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Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#331

Hey ... I can't just comment before reading the chapters again ...

am half asleep ... can't think straight anymore ...

but loved the way he just carried her over the threshold ... 😆

and then asked by his mom to share whatever he has brought equally with his brothers !!!

Loving it even more ...

Thanks H ...

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Kalyaani B Rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#332

😃I have to read now...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#333

11

whats with this blue fire and her
ahhh well that fall was meant to be for sure
hmmm seems all that knowing of one another went down the drain shame
just what they needed
and what was that explosion about

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#334

12
funny just happened what i thought
her staying in his house
but with her bro and vishwa too
so thats why she fainted
not explosion but just from the work
good lord that was scary moment
hmmm seems its getting real intriguing now
hope she shall be fine

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-Mitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: chavvi16
11

whats with this blue fire and her
ahhh well that fall was meant to be for sure
hmmm seems all that knowing of one another went down the drain shame
just what they needed
and what was that explosion about

Dude! she didn't fall. He picked her up because she was struggling to cross the loose road. Else, why do you think she got angry? ;)

Edited by -Mitra - 12 years ago

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dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#336

sorry i did not realized you had update so many chapter i only got pm for chapter nine and for the newest chapter loved the update intense done to the point you don't know if you want to continue and yet you can't stop reading loved their banter and his mother told him to"Just share it amongst yourselves without breaking it," wow with out looking at what he had hope know sharing of khushi awesome update thanks for the pm amazing

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amaypranay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#337

What a Diwali...treat...2 chapters..back to back...wow...

Completely awesome...so unexpected,...and fabulous...Dear!

the last line..was bumper...she's in...and he's out...Home coming ...for sure!

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321abc

@321abc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#338

Ch. 11 and 12 are just amazing and I liked how Arnav picked up Khushi and entered into his apartment and the famous line of kunthi share it with all the brothers, I also like how u describe Arnavs concern for her injury thru eye contact, nice twist in revealing that khushis mother tongue is Telugu, I can't wait to find out the story behind her birth and reason why her mother tongue is Telugu, I am hoping to read more dialogues in Telugu as my mother tongue is telugu as well. I can't wait to read more, thanks for the pm :)

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-Mitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#339

The telugu angle is just for fun, to correlate Kushi going to Badrachalam. I don't want to overdo the story with telugu dialogues either. We'll see how it goes :)

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#340

Stories

So Arjun is a creative person who is also egoistic... both gifts from his father. I find it a little out of his character then that he is so comfortable conversing with Shyama.

You know, the basic problem is that I am not a believer of love at first sight. I think that only those relationships where you invest time to know the other person will stand the test of times. But here, neither one of them has exhibited any friendly / "stranger"ly feelings towards the other. It could be because of what Vishwa has told the both of them... but that should make them more uncomfortable with each other that comfortable given their basic personalities, right?

Did I make any sense there?