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Tyro

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

nice parts...

can c aamir as vishwa...others...not sure...still trying to visualize some1 else...

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-Mitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: Tyro
nice parts...

can c aamir as vishwa...others...not sure...still trying to visualize some1 else...

Ignore! These are the people who are in my head for now ;) And its subjected to change, as always...

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Revathy Sugathan Nair

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Posted: 11 years ago

#243

Sweetheart it's not long - It's PERFECT!!! I do not want this night to end

Some parts are still confusing but I admire how she holds off without revealing anything. But Shyama dear, I do not think Arjun is clueless that he doesn't realise you are evading as usual 😉 He will get it out of you and I can't wait for that day 🥳

The way he described how he felt about archery - I was quite literally feeling the same thing 😃

And the brothers are described to perfection 😆 The stickler for rules Yuvi and the great Yudhishthira; the anger management therapy candidate Dev and our Bheem 👍🏼 and the way Arnav lovingly describes them and how he came to be here even with his fancy education 😆

ArHi will always be Sarun for me. But Vishwa - Oh the possibilities are endless but I would go with Hrithik - its the AURA darling 😃

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-Mitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Silent readers! Hmm! Now what do we do with them? 😆

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amaypranay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#245

For starters...

The night is going on just perfectly...and the pace is Brilliant!

All.i can say...I leaning a lot...and it's an awesome feeling...this story...is so intriguing...I'm hooked!

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#246

I love the concept H... I will catch up with the entire story over the weekend. Thanks for continuing to write. You are awesome, you know that, right?

Will come back with more comments soon...

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shr1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#247

Caught up with the latest chapter :) He is a self made man and ignored greater calling to save family from falling apart, I can see the genius professional and the family man that he is. When he talks of archery he tells the attitude the sport has imparted him. Now easy to understand why Vishwa selected Arjun for Shyama. Loved the chapter and your choice for Vishwa :) Perfect visualisation of the characters!

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-Mitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#248

Guess who's who? I think it will make for an interesting game ;)

Clue: One picture has been included into the cast, just to increase the fun!

Edited by -Mitra - 11 years ago

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#249

read few chapters in one go.

First I have to admit brilliant writing.

Their conversation at the station, getting know to each other, really interesting.

you visualized them as Hrithik and Chtrangada. But as a die hard fan of Barun-Sanaya, i can't imagine anybody else in the place of Arnav and Khushi. Though Shyama is a contrast of Khushi.