Arshi SS: Before its too late | Part 5 | 31/12

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Love.life2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Thnx for d pm

Hey preeti awesome start.

Loved this part.

I dint knw why khushi went to RM after the diwali night wht Arnav said to her other than as u said for her family.

Coz on the show she refuses n only goes to meet them last time.

I thought here she ws humiliated more n even Arnav dint tell her to leave.

I guess this is the turnin point in your story.

So Arnav dint tell her to leave nor pushed her so dint hurt her finger.

Tht means Arnav dint put the bandage at the auspicious time at the temple indicating their engagement.

Also in this story Arnav is thinkin tht he said yes to marry La coz people were tauntin Anjali for him.

Where as on the show they dint show any reason bt it seemed he did it to run away frm his feelings for khushi n play safe with la.

This is jus to understand ur story n the character's thoughts how it'll be different frm the show.

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Sasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Really interesting update.

So now Khushi will break the engagement I guess.

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Pavin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

The above post is mine ;-)
Finally someone started a story from thiz track
wonderful start eagerly waiting for d story to unfold
continue soon!

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Pavin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Thx jenny for d link. Preeti congrays for ur first story. Can u please use black clr font its making difficult to read from mobile.

If my request bother u den jz ignore it 😆

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Pavin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

This story remind me of ipk
only the way it flowing is different
but d track n the intensity in each chapter are jz like ipk
i so wanted too see how thiz ASR going to crack in his feelings
and admitted to her before its too late
khushi enggaged n thiz shyam will maybe create some rift in Raizada n Gupta's
continue soon!

Edited by ..Sugar_ArHi.. - 12 years ago

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

that is great update i like it

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852464

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Amazing Update...

Loved it...😊

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Iman

@ArShiDelena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Awesome Start

Loved It

Continue Soon & Plzzz PM Me

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Preeti

@Preeti.xo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Thank you for all the feedback, haven't been able to type up the next part hopefully soon no promises!

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Premeer ki Chahat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Preeti!!!!!!!

Maria is shocked 😲

FINALLY!!!!!

an update!!!!! ME EXCITED!!!!!

and me starts dancing!!!!

It's like I'm watching once again IPKKND through your SS what an amazing feeling!!!! I'm eagerly waiting for next part... how will Arnav know about Khushi's sagaai? How will he react? and he's so confused!!!! gosh just can't wait!!!! Will Arhi meet then? fight yaa dard?

thanks a lot for your pm jaani 🤗