|Amour Indefinitely| ~ KR Drabble Series (link to thread 2 added) - Page 55

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Posted: 11 years ago
that was lovely...😃

So sweet of her ... shopping for family.. kaira...😊

Hehehe.. rey ne chuna bhi toh sexiest dress... iraada kya h iska...😉

Ho gya emotion overflow...😛

Eeepppsss... itni hot games ... bhala ho invent karne wale ka...😆

Wat a day... aaj toh inki love ki gaadi start ho hi gyi fir toh...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hayee so sweet!
Chocolate idea was amazing!
and i loved rey shopping for her
update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww such a cute n superb part.. awesome
.. kria got kiara a dress n guessed kiara's fav color by seeing her room making rey surprised...
kria can shop for every1 but not her aww cute..
rey got her a dress but on seeing kria in it he got highly attracted towards her.. nice.. loving this small small advances n waiting to c wats s store for KR...
loved d last part.. both eating chocolate n d brief moment of their lips touching each other...
waiting for next installment...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update its so much lovely update
Like it update fast next
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Posted: 11 years ago

probably by tomorrow night. Sorry but I've got semesters starting from tonorrow.
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Posted: 11 years ago
that was a superb and fantastic chapter... i loved it...
finally they completed there shop and the place u described
seem beautiful and their little memories while roaming around the place
and the game was a awe to seem... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update maneet...
Really enjoying reading kriya n rey's increasing closeness...


N sorry for late reply...I am not well from past 3 weeks...
Still on rest but thought to reply to few pms through cell...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its beautifully described..
The way the uncertain emotions were depicted and the awkwardness described.. was amazing.. and at the same time required in their case..

I kinda liked the shopping scene more.. I dont know why.. but I did
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Posted: 11 years ago
love the story and how it is going. please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Another delayed update, but I hope you guys know the reason behind it. Anyways here's the next installment.


Part 17:


Since they returned from the lake they have been avoiding each other. Both of them were packing their stuff but quietly. None of them spoke a word. Their flight was scheduled for three in the morning and they had just four hours left for that.


"Umm, I think we should take a short nap before we set out for airport." Rey suggested.


"Hmmm." Came her response.


That's it. This was the only conversation they had since they returned back to their room. The atmosphere again drifted to silence as if they were in some library.


While proceeding towards their seat, one of the passangers unintentionally pushed Kriya who fell on Rey and both of them landed on the seat with Kriya atop Rey. She clutched his shirt tight whilst her eyes were closed. Her hairs fell on her forhead covering a part of her closed eyes. Well it was similar to a filmy situation but the only difference is that in films the protogonists feel sparks flying between them whereas here neither sparks were flying nor they felt unaffected. They felt a different emotions gushing through their veins. It was something undescribable yet nice.


Rey stared at her face. His hands reached up to her forehead and set hairs right. On sensing his touch she slowly opened her eyes staring back at him. Smiling at him Kriya parted away. Luckily they were right in front of the seats alloted to them.


They made themselves comfortable. Rey plugged in his ear phones whereas Kriya preferred reading a book as both of them weren't feeling sleepy. After a while Rey felt Kriya's palm touch him. On looking towards her he found her rubbing her palms on her arms.


"Feeling cold?"


"Hmm yeah."


She had a blanket wrapped around her but it wasn't of any help. Rey pulled her closer such that she was almoat snuggling against him. She stared at him with wide eyes. He just blinked his eyes. She slowly relaxed herself. Few days back none of them.thought that they would be comforatble with each other so soon.


Their comfort level was increasing though they were just friends. They tried to know each other better. They were giving this relation a fair chance though initially none of them favoured it. Soon Kriya drifted to sleep, resting her head on his chest. He smiled at her and again engaged himself with music.


Kriya's sleep broke due to the announcement made for alerting the passengers that they would be landing in few minutes.


Kriya checked her watch and exclaimed "I slept for so long!"


"Yes sleeping beauty." He replied with a chuckle. She felt embaressed.


"It's alright." He said making her feel better.


As they reached the exit side of the airport they found Kaira and Preeti waiting for them. On seeing Kriya, Kaira ran into her arms.


"Mommy I missed you." Kaira said climbing into her arms and hugging her.


"I missed you too." Kriya replied kissing her cheek.


"Ahem! I guess I should get used to it." Rey replied gaining their attention.


"Are you jealous daddy?" Kaira asked teasing him.


"Huh...jealous and me...no ways..." He replied trying to hide his embaressment. For a minute he was jealous of Kriya 'cause usually instead of Kriya it was always him whom Kaira hugged first.


"Missed you too daddy." Kaira said kissing his cheek.


"Welcome back Kriya and Rey." Preeti said hugging them together.


"Lets get home because there's a surprise for you Rey and maybe this surprise may turn not so good for Kriya." Preeti said puzzling both of them.


Like and review please. PMS will be sent later.
Edited by lovely7010 - 11 years ago

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