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To begin with Khushi's monologue and her day dreaming of her first ever kiss was so blissful and of course the bubble was waiting to burst unfortunately.

The main argument between Arnav and Khushi... i absolutely loved it.

The arrogance , the frustration , the helplessness and that ego getting hit was brilliantly portrayed for Arnav. I loved his dialogues ...And what i enjoyed the most was the backdrop setting with the rain and the little gestures you keep implying at to the readers every now and then with his hand movements , his body language in totality and the works.. really helps to see the image in your mind while reading..

You used the iconic ARHI scene in a very unique Sandhya way... loved that description as well.

Coming to out heroine , jhansi ki rani quite literally...

Loved how you have portrayed her as someone with her head firmly on her shoulders and the contrast of in her image with what this chapter opened where we saw a young girl experiencing her first kiss and day dreaming , confused about her feelings in comparison to this young woman who spoke her mind without any hesitation or any preambles .. perfectly captured.

He kissed her again .. forcefully not done Raizada at all... but knowing you i am sure he will repent badly for this act ...

Now she called him bas***d and he said indeed !!! What is this hinting at ???

Loved it Sandy !!!!!

Humans have this innate quality whereby they worry about the future that is yet to come rather than enjoy the present that is knocking at your door incessantly.

So true this statement is Sandy! While people don't like to admit to it, this is quite the norm so constantly worry about the future.

Now on to the chapter. Well quite a turn of events. There are ups and downs in each love story as no single person is perfect, so it's fine to see both sides. Since you mentioned William Wordsworth this quote came into my mind as I read the chapter.

What we need is not the will to believe, but the wish to find out. by William Wordsworth

So Arnav asked Khushi for her opinion and she gives it to him honestly. Of course an angry Arnav Singh Raizada is just as you said, one that is childish and totally loses sight of the consequences of his action. I loved how you termed that Arnav as lord of fire and Khushi as no damsel in distress ..

Arnav's anger and Khushi's spunk is engrained. I loved how she gave it to him good and simply didn't back down. The truth stung Arnav and he reacted, which is what he does. As I mentioned before, people with tempers often love quite passionately so can't wait to see how their love story continues to evolve.

Absolutely wonderful writing Sandy!