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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mitra

Its effortless for an average writer to complicate (and indulge) in a plot, or even crowd out a sentence with highfalutin words. But good writers effortlessly keep it simple :) I know where I stand and such feedback will give me direction. Keep them coming.


I have felt the same - sometimes your writing seems to be so dense to me - like having so many layers and at times I am too lost to grasp the meaning of the line you have written. That's the reason I keep on asking questions to you. This thread had been so interesting with discussions on those doubts, sharing of perspectives on the same by different readers. While some writers keep complex plots effortlessly simple, i admire and its easy to follow but when there is layers and deeper meanings and complicated twists hidden in those words (like those lines Vishwa makes) it's intriguing and tempts to dig more deeper to find the secrets...It kind of gives a purpose to discover and learn..it keeps me enchanted to this story, hence bring it on...keep it complicated and present it in true Hasini style...even those things go beyond my understanding - I have made some wonderful friends through this thread who helps me in the puzzle and moreover you are there to help when I stumble ...keep it going dear..Good luck with your migration...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mitra

Wrote something at this ungodly hour. Thought will share it with you folks!



From the sea of the present, I reach out to the shores of the distant past.
In that flash of a wave, I'm there.
And washed back again to the chaos in blue, in the next.
Let it be, for Its only an eternal affair lost to the winds of time.


Wow that is beautiful Hasini ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Pls update asap babes 😔 Pleeease
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Posted: 11 years ago
Before V-day will we able to join for the wedding? I need to get a kancheepuram sari ready...he he...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Indeed! The wedding is not too far off.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mitra

Indeed! The wedding is not too far off.


wow! thats great news!! Looking forward to it!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Saree ready and me ready..Shall we go???
dreamymaya thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Darling where have you gone?? All fine ??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamymaya

Darling where have you gone?? All fine ??


Exactly ... where have you disappeared ... 😲
we miss you ... hope you know realise that ... 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
I moved to a new place and my internal clock is still off. I'm a zombie lacking sleep for most part. So, do bear with my absence. Will return shortly with updates.
Thanks
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