*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27 - Page 62

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aashi12

sorry the late comment dearie.. But Diwali held me up!!

This for once, was the awesmest diwali gift ever!

While Nk's brain is definately not just filled of - bhusa.. ;P
Khushi's spunky and fiesty side was a delight too..:p

the way he adorned her with his Mother's chunri.. That minute was just so beautiful!


After that, Khushi's direct answer to all his questions.. - She loves him and is ready to take every risk.. For him!!


Then it was them, their love, their need, their passion and their pleasure.. Crossing all the boundraies - They became one!! And Arnav's confession at the end, just made me whole more beautiful! :)


Thankyou aashi and please dont apologise for late comment, coz nothing can beat my laaate reply!😳 You have touched on all the significant points of the update in such a wondrous manner. Thanks. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KittenRose

read it, loved it, sorry for the late comment. I just loved it. No overdose of anything. Waiting for the update.


Tha nks KR!😃 I did try not to go into override! Thanks for noticing!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothim78

Finally Arnav n khushi confessed...

Waiting for next update


Thanks for commenting😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Thanks for the warning Wiwy. I loved the mandir scene with maa's chunari. NK's isn't really dumb, whew! So, will Arnav take Khushi along with him to the buildering contest? Waiting for the next update. 😊


What the! You didnt read the last bit?😉 Pyaari Durgey tum bhi na!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shamyj

I am enjoying this story...and want the last chapter very quickly please!pretty please!!


Thanks for liking and commenting😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jakhushi

NK is sweet. And Anjali is crazy 😆.

Finally the bed is put to it's appropriate use 😉😆. But is Arnav going to go to London now? That will be a pity...

Why end it so early... You can give us another 3 updates with a bit of their nok Johk na...


You are sweet. Thanks for your thoughtful comments!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


What the! You didnt read the last bit?😉 Pyaari Durgey tum bhi na!😆

😆 Hey, you know me. Not comfortable reading such stuff. Just had a quick glance. For me, just one line, they did it, is enough. Not really eager to know the how of it. Sorry Wiwy, but main aisi hi hoon, ajeeb. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: indi52

oh what an update, wiwy.

second last chapter? nahiiin.

i will fling more than anchal and blouse if you do this to me.

lovely girl minus chunri, hot demanding take me as i am man in gussa and pyaar... and that bed, come on, we can't stop here.

loved the pregnant talk, the confused khushi, the man in white kurta... hope it was pure white fine khadi with guru collar... aaargh dreamboat.


Yes guru, it was white fine khadi with guru collar😉 Uff! Maratok...the boy! Thanks for liking In di. Makes me feel goood😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey thanks for the glitters!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sarun21

simply superb...

loved the update...
simply awesome...


Thankyou so much😃

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