pop-corn incidence, automatically tears came out Do...then remembering Anjali...his parents...why so much pain one has to face Di...feeling really bad...then he started pouring out about their death...so much pain...how did this man survived di...may b Khushi is right,he had to go through this, may b because he was the strongest man who could deal with such loss...but why does he deserve this...WHY...

Kya aaj rulana itna jaroori tha Di...mom is panicking why am I crying...waiting for next part...only that can save me now...

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 11 years ago

#484

Part 1-

Khushi child like excitement 2 see d lehenga n her reaction after seeing it ws Perfect... Wat d??? D lehenga had DIAMONDS in it??? Well wen Arnav is wrkng on sumthng it has 2 b UNIQUE... 😉

OMG!!! D lehenga is 4 her wich shez assuming 4 Payal... Screaming... He ws doing tht torture on her jst 2 c her expressions... Devil Raizada... 😈 Poor gal, she wsnt able 2 hide her disappointment n jealousy 4m her Shaitaan hubby's eye...

Getting married 4 d secong time????? Plzzz do tht... I wanna c dem getting married whole heartedly... 😃

I am sure you got your monkey gang in Payal's wedding and if you are not satisfied with that I am all ready to dance with you every night in our room. -This one cracked me up n made me blush too.. 🤣 ☺️ (i wud luv 2 c dere DANCE SESSION) 😳

WHY DONT YOU... (Gutter brains at wrk) ☺️ 🤬

I so luvd Khushi's jealousy n Arnav's irresponsible side... 😆 😉

I so luvd d way Khushi challenged him 2 knock off his senses... I'm so waiting 4 it... Arnav's fantasy 2 expose her belly button in watever she wears made me think all scandalous... 😳

Possessive Raizada... I'm so luvng HIM... Hez so damn cuteee... 😃

I so luvd d way Akash teases Khushi... I wish 2 happen it soon.. 😉 😳

So, Khushi is dancing n I'm still confused abt Arnav... 😕

Part 2-

D way Arnav explained Payal her n Akash's importance in hsi lyf ws beautifully written... (Including Khushi's presence) 👏

1 Highlight of d update- You have no idea what you gave ME Payal, you gave my lost part, MY LIFE back. 👏 👏 👏

I luvd d Khushi's baby talk... Thts so cuteee... Arnav might nt be as crazy as Khushi bt hez no less... To divert her attention 4m d lehenga he seduced her... 😆 Well no complains coz i luvd it... ☺️

Evn I'm waiting 2 c hw despo Mr. Raizada is n wat capabilities Mrs. Raizada have... 😆 😉 😳 ☺️

I'm glad tht Arnav invited Khushi's parents personally, though he did tht 4 his beloved wife bt it ws commendable... 👏

D farmhouse is beautiful... I cn understand hw diff it mst b 4 Arnav 2 step in dere... D name gvn 2 d FH is beautiful... N I also luvd tht Khushi vaguely remembers tht place...

Popcorn fight made me smile while Anji's bedroom, Arnav's parents bedroom made me cry at d sm tym n dats d magic wich only u cn create... 👏

I'm gald tht Arnav is letting out his emotions bt I feel bad 4 Khushi coz shez feeling helpless at d moment... Wen u c ur luvd one cry in front of u it feels like sumthng is shredding ur heart into pieces... 😭

I luvd d way Khushi comforted him by telling him hez Precious n stroking his hair as he liked though unconsciously... 😃

😭 **Last portion- Cnt comment on dis, Sowwy** 😭

Since u hv planned 2 gv me an emotional roller coaster ride I ws all geared up 2day. Bt ye aur kitna chalega??? 😕 😆 Luvd d update... Cocktail of emotions... Do I need 2 tel u more or r u tired of hearing it 4m me again n again??? 😆 😕

U r my rockstar ⭐️ n ILU... Muahhh... ❤️

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#485

resss
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I couldn't stop my tears from rolling down my eyes :'(
this was so painful!
we can never imagine what he had gone through..
he lost his parents when he was only a teenager!
why god did that to him???
sigh :(
poor him..
I'm glad that he has khushi beside him..
supporting him always :(
he designed a lehenga for her :O
awwwrrr that was so sweet of him :)
I m waiting to know how would khushi react after knowing that this lenhenga is for her not for payal!!
hope Arnav would be better soon :')
I wanna see him teasing khushi, him naughty side :)
I can't saw him like this :(
waiting to read about Payash's marriage ;)
P.S. 👏 👏 for you for writing such a brilliant story :)
you portrayed Arnav's emotions brilliantly :) Hats off

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indhuza

@indhuza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#486

just awesome...was crying while reading it...😭

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#487

this ff is just brilliant. love how arnav n khushi remains so much connected to each other. he is so much emotionally bonded to her that he cudnt see her in any sort of sadness or pain. love how he has placed her in a higher pedestal. waiting to read further for all the romance n the excitement of payash's wedding..