ArHi SS: Baby, Hold On *Part 5 TROUBLE, Pg 1* (NEW Thread link, pg132) - Page 46

Wow!!! Thrillers are my favourites & then comes rom com...yay!!! overexcited. Simply love the way you have written this rom com. You amaze with the way you distinctively portray each genre & still each update speaks about it being purely Tina's creation 👍🏼

Khushi thinking of how Buaji disapproved of her favourite dress calling it "watermelon dress", passing the test of having to stand up to an unrecognizable aunty's questions though she wanted to straightly just avoid any & all questions regarding her marriage-to-happen in which she was least interested, her little visit to Happyji's place from where she was on her wheels so that he wouldn't get the time to crack open a talk especially pulling in her marriage ... probably an issue which every person known or unknown to her loved to ask her about ... was well framed focusing on how a girl feels & wants to escape every person when they probe into matters she is uninterested in

Loved Arshi's first meet ❤️❤️❤️ ... totally different ... the girl taking steps backwards to catch the ball but to land in the arms of a writer ... hmmm ... drenching him in the milk she actually had to get to Buaji without missing a drop ... then dreamily reckoning the stranger's features in awe ... sexy & sushi - nice names 😃

Khushi all fused up with the way Buaji was reacting as if accommodating a new person wasn't an issue at all, asking her to move into her room & Arnav stating that collided with' to be the perfect word regarding his meet with Khushi was fun to read. Loved the parts where Khushi talks aloud about her disapproval of his stay & Buaji trying to be sweet & cover up things that she felt her neice would mess up in no time

Khushi sighing at her aunt's new name "Maddy Bua", heeding to Buaji's words & welcoming Mr.Raizada to have a comfy stay in the couch was enjoyable. Khushi trying to hide & grab her stuff away from Arnav's eyesight but shocked when he left her stunned with the last act was hilarious 😆 😆 😆

Loved it when Khushi expressed her shock by saying "What in the name of jalebis was happening?" 😃 ❤️❤️❤️

Fabulous update ... couldn't stop laughing till the end 😆 ... was upset when I found no more of the dialogues ... I'm enjoying each & every dialogue & especially the names you give are simply superb

Khushi wondering if it was food poisoning when her mind was clogged with the incident that happened a while ago, baffled if she was appointed as Arnav Singh Raizada's PA & to add more Buaji accusing her of harassing Arnav was an amazing start 😃

Loved it when Khushi replied sarcastically to Arnav that a monkey was waiting to see him... 😆 😆 😆

Khushi snarling within herself when Shyam just lied to her about looking pleasant when she knew that she was no where close to even looking normal after her sleepless night kept awake by Buaji's snores & more disturbingly, flashes of Arnav 😉 & wishing his pants on fire; Khushi comparing the two men seated in front of her; Arnav's smirks irking her that she displayed her rudeness on Shyam but shocked to find him acting all normal as if her rudeness hadn't affected him & above all when Sexy winked at her mentioning his choice of red ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ for the paint suggestion reminding her of the haunting previous day's event were awesomely framed

Love the way you describe characters & their actions ... buaji's snores ... poor girl had to sacrifice her room ... now even her sleep ...over excited to read the next chappie

Can't agree more Tina ... butterball ... hmmm ... Khushi is being nice to snakewa...actually slime ball never fits into our good books ever...hahaha

Thanks for the PMs 😊