Love Pain And Hurdles ||Kriyaansh SS|| Part 5 Page 24 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing
i just hate that shivam
usko toh main chodungi nahi 😡😡
how dare he !!! idiot gadha ** *****
i just hope reyam get to know the truth and uss shivam ki achi wali band baj jaye
then i will dance

please please
ishana update soon
i really can't wait now..
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Woah

Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Shivam don't wana hate him..but surely do for dis SS

he's such a jerk

Sneak Peak was Interesting

Can't wait dis time so Update Soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Bloody moron...how can sm1 hit d person whom he claims 2 love...? Looser... 😡
okay back 2 normal...i was srprised by d reaction of dat jerk's frnds...thank god krisha's parents r cuming...nd rey's anger is justified...abt d sneek peak..song is osum, finally d secret is gonna be revealed...bt craving 4 nxt update has strtd 4m now only...can u plz make it a bit fast..?if possible..
Well dis update was vry nyc..thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome one...eagerly waiting 4 next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please tell me what the end is going to be like? Happy aur sad? :O

A new reader I am and I love the story. Good going. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...awesome...luved it...!!!! 👏👏 😳🤗
aww i luv KriSha n Kriyam bonding.😳. ❤️...i luv dis line...lol..."Aaj kal bahot girne lagi ho kria. Sharon cream laana."

arghh dat shivam wat he think of himself...idiot...!! 😡😡

I loved it...n da next part is very interesting..😃..do update soon...!🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
jst read all de parts

De concept is minblowing...😃

luvd kriyam nd krisha bond...❤️

hate dat jerk shivam...😡😡

waiting ki kab reyam ko truth pata chale nd woh log uss cheevam ki band bajaye...😈

nxt part seems very interesting...

Nd all de parts are amazingly written..

update soon de nxt part



srry 4 de late comment
exzms were der so cudnt comment before
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part ..
Loved it ...
Waiting for more ..
Continue soon ..
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Posted: 11 years ago


Flashback in BOLD


Part 4



Kuch is tarah teri palkain meri palkoon say mila day...
Aanso teray saaray meri palkoon pay saja day...

Rey entered kria's room. She was sitting now , looking out , unaware of his presence . He sat beside her and cupped her face with his one hand , kria looked at him , staring deep into her eyes , he kissed both her eyes . His actions meant that he wanted her to remove the pain from her eyes , and replace it with happiness.

Kuch is tarah teri palkain meri palkoon say mila day...
Aanso teray saaray meri palkoon pay saja day...

Kuch is tarah teri palkain meri palkoon say mila day...

Kuch is tarah teri palkain meri palkoon say mila day...
Aanso teray saaray meri palkoon pay saja day...

Kria looked away , tears rolling down her cheeks. Rey wiped them. He caressed her injured cheek lightly , kria looked at him , her eyes conveyed that she needed him. Several unsaid things lied in those eyes of hers. She wanted to convey her past , but could not. While rey , his eyes reflected that he is ready to hear everything and will help her out , but at that time , kria's eyes were blinded by the pearls which were ready to fall down through her eyes.

Tuu her ghari her waqat meray sath raha hai...
Haan yeh jism kabhi door kabhi paas raha hai...

Jo bhi gham hain yeh teray unhain tu mera pata day...

Kria broke the eye lock , and got up , she went to the window , looking out , as the tears finally fell. She felt herself being pulled back , and heard him just say one word and that was "Please."

She understood that he wanted her to tell him everything , or not even tell her the truth but share her pain with him.

Kuch is tarah teri palkain meri palkoon say mila day...
Aanso teray saaray meri palkoon pay saja day...

Kria hugged him , and cried badly. She cried and cried , rey stroked her hair , planting soft kisses on her hair , as she hid her face in the crook of his neck. "Stop crying , everything's going to be fine kria."

Mujh ko to teray cehray pay yeh gham nahi jajta...
Jaiz nahi lagta mujhay gham say tera rishta...

Rey cupped her face , wiping her tears , he nods in a no conveying that she should stop crying , and not to waste her precious pearls to be wasted on someone who does not deserve it.

Sun meri guzarish isay chehray say hata day...
Sun meri guzarish isay chehray say hata day

Kria ran away to her bed , digging her face in the cushion , she felt rey pulling her in a hug , kria cuddeled close to him. He was continuously wiping her tears , telling her to stop crying.


Kuch is tarah teri palkain meri palkoon say mila day...
Aanso teray saaray meri palkoon pay saja day...
Kuch is tarah teri palkain meri palkoon say mila day...

As kria slowly slept in his arms , he just stared at her and gently kissed her eyes and then her cheeks.

---

Rey entered the hall. He was frustrated. He sat.

"Sharon , what's kria's past? Tell me right now!"

