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sruthick

@sruthick

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#371

Awesome update...
Lovd d scene they were taking Photos...
Nd Shyam helpd Khushi at d corrct time..!! Y ..??
Did he witnessd Arshi's kiss...???
Nd that last part...
Ow did Arnav kno that Khushi s ther behind d bushes..??
Cntinue soon

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#372

Loved it...an amazing update...

Arnav is sooo scared...

But I can't imagine what's going to happen as Arnav saw khushi Eve's dropping..?

Will he get really mad at her...? Looks so as he addressed her as Ms. Guptha n not as Khushi...

Can't wait for next update

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dsbj

@dsbj

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#373

wonderful chapter..luved it.. Waiting for next 1 eagerly.

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swapna

@sindukur

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#374

superb update. cant wait for the next. please update soon

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#375

amazing update... Very well written... Loved raizada family bonding... Khushi was totally into arnav and vice versa... So arnav decided to work in US inspite of handling family business!!! Both brother and sister are so much into their past and not ready to see what and who is with them especially arnav... Anjali probably is trying but she understand family bonding which arnav is lacking somewhere... Oops khushi heard their convo and arnav knew that she was there all along still he didnt stop their convo... Continue soon... Thanks for the pm

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#376

Loved the homely festive touch.

A lot of things going on.

The argument was intense.

Looking forward to see how this effects Khushi.

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#377

gr8 update...!

so will khushi be able to make arnav see some sense? i m not saying that what arnav wishes to do is not appropriate, but family business..well, i dunno...

so whats gonna happen now!!

curious!

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Diya Ganguly

@Careless_Artist

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#378

Excellently written chapter specially Arnav and Anjali's feeling during their conversation...
So Arnav was restricting his feelings for Khushi as for him money is above everything in this world...
Ofcourse being in The situation at his teenage made him or forced him to think like that..
On the other hand Khushi is dreaming and feeling guilty for dreaming like that way for Arnav..
What will happen next I've no idea about it..
So waiting!!

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#379

Loved it...

Khushi was guilty of hiding such thing from Anya... This shows how strong relation she shares with anya... but why did shyam helped her?? Its not that she was with shyam the whole time...

Arnav and Anjali argument was really intense and painful... Arnav should leave his past and move on... Its hurt his family to see him like that... He still doesn't think them as his family... It will only give him pain nad loneliness... Starting his own Business is not wrong but the purpose and the driving force behind it is not right...

He knew that khushi is listening to their conversation... How??

Continue soon...

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Arnima

@Eternalallure

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#380

RES

UNRES!!!!

Splendid update, S...I loved it to bits...!!!

You are perhaps the first writer who sometimes give the update before the designated time and that is a plus in itself...it pops at a time when I am not at all expecting it..😆

I like the pace at which the story is progressing...it doesn't drag too much and is not stagnant.

The camaraderie between all of them and the ease with which they all converse with each other is wonderful...it surmounts the awkwardness that may arise between new acquaintances and that is only possible when people are liberal and accepting, just like all of them.

Even Devyani, despite being from a different era altogether shows openness of mind and behaves like the perfect matriarch and hostess. She has her own individual personality and an air of sophistication, regality and authority...and is as central to the story as any of them.

Arnav and Khushi moments were, though scarce, beautiful even when they did not have any direct conversation.

And I love this Akash...he is witty and goofy and fun and...alone. Where is his Payalji????? Or is it someone else for him???? I want to know. And fast. Period.

Finally the icing on the cake was the argument between Arnav and Anjali.

It showed how emotionally deranged, broken and insecure they are still and Arnav's decision has definitely steered the story in a different direction. I would love to see where it goes from here.

Well done.. and thanks for the pm.😊

Edited by Eternalallure - 11 years ago

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