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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#961

I am confused. I am pretty sure the laptop bag wala is Arjun / Arnav and Aditya came with him. But the one reminiscing about the dragonfly design is Aditya. Was Shyama looking at him or Arnav? Was Aditya thinking about the childhood event because there may be competition from Arnav for her? I feel like an idiot as I am drawing blanks here . . .

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-Mitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#962

The clues are in the chapter itself.

But today, he was on the boat house for his friend.

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Else, what would he call the time she'd let her raven black hair unfurl in front of the men, in the board room?

"Never mind him, Dhri," Aditya came forward to shake Dhri's hand. "You know the man loves his bets."

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Arnav, he could tell, would always second guess him, however, Yuvi and Dev truly behaved like brothers from another womb - a slave to their passions.

...as he enjoyed taking apart the dragonfly

Edited by -Mitra - 12 years ago

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#963

OK the latter part, the part about the dragonfly, is from Aditya's point of view..right?

I'm going to go back and re-read..this is a wonderful, jam-packed but confusing update!

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-Mitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#964

Originally posted by: -Mitra
The clues are in the chapter itself.

But today, he was on the boat house for his friend.

...

Else, what would he call the time she'd let her raven black hair unfurl in front of the men, in the board room?

"Never mind him, Dhri," Aditya came forward to shake Dhri's hand. "You know the man loves his bets."

...

Arnav, he could tell, would always second guess him, however, Yuvi and Dev truly behaved like brothers from another womb - a slave to their passions.

...as he enjoyed taking apart the dragonfly

This is not a new character introduction. Neither is the update from Aditya's perspective.

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inamajar

@inamajar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#965

Quite likely that was "Suyodh Kuru" who has joined his Friend Aditya Karan to support him. Since he is the one who can make the comparison to the past with regards to Arjun. Also he is the one who must be betting stating "10000 bucks says you won't light the akandajyothi," as he would love to see a student of Arjun lose and raise his friend Aditya further up the pedestal stating he is a better than Arjun.

Added to that Dhri would not be surprised with Aditya, Arjun or Vishwa joining him in his village, since they had agreed to support him and be present when he lights the akandajyothi.

Hopefully I have read it right. Since it was both Arjun and Suyodh who were standing near Shyama when : "Else, what would he call the time she'd let her raven black hair unfurl in front of the men, in the board room?"

Edited by inamajar - 12 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#966

your amazing writer the way you create your characters and shaped them is astounding loved the update thanks for the pm

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-Mitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#967

Originally posted by: inamajar
Quite likely that was "Suyodh Kuru" who has joined his Friend Aditya Karan to support him. Since he is the one who can make the comparison to the past with regards to Arjun. Also he is the one who must be betting stating "10000 bucks says you won't light the akandajyothi," as he would love to see a student of Arjun lose and raise his friend Aditya further up the pedestal stating he is a better than Arjun.

Added to that Dhri would not be surprised with Aditya, Arjun or Vishwa joining him in his village, since they had agreed to support him and be present when he lights the akandajyothi.

Hopefully I have read it right. Since it was both Arjun and Suyodh who were standing near Shyama when : "Else, what would he call the time she'd let her raven black hair unfurl in front of the men, in the board room?"

🤗

I know this update was a lot of work to the grey cells, but its almost necessary to see his point of view too.

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inamajar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#968

😊👍🏼 The moment you mentioned that he "BET" Dhri. I could only relate to Kuru. Since others will be in support of Dhri and his success.

Looking forward to the next update. You really keep us on our toes with a really Fab story.

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mklam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#969

Just caught up with the update and must admit you had me baffled in the guessing game but thanks to <inamajar> it becomes clearer

I may have mentioned this before but have to commend you for your fantastic vocabulary - and this from someone deeply in love with the written word.

Back to the update - this is going to be one interesting ride. I always thought that women had a harder time letting go when it comes to unpleasant memories and slights (imagined or otherwise). The rivalry between Arjun and Karna was a critical component of the epic, I'm not sure if it got resolved even in the end or Arjun felt some remorse.

Shyama is a strong-willed woman prone to mercurial bouts of temper (in a nice way of course) so we need someone who can rise up to the challenge - I hate to use the word "handle" here.