Sharon took a deep breath and started.

"Kria was in school.."

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Kria Ghai , the most prettiest and the diva of her school , no one in school knew about her truth of being a rai prakash. They knew that her mom and dad were divorced and kria had never met him , neither has anyone known who her dad is.

She was a simple yet elegant girl , not rich , but money was not needed for guys to fall for her. Her friend circle was huge. Loved dancing.

She was in 11th , when a guy entered her school. At first she did not bother to give a look to him , but then he was good at studies , while kria was an average one. She went to him and started taking tuitions from him.

They started spending most of the time together ,they both became the best of friends , first term came , they studied together all the time . And one day , they became a little close (No kiss and all huh! Just a hug , aur cheeks par kiss :P ) .

Exams ended , and they got into a relationship. For kria it was all a fairytale , first date , first hug , but no first kiss. The guy pampered her a lot , even smriti did not have a problem.

But , one day , kria had gone out with one of her cousins who was a guy. Her boyfriend saw that but he never knew that it was her cousin , that evening he called her at his place for studying.

Kria went to him , and while studying , he tried to get intimate with her , kria pushed him away and told him that she did not want to cross her limits , to which he replied that if she could be close to that guy and why not him. Kria was going to justify herself when he got up and was leaving , before leaving he gave a tight slap on her face.

Days passed , kria started avoiding the guy , she discussed this with her cousin , who hit that guy black and blue , after that the guy did not go behind kria. One day , she was kidnapped while coming out of tuitions.

The guy had kidnapped her , for 2 weeks kria was with him , he used to hit her whenever he wished to , and had even sometimes burned her hand. The guy was sent to juvenile house after he was caught.

Kria went away to New York , where she continued her study , and had some counselling sessions.

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"That jerk!"

Reyam said together. Anger was rising inside them , they had a very good mind of finding the guy.

Rey went to kria's room and sat beside her.

"I will make sure , that guys pays for his deeds."

"He is going to be dead."

Sharon smiled seeing their care for kria.

"Bas , ab pata lagana hain ki voh ladka hain kaun."

Swayam said.

"I am sure it's that shivam!"

Sharon replied gritting her teeth.

"The problem is , till the time kria does not speak up , we can't say anything. We need to wait till uncle comes."

Rey said frustrated.

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Kria opened her eyes weakly. She saw reyam sleeping on the couch , and Sharon beside her . She smiled , her cheek pained. She checked her phone and saw shivam's missed calls and messages . She checked it.

"You better come at my place by 4!"

Kria checked the time , it was 6 am. She lied down feeling sick. And looked at her sister .

"Shar. I want to speak to you."

She slowly tried to wake her sister , who woke rubbing her eyes.

"Tu uth gayi? Wait i'll make something for you."

"No! I need to talk to you Sharon."

"Kya hua kria?"

Kria rested her head on her lap.

"Voh jo mera past tha usske baare mein."

"Bol."

Before she could say , the door opened.

"SURPRISE!"

Reyam woke up with a jolt , and krisha look there. Kria saw her parents , she got up and stumbling ran and hugged them.

"Kria. Kya hua beta? Sharon told me , kal aap bahot ro rahi thi."

Gautam asked. Kria did not reply. Smriti made her sit.

"Kya hua?"

"Mein aap dono se akele mein baat karna chahti hun. "

Shareyam sighed and went away.

"Kya hua kria?"

Smriti asked.

"Mom dad , shivam's back."

And saying this she hugged gautam crying and blurted out everything , whatever he told her to do and why. Kria cried bitterly.

"Papa , usne mujhe aaj bhi bulaya ."

"Tumne abhi tak kissi ko kuch kyun nahi bola kria?"

"I was scared."

"Ssh , aap rest karo. Mein kuch sochta hun , abhi ke liye you give me your phone."

Kria gave it to him , gautam went . His anger knew no bounds at that time . Smriti sat beside kria and saw her swelled cheek.

"You knew what an animal that guy is , you could have told anyone."

"Maa , mujhe laga he is changed."

"Kutte ki dum kabhi seedhi nahi ho sakti kria."

"Maa , mein kaise usse confess karwati , i did not have any other option."

"Ssh."

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Gautam came out .

"Dad? Kya hua?"

"Sharon , call the footloose authorities , and say i want to personally meet them. Aur haan police ko bhi bulao."

"Hua kya hain uncle?"

"Rey and swayam you both come with me right now."

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Hope you all liked the update.

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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damn that shivam 😡😡😡

he's a big jerk 🤢

poor kria : uski to koi galati bhi nahi thi 😭😭

i want rey to punish that chee-vam severely 😡

anyways , kria ke parents aa rahe hai : hope sab theek ho jaye
Edited by divyani.arsha - 11 years ago

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