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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#311

nice..interesting update..good going...please do continue soon..thank you for the PM..😊

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kajal511

@kajal511

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#312

lovely updates
really loved khushi's last line...khushi in arnav out
hope no sharing in future at any cost of arshi love

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mklam

@mklam

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#313

Why am I not surprised by the mom's opening gambit when they walk in the door "share it among yourselves.." It gave me such a warm and fuzzy feeling when they hovered around khushi/shyama, just the kind of in-laws a girl would want. Vishwa's presence makes it so right. With ethnic riots in the background can we expect more fireworks?
I really hope you get back to updating sooner than later. I joined this forum recently and am already seeing good writers leaving for several reasons. I'm hooked to this story, thanks for the pm and will watch out for your next post

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#314

woah why do they argue so much...😳

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#315

Sorry ... 😳 missed commenting for the last chapter too ...

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SIMI

@dieforasr

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#316

hey..It was fabulous..pls don't stop here...

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#317

A rabba Ve fall in arms kind of moment - I know your story has nothing to do with IPK but still it felt like it when he carried he away from the "blue" flame. I loved the little damsel in distress exchange between the 2. I live this guy's quick response as he does not shy away for her. Man, Arnav / Arjun, whatever he wants to be called is very quickly eclipsing Vishwa in my perspective and I somehow think he is doing the same for our Shyama as well! Great chapter!

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#318

Chap. 12

Wow the first impression in his house is that of warmth and sharing. The mum is clearly the one in charge in this household - again someone looking after all these boys, she must be a very strong woman. Loved his feeling of concerns and not letting go and her holding on to him for support. Vishwa is the background not interrupting but letting them be. His family seems so nice, he does have a great supporting cast around him. Poor guy is out on the terrace again while she takes over the bed.

The retaliating murder of the Muslim foreman does not sound good! I fear there is going to be more violence coming . . .hope not as I am simply enjoying this beautiful love story you have been spinning. Do continue soon please . . .

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Jay

@jduke

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#319

Loved the cute moments between them. So "HER MAN" is here as Vishwa described earlier. I really liked the way you inter play between epic characters and the story leads.