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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay feeling really sad for arnav!
Payal's need for baby was greater than her need for him? What about her love for him? Seriously sad !
He definitely deserved better!
N he is so sweet! He is only thinking about her happiness and not about his! I just love the way he handles her with so much patience! Every time!i have already fallen for him! Kids no kids i dnt care!!
N now i feel that since HE deserves a person who would love him more than anything and give him all the happiness, khushi is best suited for him! Look at her dedication and love for him!
15 yrs difference is not a big one! Look at michael doughlas and catherine zeta jones!! God knows how many yrs difference they have still so happy!
N khushi seems a go getter to me! Liked it will have it!
I think devyani will help in speeding up the process rather than impeding it!
N what? Shyam ki waapasi! Yahan bhi!!!😕!! Usi ne kidnap kiya hai!

Will this make arnav realise his true feelings for khushi or atleast how important she is for his existence!!
Waiting for the next part!!
Eid Mubarak to evryone!
Edited by Nandz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update!! Felt sorry for Arnav, please give the next update sooon!!!!!!😊
Edited by anu1017 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG OMG!!!...is tht shyam!!...wo kaise aa gya wapis!!...😭
ok let me start wid d start...
thnx for making it short wid arnav-payal story!!...
i didnt lyk payal much!!...
khushi is ri8...if she choose babies over arnav , she really didnt love him...
loved d way khushi showed him all d things related to him, all der memories!!...
loved khushi who fight strongly for her love!...n she dnt wnt nyone to belittle her feelings for arnav!!...
i really respect her for tht!!...
everything was gng positive!!...mujhe laga tha ke nani khushi ka sath degi after knwing her strong feelings for arnav!!...
n arnav should hv every rights to get his happieness!!!...
bt d last few lines!!!...OMG!!!!...i m hell scared nw!!...
khushi uske pas pohchi kaise!!...😲😲
hw dare tht creep!!!...😡😡
khushi ko kuchh hoga to nhi na!!!...
i jst hope arnav wl find her very soon...
jst cant wait for nxt part...
Edited by nirmal1992 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I dont like Payal! What ever feeling she had for Arnav was not love or not enough love to stay with him no matter what! And she married in 6 months? I hate when family come between a husband and wife. But in this kind of situation its happens alot that parents put pressure on their children to take divorce. Its not wrong to thing that there child can do much better but what they fail to understand is that it can happen to their child as well. What will have happened if Payal couldn't have child in her second marriage as well and whats wrong in adoption? Why is some people against it?
I am sure that Payal was not a match for Arnav to have child. Its happen you know. Both should match in every way. Sure that Arnav will have a child with someone else if not Khushi. Why did he give so easily. It was not a never in his case
I known couple who try to have children for years , it was not never in their case but it was hard for them. The husband didn't want to leave his wife and they tried adoption as well but it took lots years and it killed their energy as well. In the end the wife told the husband that he should marry some else because his was their only child and the deserves grandchildrens. End they got divorce. It took few years for the husband to get married again and just after year he got his first baby. It was hard for the wife to start over again but then there was guy who knew her and was widower. They got married and she thought that she will never have a baby because she was sure it was her fault that she couldn't have a child in her first marriage and by her second she was pretty old as well. But miracle happens and she got pregnant just like that without any problem and now they have pretty girl. Every time I look at her I used to think that some things are not meant to happen.
Anyway why did you bring Shyam? Now what will Arnav do? Arnav still think that Khushi will move on and thats because what Payal did to him! I dont blame him but everyone is not same!
Will this situation bring any new feelings to Arnav?
Edited by opsyellow - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

superb update

thanks for the descriptive flashback of arnav and payal's relation.. in this I am also like khushi😛.
but really felt bad for arnav!!!! and payal how could she do this😡.. if she really loved arnav na, then she will be ready for adoption... coz love is to be with them when they needed you and more importantly when you needed him/her and not abandoning them knowing which thing should be given more importance.. and she just got manipulated by her parents.. gosh she was smart enough to understand what is right for her and what is not!!! it's not like she is baby and her parents are guiding her.. yeah maybe like every parent they were also thinking of their daughter.. but divorce is not an option for this, what if it was other way around...
and so arnav is not impotent but have low fertility, his counts of sperms are low!!! oh thanks for clarifying that!! maybe he can have his own baby with khushi.. cant lose hopes😳
well whatever happened happens for good.. glad payal left arnav so that khushi come to arnav's life, so they can be together
she shows him how much she loves him and how strong her feelings is!!! finally arnav know it!!!
so arnav told nani about talk this!! hope she would do justice to both of them
but dam what happen!? did shyam😡 aka khushi's mama come back and kidnapped her!!?😲 oh shit!!!
hope arnav will find her soon!!!
and also hope that maybe this kidnapping make arnav realize his feelings *fingers crossed*😉
continue soon
Edited by jas0308 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Did payal really loved arnav??? i know children r part of life bt for dat have we really have to let go of our partner,poor arnav he must have gone through so much pain 😭 n top it all she married within six months of her divorce if she have truly luvd him she must have not left him i HATE payal 😡
love dis bold n confident khushi 👏
she have kept everything he have gifted her dats so sweet i love her
y cant arnav understand dat khushi truly luvs him okay i know he understood bt y isnt he giving his life a second chance 🥺
i hope nani supports khushi here n not convince her to forget arnav n move on
shit shit shit this cant happen shyam returned nooo 😲 i hope arnav finds her soon
EID MUBARAK!!!!!
i forgot to mention i really really really luv the way khushi complete arnav's lines

