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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1091

where r u dear

has a new thread been made??

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-Mitra

@-Mitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1092

I said I will write, not post :)

I don't have a new thread or anything. Just hold your horses for a little bit, I will come back with a long update.

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1093

Promise?

Girl! you play a lot of word games.. No wonder you sound like Shyama and Vishwa!

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Barun_Superfan

@Barun_Superfan

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#1094

Read ur story in 1 go. Its fab 👏 Ur writing is great, though a bit difficult to understand at some places..but then, I am like Shyama's dad 😉 Anything beyond my understanding is exotic 😆 Pls update soon n I guess its time for a new thread.

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Scheherazade.

@Scheherazade.

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#1095

Are you writing the next part? Will you manage to post it in the same time that I can hold onto my horses? I've never been much with them, for the record 😆

Waiting up!!!

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-Mitra

@-Mitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1096

Originally posted by: Barun_Superfan
Read ur story in 1 go. Its fab

👏 Ur writing is great, though a bit difficult to understand at some places..but then, I am like Shyama's dad 😉 Anything beyond my understanding is exotic 😆 Pls update soon n I guess its time for a new thread.

Its effortless for an average writer to complicate (and indulge) in a plot, or even crowd out a sentence with highfalutin words. But good writers effortlessly keep it simple :) I know where I stand and such feedback will give me direction. Keep them coming.

Edited by -Mitra - 11 years ago

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1097

Many tomorrow's have gone by dear Hasini ...

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-Mitra

@-Mitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1098

I have not finished the update - I'm in the middle of a big migration project. So, please bear with me.

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-Mitra

@-Mitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1099

Wrote something at this ungodly hour. Thought will share it with you folks!

From the sea of the present, I reach out to the shores of the distant past.

In that flash of a wave, I'm there.

And washed back again to the chaos in blue, in the next.

Let it be, for Its only an eternal affair lost to the winds of time.

Edited by -Mitra - 11 years ago

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1100

Originally posted by: -Mitra
Wrote something at this ungodly hour. Thought will share it with you folks!

From the sea of the present, I reach out to the shores of the distant past.
In that flash of a wave, I'm there.
And washed back again to the chaos in blue, in the next.
Let it be, for Its only an eternal affair lost to the winds of time.

Wow! Its so beautiful Hasini...I can't help but fall in love with it...You have written the feeling so magically! Can I quote it elsewhere? With full acknowledge to you...Please! It's so wonderful that I can't resist sharing it...Only if you permit!