ArHi SS: Baby, Hold On *Part 5 TROUBLE, Pg 1* (NEW Thread link, pg132)

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Fun update.enjoyed reading it.

Their midnight rendezvous was fun.

WHen will Shyam be kicked out of the house?

Loved the two of them talking with the snoring proviing background music.

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sahada

@sahada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

hmmm mmm mmm aaand your update n precap - lemon tarts with hot chocolate and my boy wrapped around me from the bck (watching smth on tv tht I don't care for :p) on our new warm n cuddly rug XD!!
We jus indulged in one those blissfully uninterrupted citrusy chocolate'y time yday n also I havnt missed any opportunity to mention/ flaunt my new gorgeous rug XD and today catching up on all your updates has been as refreshing n hot n warm n weird toothy grinning T XD XD XD
T do you hav any idea what a great writer you are?!
mwah

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priyanka1998

@priyanka1998

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

nice update

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lin2002

@lin2002

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Posted: 12 years ago

#594

wow...it was actuallyyy...awsome...:)))...lovd it.tina..:)

i dont think arnav is a writer...may b ...something is there...😕

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shreya2748

@shreya2748

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Posted: 12 years ago

#595

As always loved it
Was waiting for this
I wish I had more frequent updates then this ;)
Awesome update
last line of arnav 😳
I can't wait for more
Thnx for pm

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Kya karo ge jaan ke

@nidhu18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#596

Awesome update Tina !totally hilarious really enjoyed the kitchen scene . So Mr. Sexy and Sushi have feeling for eachother . LAughed so hard on "Aliens in Laxmi Nagar " superb looking forward to next update T.R.O.U.B.L.E. Terrific precap I am deadwa looking at the pic pls update soon.

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#597

awesome update
loved it <3 loved how he was flirting with her
thanks for the pm

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sweetydoll32

@sweetydoll32

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Posted: 12 years ago

#598

amazing update dear loved it it was too hilarious and the last dialogue was just superb... plz update soon

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Muniza.Ahmed

@Muniza.Ahmed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#599

omg omg omg!!

what she'll say to him now? :p

and by 'night' he obviously meant the love making thing with him, right?
lol i think so yeah..

waiting for next update :D

and pm k liye thank youuu