"Khushi, don't you want a little Khushi of your own who looks as beautiful as you with your cute button nose and..."

"...and as handsome as you with your brown, deep, warm eyes" she completed, dreamily while Arnav closed his eyes in impatience.

i m imagining cute little arnav or khushi hayyyeee cant wait for THAT time

Edited by anamnoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Here goes a wonderful update Arnav a man of few words expressing his feelings. Just really felt like slapping that Payal really how mean true love is not ly in happy times to share and b with it's to under go hard ship together hand in hand but this women really ya child is important but to ignore and leave the person for child is mean. She is a coward. Like khushi said she dint love him with full heart. Felt bad for him. And khushi sweet heart she is and the ways he used to explain things to her went as nothing when she showed the things to him. Really this girls true love dedication of her heart to him respect and Wht not everything is just clearly displayed by her. And the high light was when she took him to his room and explained her routine "personal touch" this word brought goosebums. And now nani knows things and I guessed the entry of shyam but not this quick like how the hell he kidnapped her. Did this girl again went out of the home. Now Arnav Will b shattered and the fear Will grip his heart. And this period Will also make him analyse things and her importance in his life. Thks for the mail dear just loved it.
Edited by JCJS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
My heart goes out yo Arnav. The man with a golden heart. Everything you want your man to be - he is that and more . Kind, generous, fair, loving... To have him judged for not being able to procreate - that is what his ex wife did, didn't she? If society has been cruel to women who can't have children, men have had it worse.

But I want to believe and hope. Khushi sees him for who he is not as a breeding stud. And she loves him - how can anyone not!! Hugs to him :)
Edited by meera30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Zehra... I wasn't aware of this SS you know... Now only I found your note on your other post... OMG how can I miss this...??? I want to say a lot more... N I'm planning to edit this comment after reading your latest update... I'm waiting...
EDITED

Zehra... One of the best SSs I have read ... I already knew you are a talented writer.. And I love your writing style to the core... It's unique...👏

I'm not very well with words Zehra.. You know that right...??? Things which my eye caught

Pace of the story... It's the most favorable... I mean each and every happening is engraved in readers' heart...

Relationship between ARSHI... It's complicated yet simple... You made me say it by creating every simple scene with such effort...

Including some issues of social relevance: I admire you for that Zehra...

And for the 7th chapter: You were always unpredictable for me... This time is not different too...I LOVE this ARNAV with my whole heart... I'm sure Khushi loves him the way he is...

Latest update is Perfect.. The intensity of Khushi's love touched my heartThis is my Gift for you...

LOVE you Zehra
*Eid Mubarak*
ACHU😳

Edited by arshy4ever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A beautifully written, amazing update. Loved it!

Khushi is right, Payal was never in love with Arnav!
She would have never left Him if she loved him.
The real test of a relationship comes when there
is a hardship.When you love a person, it doesn't change.
Having a baby gives a woman the feeling of content but
for that, you never sacrifice the person you love!

I have seen a couple who had the same problem
but the woman never left him, they had a baby after
6 years of struggle - going through so much pain and
angst that they might never have THEIR baby(not her!).

If Payal loved him even a little she would have
understood what Arnav was going through instead
of thinking about only her...
//You are making me hate this Payal ...a complete
contrast to the Payal of LI. (magic of your writing
again! Making us blend into the story and its
Characters)//

Khushi is deeply, madly in love with Arnav.
She showed Him all the things she did and
opened her heart out to him.But Arnav thinks
he is not the best for her and is not
letting her in..
But as fate says - his heart which was trampled
brutally would be treasured, by Khushi - he deserves it :)


Loved this line in the update:
"If you can't reciprocate my feelings then please don't belittle them" 👏

Edited by Skiran - 12 years ago

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