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shaheeranaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey people!!

I am Shaheera. Reading and writing are the two things i love to do in my free time. I am new on india forums and i am a huge fan of arnav and khushi. lately i have been reading the fan fictions on arhi and i must tell you that all those people out there who are writing these have great minds...

And i guess i realized i wanted to write a fan fiction on them too. I never really posted anything i wrote untill now. So basically this will be the first fan fiction or story (call it what you want) that i ever posted.

I want you people to be generous and kind enough to give me a chance and read the story i came up with. please like if you liked it and comment accordingly. i will be more than happy to have you guys here with me...😊

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The story is about this rising star Arnav Singh who accidentally comes across Khushi Gupta and falls for her at her mere sight. Khushi, who has a huge crush on Arnav already, has no idea what the future holds for her...

How they meet and what changes come in their lives after they confess to each other? and will it all be smooth or will they have to look out for the enemies they never knew existed...??

please read on to find out...

Do let me know how u found d start will be waiting for likes n comments

For future updates buddy me :)

INDEX

CHARACTER SKETCH-below

PROLOGUE-pg 2

CHAPTER 1-pg 3

CHAPTER 2-pg 4

CHAPTER 3-pg 4

CHAPTER 4-pg 5

Edited by shaheeranaz - 11 years ago

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anamnoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

interesting...)

will wait for more updates

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PrInCeSs_dIVa

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Posted: 12 years ago

Will surely read... Thanks for the recommendation anamnoor : )

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arshifan2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

brilliant concept! Would love to read more! Thanx anamnoor for the suggestion! :D

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pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 12 years ago

interesting concept
continue dear
thanx to anamnoor

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shaheeranaz

@shaheeranaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello guys! thnx for ur response.i am extremely happy to know that u people r interested...

so this is the character sketch for the main characters.

Arnav Singh Raizada (Barun Sobti): Age 28, smart, hardworking, charming, handsome and versatile. His nature is polite, patient and down to earth but at the same time he is moody and stubborn. He is an aspiring actor and lives with his parents who were actors too. Marital status- single. So every girl is keeping a close watch on him...

Rudra Singh Raizada (Ram Kapoor): he is an actor and Arnav's father. He was the hotshot of film industry in his young age and married one of his female co-stars. By nature, he is a calm and patient man. And at times when he is too happy and excited, he looks just like a kid who is happy to have his favourite ice cream!

Sarisha Singh Raizada (Gautami Gadgil): she is an actress,wife of Rudra singh raizada and Arnav's mother. Well to be precise, she is a typical indian mother, who cares way too much for her son. (which is good of course). She is very humble, polite and emotional, loves socializing and feeding her son! All in all, she is a great wife and mother.

Khushi Gupta (Sanaya Irani): Age 20,shy and dependent girl with almost no self confidence. Is way too kind to people and does not know how to reject them, when they ask her for favours. Tired of all the bullying by people around her, she decides to live separately for a while with her best friend Aru and tries to bring about change in her attitude.

Rajeev Gupta(Mahesh Thakur): Khushi's father and an industrialist who owns the brand 'Generex' of generators. He is a dedicated man to his family and work. Also has a brighter side when he is with family. He is head strong, bold and confident and head over heels in love with the mother of his kids!

Pooja Gupta (Eva Grover): Khushi's mother and a house wife she is. Is like any other indian mother who wants her daughters to be married off soon. She is an ideal example for a wife, a mother and an amazing chef. Beautiful yet a little shy and hesitant, she can help almost anyone with her philanthropic and kind heart.

Purvi Gupta (Pooja Gaur): Khushi's one and only sibling (elder to Khushi). She looks and is pretty much like her dad while Khushi is like her mom. Free, funny and out going kind of a person she is.

Aru Malhotra (Shruti Seth): she is a strong and confident girl who believes in standing up for women. Also she is Khushi's best friend and inspiration (Khushi is inspired by Aru's guts and confidence). Pretty looking and bold, she can fight off anyone irrespective of the gender and age and without hesitation.

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anamnoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

i love aru's character

arnav n khushi toh mere favourite hi hao so no saying abt them <3

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arshifan2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

that's a very good character sketch! Continue soon because im definitely looking forward to read it! :D

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shaheeranaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thnx guys for ur showing ur interest. i am really happy and grateful to u.

so i wont make u wait any longer. here is the prologue and very soon, i'll be uploading the first chapter..

so read it, enjoy, and please let me know how u liked it...

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shaheeranaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#10

PROLOGUE

"Arnav, get up! This is no time to sleep." I heard a familiar female's voice as she opened the door of my room and flickered the lights on. I pretended I was asleep and didn't respond to her.

"Oh c'mon! you think I don't know you aren't sleeping?!" she said.

"what is it mom?" I asked as I pulled the comforter of my face, my eyes squirting and adjusting to the light.

" we have to go." She said in a serious tone.

"Go where?" I asked, a little puzzled.

"To Arjun uncle's place. They invited us to their get together." she said.

" What? Nooo!! Please!" I started whining. Honestly, I was in no mood of going anywhere.

"you have to come along. I am not going anywhere without you. Besides, I promised Komal I will bring you along with us. It has been quite a while since we last saw them. You have to come." she said with authority in her voice.

Oh great! Absolutely amazing. She promised about my arrival without my consent. I am soo loving it!! " Do I, by any chance have any other option than going along with you guys? I mean, can't I make up for not attending the party, later?" I asked, hoping for her answer to be in my favour. But of course, will she be my mother if she listened to me? hell no!

So there I was, being force fully dragged to a party by my mother with absolutely no enthusiasm or interest what so ever. Welcome to my world...