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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww! Four weddings all at once and brilliantly played out by all characters. I will definitely miss this FF, Zara! I also really liked the quote by Muhammad Ali you used in the end as well as the piece of advice you gave. Deep but true! It's great Arnav got a chance to ask Khushi how exactly he was during the drug phase...it would help him in totally clearing his mistake.
Even though I was interested in seeing/reading their wedding story I believe you left it out for the reader's imagination 👏 Man, that would've been one expensive wedding. lol!
Thanks for writing such great and meaningful FFs! Appreciate and enjoy your work.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the PM. Love this story so much. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is easily one of the most hatke stories on ArHi on the Forum. Bas!

Arnav, Khushi, Aakash, Payal (Payal of all people boxing and becoming the Di to our Chotay!!!), Anjali, Shyam, NK and Shashi... all of them in the boxing world or related to it!

And what a concept Zara!

Hierarchy... which spells the need to be on the top. But by what means? Drugs??? To what end? To lose love, respect and credibility??? To wander from the path of righteous hardwork to that of becoming a monster instead of a man?

The second thing I loved apart from the concept was the execution. You need support of your loved ones to get out of this hell and you need a kick at your heart from your beloved to sustain the struggle to give up on drugs.

I hated Arnav when he made Khushi feel used. Kabhii maaf nahi karti main Arnav ko if I were Khushi. But the way he redeemed himself... Giving up on his participation for the tournament just to see to it that Khushi is safe... Sigh... Maine bhi maaf kar diya hota like Khushi did 😳

If you are fated for something, you will get it. What drugs couldnt get him, Shyam's greed did. Arnav participated and won the tournament and Shyam, in spite of all his evil plans, didnt. There are no short cuts to success. Bas!

I loved the cute love story of Anjali and Shakhti and had not anticipated Avni and Kunal to get together at all... And NK is really really cute.

I have told this to you before and saying it again. You have an awesome sense of style. Double bas! ⭐️
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

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This is easily one of the most hatke stories on ArHi on the Forum. Bas! EEP! Thanks so much sis.

Arnav, Khushi, Aakash, Payal (Payal of all people boxing and becoming the Di to our Chotay!!!), Anjali, Shyam, NK and Shashi... all of them in the boxing world or related to it! Yep all our favorites in just a different parrall setting lol

And what a concept Zara!
Hierarchy... which spells the need to be on the top. But by what means? Drugs??? To what end? To lose love, respect and credibility??? To wander from the path of righteous hardwork to that of becoming a monster instead of a man? exactly😃

The second thing I loved apart from the concept was the execution. You need support of your loved ones to get out of this hell and you need a kick at your heart from your beloved to sustain the struggle to give up on drugs. Yep it was totally about arnav's rise to the top by falling.

I hated Arnav when he made Khushi feel used. Kabhii maaf nahi karti main Arnav ko if I were Khushi. But the way he redeemed himself... Giving up on his participation for the tournament just to see to it that Khushi is safe... Sigh... Maine bhi maaf kar diya hota like Khushi did 😳 Arnav had to struggle loads to get khushi's forgiveness

If you are fated for something, you will get it. What drugs couldnt get him, Shyam's greed did. Arnav participated and won the tournament and Shyam, in spite of all his evil plans, didnt. There are no short cuts to success. Bas! Spot on sis.

I loved the cute love story of Anjali and Shakhti and had not anticipated Avni and Kunal to get together at all... And NK is really really cute. hehehe glad you liked the side love stories

I have told this to you before and saying it again. You have an awesome sense of style. Double bas! ⭐️ WHOOHOO!😃😆 Thank you.

