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l.savitree

@l.savitree

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#271

A marvellous ,lovely, cute & full of emotions update😭..beautifully well written👏...love it❤️

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#272

Thanx for amazing update mr n mrs raizada mising eachother kushi get imotional after skech arnav potrate they r realy into each other koi kisisey itna pyar kar sakta hai this line he may live without his parent but cant survive without her make me cry i think arnav go to her parent house to get her curious toknnw about farmhouse n pam tree update soon

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#273

That was such sweet part
The way they missed each other, hayyee how romantic
Especially when she turns and run to hug him, too good yaar
Pls do continue soon
Thanx

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#274

Wow they are really soul mates and the update is very romantic

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Vithagan2304

@Vithagan2304

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#275

ju luvd it, sh arnav cums to get khshi bak

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Arshifan4life

@Arshifan4life

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Love the update
I love the fact that u give multiple updates at once makes me feel I am.actually in the story amaozng update
And like they say distance makes love grow that is what happened with arshi in this ipdate loved it cnt wait to see what u have planned with the palm tree

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arshi_1982

@arshi_1982

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#277

The whole update was just Awww... both r so into each other.

While reading the first para there was just one song going on in my mind "haye haye yeh majboori yeh mausam aur yeh doori, teri do takiyo di naukri mein mera lakhon ka saavan jaye"...

Along with the love, u beautifully brought out the pain, the hurt of loving somebody so much. U described it so well what it means when people say "It hurts to love".

Ye Yaad hai aapki ya yaddon main aap ho ?

Ye khuab hai aapka ya khuabon mein aap ho?

Hum nahin jante bas itna batadon ke,

hum jaan hai aapki ya aap humari jaan ho...

The overall romance between them was so cute sometimes and sometomes so overwhelming..The phone convo between A n K takes me back to my teens... they r just so cute.

Poor Garima, i thought her husband would explain her in detail about those atrocious marks 😉

Edited by arshi_1982 - 11 years ago

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45678

@45678

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#278

loved it. its fab. omg they love each other so much. eager to know why khushi's life is like this.

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Pari

@ammavedu80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#279

Wonderful update
All the parts are good
Arshi romance is nice

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#280

first of all i missed u so so so much...u very well knew how much i do missed u:)...i wanted to give answer to ur question sub say pehlay ...me sure our arnav will be cuddling her soon in her parent's home :)...he cant bear a broken khushi :)...lovely note for nishu...thats very sweet gesture of ur deeps hmmm till suhag raat ...nishu get ready girl :)

awesome update...loved the fact that u r giving long parts as it gives good continuity to the scene...grasps more attention ...which results in immense pleasure :)

simply fantastic and fabulous romance of a couple in love is going here...loving it to the core...

loved there missing chit chat in the office...loved the way khushi has drawn his eyes...woh bhee with glint of shine ...woow must be beautiful eyes deep...:)

hyeee kiya kiss thi...lovely pic sent by arnav to her in her msg...that whole scene was damn awesome romantic...

loved it the way both can feel each other distress,pain silence ...awesome beautiful...kabhi she understands and kabhi he ...woow so sweet of them...the way he closed the topic btw khushi and client was like woow...poor aman ...but thanks to khushi arnav controlled himself...

hyee kiya passionate kiss was there on the couch...

yaar deeps wt so important in number 2...i mean no touching due to chum for 2 days...no spicy food for 2 days due to ahem ahem...hehehehe...u noticed that ????? lol

uff and superb moments btw the two when she felt spice on her lips and he giving due treatment to her pain...:)😆

well that sambhal k rakhna is wow line forsure...loved it ...:)

infact there whole chit chat in car...there craving for each other...that sense of missing ...desire to be with each other ...all written beautifully deeps...very emotional ...heart can feel for there pain...the things which both missed she from childhood and he after his parents death...that all pain can be feel at heart the way u have written his strong decision for khushi to stay at payal's place which in return brought khushi to her parental home ...leaving behind his ego...was like uff and wow yaar...awesome

hyeee out side the house the romance at its best moments :) :)...even shashi ji enjoyed it ...lol

poor garima...that was indeed hilarious...loved there 4am phone talks the most ...:)

the story is going: awesome,lovely,superb,fantastic,fabulous,amazing,fun,with damn hot kisses...hyeee,uff and wow never missing the lips :)...and this smile :)...woh tu kabhi kahin jati hee nahi these days after reading ur hats off writing skills yaar...in short tussi great ho jee...ok me shutupwa now...love u loads 🤗

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