IN THE LIFT ~ Collab ArShi TS ~ [Part 2 Pg 13] {Completed} - Page 18

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awe that was so sweet update...
Khushi stammered then he mocked her😆
Then he proposed...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part loved it
such a cute story
loved it
totally amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww what a sweet chapter, loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aw a perfect finish to the adorable story of the Lift.
Everything was just super cute, from the way Arnav acted to first receive Khushi in the office, Khushi's reaction on seeing ASR as her boss, Arnav's unconventional and wonderfully natural proposal in the Lift to their after marriage scene again in the lift. Couldn't have asked for a better ending, thank you for giving this story a beautiful finish!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Simply absolutely fantastic...
Lift ka kamaa tho dekho...
Par badha sahi hona chahiya...
Loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome...
just superbbb...loved it..
thnxx fr pm..
update soon
Posted: 11 years ago
Really wonderful ending it was!
I enjoyed and loved it to bits!
thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Yay!! Finally u Updated

Coming to the Update-
I totally Loved It
Smiling Arnav but not yet admitting it
This was so sweet scene😆

She stood in front of me with her eyes popped out. Probably in a state of shock.

"Ar-ar-nav!", she said with a slight stammer.

"Kh-khu-shi!", I imitated her with a grin.

And I love

And I love crazy and adorable teenage girls who speak a lot😉😆
Here comes my favourit part:

After a few minutes the lights came back.

"The lights are back Khushi! Calm down!", I said.

She pulled away from my embrace gently.

"I will never ever go in a lift again!", she announced.

"Why?", I asked curiously.

"What if this happens again?", she whined.

"So? I'll be there with you na!", I replied waiting for her reply.

"You can't be there with me always na?", she asked.

"What if I am there in your life always?", I questioned back.

"How?", she asked looking into my eyes with her innocent doe shaped ones.

"Marry me! I will never let you alone in the lift! Why only the lift, I'll be there with you everywhere you go!", I said finally proposing her in the most unromantic and unique way ever.

"WHAT?", she asked me in shock.

"Oh no!!! What the hell did I do! Nooo! This is not what should be happening.", I thought to myself.

"Forget what I said!", I said nervously.

"Arnav! What did you say? Repeat it!", she ordered.

"Ma-rry-me!", he stammered nervously.

"The great ASR is scared of proposing a girl? Not any girl.. His best friend? That's news!", she said out with a chuckle.

"Huh?", I looked at her confused.

"Just kiss me already idiot!", she said and pulled me to her.


She gently placed her lips on mine and sucked them. Her pink lips felt so soft against my hard ones. I have wanted to feel them for a month now. I used to get dreams of this very scene that I would confess to her in the lift.

I sucked on her rose petal like lips. They tasted sweet, of her strawberry lip gloss. We kissed for a couple of minutes and broke away at loss of breathe. I rested my forehead on hers as both of us smiled, breathing heavy.

"I found my love, In the Lift!", she whispered.

"I planned all this! Just to confess my love to you in the place we first met,In the Lift!", I whispered.

She looked at me with disbelief as I smirked at her and bridged the gap between our lips and went in for our second kiss when suddenly the lift moved. She broke apart and giggled.

"No worried Khushi! We can continue this after our shopping, on our way down to the parking, In the Lift!", I said with a wink.

She smiled as a pink hue adorned her cheeks. The doors of the lift opened and we walked out hand in hand.

"I love you Khushi!", I whispered.

"I love you too Arnav!", she replied as we entered the shop for buying some material.

~o~

After a month.

Unfortunately, on our way back down to the parking that day, we had other people in the lift with us. But now I can do anything with her, anywhere I want. Khushi and I are now married and I plan to take her to the mall tomorrow for some shopping, hoping the lift would play it's game again!



I know I have pasted almost everything but I loved it the whole

Beautifull story and beautifuly written👏
See I hit u😆
Luv YA🤗
-nuts😃
Edited by nuts_22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
That is an awesome chapter.
Loved the anokhi andaz of his proposal.
Fall in love in lift and proposed to marry her in a lift also.
I wish they have more romantic encounter in lift as well.😆

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