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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riya_vaidya

heyya...!! i m back...sorry for late comment as my exams were going on...bt now exams are over and cutting short my bak bak, getting started with my view thanks sweetheart for this, I am glad that finally u r free from ur exams😉
well when the chapter started, i got lil confused coz it was not in the continuity with the previous chapter...if possible plz do clear this...but taking this chapter individually then it was a bang on chapter...it was totally in antithesis, like one side hatred then on other side love; on one side it was heart-breaking chapter then at other side it was heart-mending chapter also...nyc job debu👏 actually kya hai, i found difficulty in continuation in this FF, so i started telling one day event. So this is after few days, i started like this. Apology!! if u cud nt understand😳😳 and thanks for your honest feedback, it ll help me a lot 2improve.

Stay within your limit and don't try to behave like my wife
this line was indeed very heart-breaking...he shouldnt have said that😭...then came the deal(pata nai ye har bussiness tycoon baat baat par deal kyun le aate hai??😆)but in deep corner of my heart i felt that wat taani did was right...for how long she would live with a monster like person rey???
abb kya kare, Rey becomes emotional and angry when it's about his mother. Taani wanted to do an impossible thing, and basically he always believes in profit losses, so he had 2bring it.
and yes, Taani also could nt handle this any more, she is also a human being and she like told them, aur nahi hota mujhse aapke hisaab se uthna baithna..etc..she gave up this time..
then came the sneek peak of the whole ff...taarey's confrontation; the confessing session...really it was soo perfectly written that it didn't seemed like i was reading it, rather felt like its happening actually infront of my sight
Tum mera wajood ban gayee ho Taani, kahika nahi chora mujhe tumne.
Tum mujhe itna effect kyu karti ho Taani? Kyu??"
these lines directly touched my heart...can't believe that rey himself told these to taani😲...but miracles do take place😉
seriously it was very very heart touching confession from rey's side n now looking forward on how taani reacts on this and agrees to go back with rey...!!
aww thanks yaar, actually that was a try from my side as i hav never wrote proposal scene before it. And it had to be like Reyansh Sighnia. It's true that I took the help from D3 itself😛 coz there also Rey asked taani tum mujhe itna effect kyu karne lagi ho?
And the entire process was slow, gradually..



The last chapter is left only, will try to update it soonish
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy2012



See who's commenting
i thought u r bust wth studies😉


yep! I really am..
Nt just burst bt totally burnt =_=
Bt aapka stry pada hi ni tha frm many days..
U noe dii..pure 3 chapters padhe ek baari mein :-P
Am sry fr bein late..=( really sholly =(
Anyways chalo ab jaldi jaldi update do..
N aaj toh DIWALI hainn..so is STORY KA UPDATE=DIWALI KA GIFT..
Peesh SD stry update de do na..
Edited by PrOjeCtA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
update...🤢 🤢 🤢
Aise cute wale update ko time nahi lagate😉 😛 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Di!!! Kb update karoge? Plz soon na...

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Happy diwali to u
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sashaz_sis

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">update...🤢🤢🤢</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">Aise cute wale update ko time nahi lagate😉😛😆</font>

Haan debu...shweta is right!!
Itna tym nhi lagate varna kuch bhi ho sakta hai...like dharti phat sakti hai; aasman gir sakta aur hum pagal bhi ho sakte hai 😆 😆...abb tum hi hume aur iss duniya ko bacha sakti ho..! 🤢
Come onn u can do it
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Posted: 11 years ago
I hope tht if u r making me wait for
Update thn update shld be romantic
Hot sexy n everything
Edited by raddhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
update will be on saturday..i guess😳
if i can manage before that, m gonna definitely update😊
update will be romantic for sure (fullto TR romance😉)..don't know about hot or sexy!!!😕
thanks for waiting
Edited by crazy2012 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy2012

update will be on saturday..i guess😳
if i can manage before that, m gonna definitely update😊
update will be romantic for sure (fullto TR romance😉)..don't know about hot or sexy!!!😕
thanks for waiting


😃 😃 😃
Saturday jaldi aaja😆
TR Romance☺️
(sochke only I start blushing😛)
Hot ho ya Sexy...Romance toh Romance hota hai😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy2012

update will be on saturday..i guess😳
if i can manage before that, m gonna definitely update😊
update will be romantic for sure (fullto TR romance😉)..don't know about hot or sexy!!!😕
thanks for waiting



finally..b4 my examz..i get to read d last part of dark ff..😆😆 n debu...i m super happy dat ur gonna update a romantic 1...😉 n dis line "update will be romantic for sure (fullto TR romance😉)..don't know about hot or sexy!!!😕" haha...seriously ...🤣..now will b waiting...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Saturday has arrived😃
Super excited !
Debu di kripaya the karke update fast😉

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