ARHI FF~Hierarchy~ Th#Last~ Completed! (25/10) - Page 33

One of the best FF I've ever read! Thanks for this one, take care Chanya

Awesome story 👏 It was a brilliant piece of writing...
It was like an inspiration...
The whole jouney of arnav frm start to end, gave us something to learn...
The emotions of each character were described vividly...
All in all a fantastic story...
Keep writing... 😊

Yet another beautiful story by you, such a unique concept, Arnav a boxer a boxing club, khushi an aerobics teacher, wow payal a boxer too OMG it was an interesting ride all together.

Originally posted by: redpetals123

Yet another beautiful story by you, such a unique concept, Arnav a boxer a boxing club, khushi an aerobics teacher, wow payal a boxer too OMG it was an interesting ride all together.

I was impressed the way you handled drug situation and how arnav became addicted which in turn changed him all over, the success the addiction of power and fame suberbly written.

I loved Avni and Arnav's relation a lot it was really beautiful, all in all a wonderful story👏

There is a WOW!!! moment in every story, though we sometimes miss it, but in this story the wow moment for me was when Arnav was about to hit shakthi with a stool and khushi came in between and suddenly he stilled realizing that he was going to hurt his love and that moment made him realize what he has changed himself into, I think that was the highlight and turning point of the story.

Thanks for writing such a beautiful story

Hi, I read almost all ur stories. Woaw wonderfull. U r an amazingly gifted writer indeed, with very unique thought process. I m glad that u try to bring out something or the other different with the characters of arnav n khushi n u succeed with flying colours.u hv a vission n u knw to penned down ur thoughts too well which comes across crystal clear to ur readers. Glad that I xame across ur stories. It was undeed a treat to read ur works.

Have send u a buddy request with the hope that u will accpet it n lemme knw about ur arshi eorks in future. God blesz you

Originally posted by: Eccentrica

Hierarchy comes as a very refreshing story. Thank you!😳

I loved that this one was spawned out of your admiration for one of the greatest boxers the world has seen, Knowing that Muhammad Ali inspired you to write this story, I was very excited to read it. And it sure was very interesting. I always wanted to write one dedicated to him. Glad you liked it.😊

Arnav's past in the form of an alcoholic father was a welcome change. Also the way he tried to not be shackled by that was very heartening. Yeah this story was mainly about Arnav's journey from a bad past.

The tidbits about boxing were quite informative and I found myself getting to know many things about the sport by the time the story ended. Aww yaya! First time I've heard my stories be informative. Achievement indeed. Thank you.

I liked that Payal was a boxer in this one. Here''s to woman power! yep yep

Also the part where Arnav's troubles had an impact on everyone else, it was nice to have the youngsters make the decisions. Although it was revealed later that Shashi was aware of everything, I still liked that you gave importance to the gang of friends. Yeah because in reality the 'adults' as it were get to deal with the situation of youngsters last, so it would have been more realistic to deal with the situation among friend.😊

There were some discrepancies when it came to the usage of heroin, both for Arnav and Shakthi; the story however was enjoyable enough to ignore that particular point. Cocaine can be taken in different forms I believe from research, so I'm sure it's correct, however if you know more in detail about it, hats off. 😆

Re-reading this still it feels so fresh...
Very nice story

Fantastic story dear
loved it :p

Amazed by your versatile writing. .

read your 3 ffs in past 5 days...

hierarchy' amazing story. .

very well put all the svenario felt like watching a veey successful Hollywood sport movie..

totally spellbound 👏