Virat&Manvi ff -Tblby#2 (link for the 3rd thread- Pg 151 :D)

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richa002

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Posted: 11 years ago

#271

Awsome again...
There is no enough words to describe itt...
Virat is being selfish with manvi...bt I loved it...
Hope manvi will make rohan understand...
Want to know how virat will react about manvi's visit to rohan...
So virika r married now...
Virat is still confused about his feelings...ughh..
Thanxxx for pm...nd plzzz update soon

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Syed695

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Posted: 11 years ago

#272

Amazing Update,..!!!!

Thanks for posting the 1st part of the chapter agian...Like it...Virat has become selfish in love yet not ready to name it..and he doesn't like Rohan's name being mentioned...and Maanvi taking the step towards mending things may be too fast..as Virat has just started trusting...but then u may surprise us..Waiting for next...Awesome Ayesha..!

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itsfate

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Posted: 11 years ago

#273

awesome update

really romantic especially that dupatta scene

jeeman scene was really cute

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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Nikhita Dixit

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Posted: 11 years ago

#274

awesome update Ayesha...👏

loved that small part of VirMan...😳😳

cute...indeed...😳😳

ohhh...how will I wait till next weekend!!😭😭

happy week...😆

cum soon!!😊

thanks 4 PM!!!😉

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#275

awesome

loved the update

loved virman part in bedroom

viren and jeevika are married now

waiting for next update

thanks for the pm

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SNTG

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Posted: 11 years ago

#276

amazing update as always aysha...virat is still confused about his feeling like for real, i want him to realise and i really want maanvi to make him realise by getting away from him lol...okayyy why do i think something big is going to happen ...hainaaa ;)

update soon yaar...cant wait

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.LiveLaughLove.

@.LiveLaughLove.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#277

Both of Virat's and Manvi's feelings were correctly potrayed. You wrote very well on how Virat was eager to know the answer if she still loved him... In b/w they looked like a married couple 😳 Awww, I loved Virat's straight foward attitude of propsing Manvi 😉 😆 I also like VM and Manvi's convo! 😊 Also her's and dadaji's 😆 I know it would be really hard for Virat to stand infront of Manvi, just like that when she is dressed in that way! 😳 Yes,Virat!! U should definitely feel guilty. Manvi ko kisi date vatee pe toh lejaooo. Virat is still unsure 😲 All over, the update was amazing. Loved it! Waiting for Rohan and Manvi's convo. Update soon! Love ya! x

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#278

Awsm... You showed virats confused emotions superbly... The dupataa scene was so adorable, loved it... now am very eager to read manvi and rohans confrontation...