*Awarded* Arhi FF: A New Khushi #8 Epilogue part 2 pg66 3/2

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Meera

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Posted: 11 years ago

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congrats on d new thread dear...

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Congratulations on a new thread Sami

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IPKlover

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Congrats on the new thread!!! Hope the update is going to be posted soon! 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Thanks everyone . I'm hoping to update the next part on either Sunday or Monday :)

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IPKlover

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Posted: 11 years ago

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It's Monday...hope to see the update TODAY!!! 😃😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: canapoem
Just started reading your story 2 days ago. Fantastic writing. but when Khushi lost her baby, felt really sad for her and also when she showed the 3rd star as her baby I literally cried.

Thanks for reading all the chapters.. I know it's a long story.. 😊

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Originally posted by: chemistry9
amazing
read d 3 chps at once...
i loved d fact that arnav did little things for khushi
that was so sweet
thnx fr d pm

Thanks for reading the chapters.. If you would like a snyopsis of the earlier chapters pm me and I will be happy to provide one 😊

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Happy and sad!

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Sami you have covered their journey so beautifully ...loved all the details and descriptions...I could see how with time and trust their relationship has grown stronger and the emotional connect so important and loved how you wrote it.

Loved how he opens up to her and talks about his past. Loved that she truly knows him inside out.

Loved that they travel together and loved how thoughtfully he takes her to Lucknow for her parents death anniversary, unable to see her tears, his weakness...loved how she finds happiness in small things.

Loved the way your described the wedding ambience, that photograph of the brothers very apt and set the tone for the bachelor party, bringing back some wonderful memories...

Loved that everyone teases Arnav about being a Jodu ka ghulam...and loved that he really has no excitement about the party ...remembering the previous one, I agree it ended pretty well!

I loved how the girls turn up at the farmhouse and perform to biwi number 1, and love how she knows in his eyes that he is being honest...I am so glad they have come together and reached this place where words are not needed!

Love how he still loves,to see her in red...loved how he follows her to the ladies washroom with no cares in the world as it was his own private bathroom...

Loved that she is pregnant and it's a decision they have taken mutually ..and both are happy and excited ...it's an important phase and they seem to be ready emotionally and mentally this time around...they deserve the happinesses ...I love it , beautiful use of words...

I demand at least 2 epilogues...one with her pregnancy track and then one after...pretty please Sami...!

Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago