ArHi SS: Baby, Hold On *Part 5 TROUBLE, Pg 1* (NEW Thread link, pg132) - Page 81

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Posted: 11 years ago
luved d update
khushi n arnav were amazing
waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Just loved it very much...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update... 😉
Mr. sexy want a kiss... haye... 😳
update soon waiting for next update... eagerly...
Love it... ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome!!! Opening with ASR's POV 😃... loved & enjoyed it. Arnav admiring the way her lips shaped like a doughnut, her eyes throwing fiery daggers at him & her mouth following a rhythm of opening & closing but no words aboard; he wondering as to how he got diverted from his work, how she had captured his thoughts & time but then her engaged status hitting his mind which made him curse as to what an absolute wrong match that polka-dot tie wearing, butter slime ball, Jha 😡 was for Sushi; his mind reasoning out to close the gates to her thoughts but his heart still wanting to check if she was comfortable was splendidly written 👍🏼


Oh! Arnav stupefied when he heard Maddy Bua approaching them, he trying to decide as to whether to make a quick & clean escape from her sight or to stay put but time & stubborn Sushi not permitting him, the biggest worry being Khushi waking up & screaming at his slightest swift movement was beautifully penned down


Arnav having to bear Bua's off-tune terrible singing on one hand but on the other hand his tigress's sweet kiss 😃 ringing like a melody in his heart was the highlight


Khushi's dream was fab ☺️ ...she failed to realize that his hands placed on her cheeks was for real last night & not just a dream. She wanting to keep Mr.Sexy out of her mind ... poor girl veggies though fresh can't match Mr.Sexy ... to add more problems to her already perplexed mind & erratic heartbeats there he was Mr.Sexy clad in a leather jacket screaming h.a.n.d.s.o.m.e' which only meant "t.r.o.u.b.l.e"... ... this part was amazing


The last scene where Khushi panicked seeing Bua's friends coming closer to the spot she was in & to her most concern being that Raizada was standing beside her at Lover's Park', first stunned at Arnav pulling her so close to him but then quickly figuring out his plan & she getting into the play, his moan earning gasps from the aunties as well as from her & then his demand for his timely help were fabulous 😉


Polka dot ... butter popping Jha, Ms.Tigress, this was dangerous territory, leave it to Sushi to leave me wide awake ... oh baby ... loved these phrases the most 😃 ❤️ 👍🏼

Thanks for the PM. Eager to read more ... the precap seems awesome ☺️

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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 5 was awesome
Khushi not realising that parts of her dream were actually real
Arnav being attracted to her, getting drawn to her
and the lover's park scene!!! brilliant and hilarious
his demand😲will she do it or. . .
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Posted: 11 years ago
dr Dr...*faintin*... :D t ws Mindblown... blushful...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Teen awesome awesomastic fabulous fantabolous supper superb dhamakay dar chapter tha... loved it... so mr sexy was unable to sleep coz of a certain Sushi n tht Sushi was dreaming a dream of dancing in rain wid tht mr sexy... lol the scene where Arnav put blanket on her n then caress her cheek n she frowned when he withdrew till the end was so awesome. Lol trouble indeed caught in the lovers park by non other than buaji's frnd... hai wht brains mr. Sexy handsome boy with brains I love it actually. ... ok so now the kiss will it b the KISS kiss or cheek kiss I think the latter one light humorous update
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsumm chapter😊
loved it
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank you so much for the pm 😊
the update was amazing as always...😊
loved arnav 's point of view
waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a scintillating chapter! That was some hardcore Arnav and Khushi moments I have to say I loved every second of it!
Great update, continue soon!

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