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leanne_1983

@leanne_1983

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Posted: 11 years ago

#471

Wonderful chapter. Beautifully written. I am glad you left the drama or whatever is to follow for the next chapter. This was Arnav and Khushi's Chapter of Love. Let them enjoy it. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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mrignayani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#472

The best part was that it was a take on the scene in the serial!

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Veena..

@Veena..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#473

uff zabardast chapter
loved ur update
finally they are one now
superb dear
you r the best

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prati_incept

@prati_incept

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Posted: 11 years ago

#474

Chapter 9

yes.. he might just happen to be on wrong place at wrong time..

and now in hiding..

hope everything ll be alright soon..

... and they met...:)

thank you for PM

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#475

That was just wow!!!
I can't believe they are one now

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prati_incept

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Posted: 11 years ago

#476

chapter 10

oh man.. that was fast...

caring.. passionate.. and sensuous..

everything that should be and more...

perfect...

waiting for more

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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Posted: 11 years ago

#477

Woah.

One day, I'll love to see this story being played on the big screen. It surely deserves it. It just that good and picturesque. Love it.

Just read the last two updates right now. And what a turn the story has taken...only for the best. Honestly, I'm all for separation, angst, and love that only gets stronger by each passing day.

I knew something big had to happen...finally..for all the barriers to break between them.

Absolutely loved the scene where Khushi was waiting for him on the steps of the ghats. What a wonderful painting it would be, imagine, if someone was to paint it. A wife waiting for her husband to come home. Beautiful scene.

And when they met...everything had changed. All they could manage to do be in each other's arms and take in and share the love and the longing they had felt for each other and couldn't show it for two long years.

I'm sure you had the hut-scene from IPK in mind while writing the tenth chapter, but it felt even better than that and made much more sense. Love how you write these love-making scene, Jen. They're beautiful and discreet and don't give much away. And I like how you do it without the mention of too much anatomy.

Looking forward to the last two chapter 😊