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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG finally finished reading it 🥳
Zara I am so glad that you wrote this ff and made people know what's going in the sports love you for this ❤️ 🤗
Love it how in the end you wrote this story was all about arnav becoming a better man then what he was I have personally seen people taking drugs and not coming out of it
PS loved how you have beautiful outfits to the girls
Will miss this ff x
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Posted: 11 years ago

Can u see here that Arnav is giving Khushi a rose? No naa... Huh!
But we can imagine for sure. That was how I read this story...
I felt like everything is playing in front of my eyes. Everything!
And moreover it shows reality too somewhere! Whether a person taking drugs or not but when he got addicted to fame... This all happens!
I loved Khushi's strong character beside that innocent one always...
Drugs! I have seen a small family's destruction coz of this thing.
When Arnav was left for khushi to find her at time of heats.. I was shocked but relieved somewhere. I thought so what he can't perform now but Arshi's together naaa... :p
but u planned other thing Zara g. He won at the end! He deserved it... Hero hai humara, voh nai jeetega toh aur kon?!! :p
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh My Your every story just leaves me shocked
You're too good man..I Mean every story is different,Not one alike

I Love how this story is very realistic you know with all the drug addiction and how a person becomes

after it.It really is very real.

Finally After going through so much Arnav and Khushi got their happy ending And Seriously I was

smiling this wide 😃 After reading the last update.Your every story makes me wanting to read more

of them 😆 why is that?😛 Please do keep writing,You're a wonderful writer


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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey,

Remember Me?

Sorry for stopping catching up with the updates since a very long time.

I started yesterday to resume reading it. It's really wonderful and special. I've never read about a story of this type, and I'm glad that I had the chance to read yours :D

The hirarchy is an amazing story. The last lines you wrote in the epilogue are wonderful, summing up the story. I liked it that you did not want to show Arnav to be the flawless, perfect man, who can never go wrong. The situations and the games poeple paly upon us may lead us to do horrible things, but the greatest is the one who can get over all of that, stand up again and decide to be a better one. With the support, care and love one can change.

Mohammad Ali's quote is really true.

Arnav and Khushi's story is amazing, the bond between them is incredible.

I really like Payal, and love the fact that Akaash is not a shy person here.

Nk, Aman are good friend. They're really helpful. Without them, Arnav would not have believed in his next steps towards the change.

Avni and Kunal pair well together.

Shakthi and Anjili are cute. Though he is that angry young man, still the lady managed to get him. Her search for the truth is good, and what she said about the media people is right.


Shyaam is as devil as ever!

Loved the pics of Khushi's, Payal's and Anjili's clothes. They are awesome.


I'm planning to read another story of yours soon as I really enjoyed reading this one.

Very well done, Zara 👏

Shaimaa




Edited by bridgeofdreams - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bridgeofdreams

Hey,

Remember Me?

Sorry for stopping catching up with the updates since a very long time.
I started yesterday to resume reading it. It's really wonderful and special. I've never read about a story of this type, and I'm glad that I had the chance to read yours :D

The hirarchy is an amazing story. The last lines you wrote in the epilogue are wonderful, summing up the story. I liked it that you did not want to show Arnav to be the flawless, perfect man, who can never go wrong. The situations and the games poeple paly upon us may lead us to do horrible things, but the greatest is the one who can get over all of that, stand up again and decide to be a better one. With the support, care and love one can change.

Mohammad Ali's quote is really true.

Arnav and Khushi's story is amazing, the bond between them is incredible.

I really like Payal, and love the fact that Akaash is not a shy person here.

Nk, Aman are good friend. They're really helpful. Without them, Arnav would not have believed in his next steps towards the change.

Avni and Kunal pair well together.

Shakthi and Anjili are cute. Though he is that angry young man, still the lady managed to get him. Her search for the truth is good, and what she said about the media people is right.


Shyaam is as devil as ever!

Loved the pics of Khushi's, Payal's and Anjili's clothes. They are awesome.


I'm planning to read another story of yours soon as I really enjoyed reading this one.

Very well done, Zara 👏

Shaimaa


Thanks for returning to the story. Glad you liked it enough to at least comment. Thanks again
x
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Posted: 11 years ago
The whole set up made in the gym environment is giving the oozing adrenaline effect.
In first few chapters, catching the rest too...

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