Smitar's: Saving Khushi#3 Last Part Part 17(1)(2) Pg 1, 28 (15/10)

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rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: B.S.I_Love_You

Di.. Aap bhi na. 😳 ( anjali isstlye 😆 )
Aap. Humari Fruit &Nut bas... 🤗

Ab hum Khush hua!😆

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smitar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: rulama

But I like fruit and nut only!😭

Rash is the fruit & I am the nut😆..ha..ha..

Smita

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Hetal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: smitar

Rash is the fruit & I am the nut😆..ha..ha..

Smita
Oh meri Fruit aur Nut zara paas toh aana woh kya hai na muje fruits bhi pasand hai aur nuts bhi..aur muje kuchh mitha khaane ka mann kar raha hai..😳😉

BY THE WAY

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priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#294

diwali came and asusual khushi is busy with her preparations

khushi feeling tired(something fishy).but past is haunting arnav.

another red saree added to her wardrobe(saree is superb)

nani's friends taunting khushi.poor girl hearing all thses bcoz of arnie's ego.

but arnav once again asked sorry for all his mistakes.

khushi is preggy.

best gift for arnav.

loved the last line,she will be the first sanka devi ever.

ENDED

WHY SO SOON

WILL WAIT FOR NEXT FF

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rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: Divyahet
Reshu dear fantastic job,
loved both interpretations..

BULWARK...👏
and the quote you used just perfect ⭐️

Part17/2..again beautiful interpretation Reshu..

SAVING KHUSHI is about saving Khushi from Shyam. It is also the saving of the Khush or Happiness of Raizadas' and Guptas' in general and Arnav, Anjali and Khushi in particular. By putting many bad memories to rest they have made a new life for themselves. It was a beautiful narration that began with the Diwali, where the lights went out plunging into darkness and ended with another Diwali, with the lights glowing bright. Lovely story indeed! Wonderful work Smita.👏👏👏
ADDENDUM:

It has been a lovely journey and my heartfelt thanks to all the readers for their immense encouragement. Thank you dears.
You are welcome dear...but you deserve more so a 🤗 and lots of love for you..
Reshu I would like to thank you for such a beautiful interpretation on each update.
Iss friday ko dry day lagega..
no update ..
but eagerly waiting for the next story...

just take care of yourselves and
love you my beautiful ladies.

Hetal, Hetal,Hetal!! Unbelievable!!!😲

Hailing from Gandhiji's state you are crying that Friday ko dry day lagega! What the!!😉

Rashmi.

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#296

@Smita: Here are my comments for Chapter 16 and 17(1) and 17(2).

Chapter 16:

Reliving old times! 😉 Arnav teasing Khushi! 😆 I totally loved the way you have portrayed Arnav in this particular chapter! 😳

"But I have a wife who, despite all my precautions, crawls all over me at night..." he whispered.

Khushi pouted.

"She sleeps in taekwondo poses all night, wrestles with the covers, coils her legs around me, climbs all over me, and holds me by my collar..." he teased, his eyes burning in to hers.

Khushi went all rosy.

This was tooo ADORABLE! ❤️

Then came,

Khushi growled, "Who was the one who said that he hated to share a room with me?"

"Who was it?" Arnav asked, all innocent. "He must have been a fool."

Never in my dreams could I have thought of this! Flawlessness! ❤️

Then Arnav teased her even more by saying Good Night and turning the other way, not facing her! 😆 Finally he gave up and loved her! ❤️

I'm waiting to know what happens next! *big hug* 🤗

~x~

Chapter 17 (1):

Diwali after marriage! Khushi upset remembering the previous Diwali!

Arnav gifted her a red saree to wipe out the bad memories from her mind! 😳 Hawww.. The ladies insulted Khushi? 😡 Glad everyone threw them out of the house! 👏

Going to Next Chapter! 😳

~x~

Chapter 17 (2):

ENDING? Did I read it right? Last Part? What the!

Must say Smita.. This was one of the most amazing endings to your story!

The conversation between Arnav and Khushi was beyond Brilliant! ❤️ The way they talked out everything that was in their minds! 👏

"Don't give me anymore red saris. I hate the sight of them." Khushi said.

"I won't." Arnav promised, a lump in his throat.

"I burnt the one I wore last Diwali. I will burn this one too." Khushi threatened him.

"Burn it. Look through Di, Mami, & Payal's wardrobes too, and burn every red cloth you can find. Hell, burn the whole house down if you want to." he invited her.

A small smile appeared on Khushi's lips.

"I won't make anymore diya for Diwali." Khushi stated.

"You won't come to my garden to steal mitti anymore?" he asked, disappointment rife in his voice.

"No." Khushi declared.

Arnav sighed, "OK."

"I won't light diya around your pool." Khushi threatened him.

"Oh! Khushi, they look so nice..." His voice died away under her militant eye. "OK." he said, defeated.

"Every Diwali, I will go to Buaji's house. You can sit here listening to witches bitching about me, and I will burst crackers and eat jalebi with my bacha party." Khushi declared.

"No, Khushi. I want to spend Diwali with you. Take me with you." he requested.

"Let me think about it." Khushi pretended to ponder on the issue.

Brilliant! 👏 Flawless! 👏 Beyond Perfection!

Arnav gifted her a necklace and jalebis! 😆 Khushi gave him the best gift ever!

Pregnancy Test Reports! 👏

Arnav stared at the report once more. He folded it carefully and put it in his pocket. He then lowered himself to his knees at her feet, and touched her tummy with reverent fingers.

"Khushi, our baby..." he said softly, as if scared of disturbing him or her.

"Ji." Khushi smiled.

"I will take care of you. Make sure that nothing bad ever happens to you..." he promised the unborn child, tears clogging his throat. "I will be a better father than mine ever was to me." He kissed her tummy repeatedly.

He buried his face against the soft skin of her stomach. She could feel his tears against her skin. She held him close for a long moment.

Khushi refused Jalebis! 😲 Well, things happen in pregnancy! 😆

Beautiful Ending! Loved it to bits! ❤️

All the 3 Chapters were flawless Smita! 👏 Brilliant Ending of a beautiful story! 👏

Waiting for your next - 'Marrying Khushi'

~x~

@Rashmi - Loved all the Interpretations of chapters 16, 17(1) and 17(2)! 👏 Thanks for your emails and PMs for interpretations.. Love you! ❤️ 🤗

xoxo

Mrina

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#297

Sorry for being SUPER LATE!

Love u both! ❤️

Mrina

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tanu_15

@tanu_15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#298

finally another story comes 2 end.
loved it
i hope u will write a new one...
rpy soon

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JCJS

@JCJS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#299

Ha such a beau ending really felt bad for khushi but things changed awesome. Ha how cute they are silly crazy lovely Wht not. It just ended unbelievable. Excited for the next series.

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ara_000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#300

this is simply a perfct ending wit khushi being pregnant

loved it how arnav said her sorry nd d way she answered abt burning all d red saris nd going to her buaji's house nd arnav pleading her to take him away wit her was simply adorable..!

nd finally wen she gave him d report of her being pregnant nd d way arnav reacted was beautifully penned down..!

lovely chappy ❤️

their promises,aww adorable

awsum ending..!

loved it to bits ❤️