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@crazy2012

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: samiha_taarey

enemy ye note rosogolla ne tujhe hi dedicate kiya hai & note ki bad bhi RES kar k tune wo prove bhi kar diya hai

and 4 ur kind info maine na pichle update pe ek nehi balki 3 comments diye hai wo bhi without any res

so tuna na aapni galtiya mujhpe na thopa kar samjhi...😡

aur tu na sam ki bachhi zada innocent banne ki natak mat kar..😡😡😡
aur meri achhi sachhi Amy ko aisa maat bol..😡😡😡
ek update mein gaalti se comment kar liya tha tune😉🥱

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@crazy2012

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: raddhi
Dear after writing so beautifully u r asking tht it is like by us or no I luv it dear n again u made me cry n show me one more new prt,point tht com in every relation right now want to giv u tight hug but dis laptop is coming in bwt anyways u r best luv u swty ohkk I luv tht rey take care of taani like a father (coz father take care of thr daughter too much) n I luv tht aww taani is still weak thn I luv taarey convo in room whr taani want to giv all happiness to the person she luv n whr rey don't want tht who r close to him go n meet his mother tht show tht taani is close to him n luv her n thn it made me cry like how in angry ppl do make mistake of thr life wch may never change n thn thr cry but happy tht his family want taani back n luv her to core tht thr went to take her but whn a women is hurt by thr luver thn nothing can change thr decision only one person can do tht is tht person who hurt her n u show tht only luv tht rey cam to taani n told u wht he was keeping in his hrt for so long n tht was emotional thr u made me cry dear but luv it n per-cape is luvly n I want to say I luv u n do PM on time plz coz I did not get PM thanks for update n Do nxt one also soon luv u :*

aww thanks sweety🤗
I have hugged u back and taken ur hug as well😉😃
Keep loving me like this😳..muuaaazzz

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@navk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#243

wonderful update dii
this part
was little emotional
manorama' s rxn
was nice
when she know about
taarey;s
divorce

"If you go there, you can't come back here again. FOREVER. As per our deal, our marriage will get over" his voice is hurting like a hammer into her mind.
''at this line i want to kill rey
how dare he
when taani leaves
after that
he was regretting of his
decision
he is a
dumb man
& our innocent beauty
when in
an orphan
poor soul how
much she suffer
but aftr that

, a big white Honda city stops outside this orphanage. Mr Reyansh Singhania at last come here - is it a co incidence or he has taken his wife back with dare he

this part was soo cool
entry badi mast thi dii
Farak Parega, Taani..Mujhe parega. Of course, you affect me.."he screams in anger, in pain. "My every day starts thinking about you and when I go to office - you keep haunting me there - what are you doing now, have you taken your food on time. I always want to finish my work before time so that I can come back early only to see few glimpse of you." he holds her shoulder tightly, totally forgetting about surroundings. Both gaze meet, they seems lost in each other, tears come out from their eyes uninterruptedly.
aww this part was so
beautifull
ilove this part
vo glimpse vali line to
''mashalla''
"I have tried ignoring you, thought I could overcome all my weakness because once I promised myself not to love anyone, par jitna dur jaane ki koshish ki utna hi kareeb paya khud ko. Tum mera wajood ban gayee ho Taani, kahika nahi chora mujhe tumne. " he takes numerous breaths at a time, his words are crossing with each another, "And today when you left me alone, I found myself no where in this world, I forgot about myself..You and your presence do affect me - uthte, baithte, soate, jagte everywhere and every time. Tum mujhe itna effect kyu karti ho Taani? Kyu??"
this made me cry
aww so
beautiful part
each & Every line
touches the heart
& after that 3 magical words
awesome debu dii
now updare soon

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samiha

@samiha_taarey

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: crazy2012

aur tu na sam ki bachhi zada innocent banne ki natak mat kar..😡😡😡
aur meri achhi sachhi Amy ko aisa maat bol..😡😡😡
ek update mein gaalti se comment kar liya tha tune😉🥱

huh!!!!!!!!!!!! bhalai ka to jamana hi nehi raha!!!!!!!!!!!
jo comment deta hai uska koi kadar nehi aur jo res karta hai usi ka jai jai kar
meri innocence ka kisi koi value hi nehi hai
thik hai phir mai bhi aapni RES ki mood pe back kar rahi hu

Edited by samiha_taarey - 11 years ago

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Debu

@crazy2012

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: shubhi_taarey
gosh finally u update!!
its just amaizing...
the emotions the feeling the love the magic the pain is just amazing!!
just touched me!
and the song was just perfect!! it suited the situation soo welll!
oh my gawd cant u continue this story cant see the end of such a epic love story!!
update soon plzz

thnaks Shubhi..every beginning has 2go by the end nah? otherwise u feel bored😳

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taarey05

@taarey05

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#246

As usual awesom chapter yar
loved it to the core
I was literally crying while reading it
Really a heart-touching one
n precap ...OMG...Loved ittt...
eagerly waiting for it
plzz update soon

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nithi_newlife

@nithi_newlife

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#247

Yaar...wait you updated on 25th...and I read it just now...not fair...

Anywaysss...with anger still on my head...Very good chapter...The best thing that I loved was...I felt justified with Rey's anger...a normal human being should support Taani and shout at Rey for being so cruel...but I don't...The justifications you had given in between for Rey's anger...

"NO..NEVER..She can't be my mother. I hate her." He pushes her back. As much as he tries to control his anger, somehow it's never leaving him alone. "Taani, if you think that you have become so important to me that I can't do anything without you, then it's completely wrong. If you think, you have got enough rights so that you will come to me and instruct me what to do and what not to do, it is also completely wrong. Because, I have not given anyone right to control my life. Stay within your limit and don't try to behave like my wife"

I loved this part...

And I liked the parts where you had tried to justify Rey's anger his point of view which is very difficult and is damn challenging...

I don't know if I have used the right words to express what I meant...I just hope you understand!!

Great JOB!!!😊😊

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Rabia

@rabitaarey

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#248

Res

Unres

Awesome update debu 👏

loved it yaar its mindblowing

fantastic and soo emotional 😭😭

u made me cry 😭😭 but loved it

taani was shock when rey ask her

to sign devorce papers 😲 but

then all come to take taarey back 😃

and the confession was awesome 👏

and precap is fabulas mindblowing 👏👏

but what is this debu u end it ??😲

yar i really loved this ff sooo much 😳

and now u end this ff not good yaar 😭😭

plzzz update the last chapter soon 😭😭

Thanks for pm ❤️

Edited by Rabertmona - 11 years ago

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vibhaaa

@vibhaaa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#249

Awesome , mind blowing , outstanding Debu.
I just lost in ur story...it's like all this happening infront of me.
U written so beautifully. Fall in love with ur writing!!
U re d best.
The way u express each feeling n give life to it is commandable. Only few can have that magic!!
Expressing in word how much I like it ... It very difficult 4 me..I am not good with expressing.
really heartly sorry 4 chotu comment.. It was very emotional... When Taani was leaving with Rey my heart stopped too.
Loved Rey family love Taani.!!
Thank god Rey came... Loved the way he confess!!
Eagarly waiting 4 update
Pls update soon.