FF: A white marriage Chap 13, Pg 59 , 19/01

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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

I dont know how , but I did it...I missed the previous version...
So for me this is not a mind refresher...its a completely new one...

Coming to the point...
Its an amazing concept...a really impressive one for me...
Its very interesting and wondrously penned down one...

Cont. soon...

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priyanka

@priyu03

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Awww ur starting this story again 🤗

i read it Ariya version before 😉

coming to update

Awsome update

Arjun give Rathod responsiblity to tke care of Aryan 😆

yeah Arjun will really thinking that Aryan is Sakshi's and Shree's child 😆

loved it

cont soon

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

unres

I haven't read the previous version.

superb start👏

loved it

cont soon😊

Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: eshasrk
Awesome start...my gosh I love it. This is completely different than what we are used to and I just love it...
Gosh...what happened to Shree ???? Since when did he become so irresponsible ????
I am so waiting for what will happen next

btw Arjun is behaving like a real jerk 😡...calling Aryan " thing" ...and oops I think he thinks Saakshi is Aryan's mom

Dont hate Arjun too much, he isnt a bad person at all😉

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

awesome update
glad you decided to continue this story
loved the changes
would love to read this version
can't wait
continue soon

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Tinu tinu..thats just awesome dr...i totally love this new concept... everything is different and very much interesting...hoping to get the next update soonish 😳 😳

Me as well first time im reading it and am totally liking it 👏 👏

Thank you for continuing it 🤗 🤗

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Nazneen

@naz_2012

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

amazing concept tina..i jus loved the plot of dis story..its really different n interesting...plzzz cont soon..n a big thankx fr continuing white marriage! 😃

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Shanzy

@-Shanzy-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Wow Tina I love the concept. Beautifully written. Continue soon 😳

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

ahann...White Marriage backkk...dat too with tadka of Arakshi...
AAAWWWSSSOOOMMM

even for th 1st version i had been in love vid this story and concept...

i hope u even change ankita's character...no offence tina...but would like to read abt some new girl...hope u dnt misunderstand my request...

continue soon..

love
Aisha

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth
ahann...White Marriage backkk...dat too with tadka of Arakshi...
AAAWWWSSSOOOMMM

even for th 1st version i had been in love vid this story and concept...

i hope u even change ankita's character...no offence tina...but would like to read abt some new girl...hope u dnt misunderstand my request...

continue soon..

love
Aisha

Thanks dear, well of course i will write on Arakshi 😛

Yep will be removing Ankita, and Ayesha will be here this time...

Though i havent decided as what yet, cause Aisha cant be Sakshi's younger sister

That's was some of the changes i mentioned😛