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Mihika

@Legilimens.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Nami di a biggg hug to you for writing this. Sachi. 😳 🤗

I am seriously loving SwaRon fans take on the current track ! But you took it to a different level ! I have read a few one shots on the current track and to be frank, I loved this one the most coz it had a practical and rational end to it! The content was very practical and very nicely depicted ! This is something which I wouldn't mind happening! Because this is very much in continuation to the story we are watching at present!

Loved this one shot. 😊

-Mihika. 😳

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...Diya...

@...Diya...

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

4 pages already 😲
Res 😳
*Unres*

Nami , you are seriously too good. 👏👏 This os was perfect . I would love for this to happen in D3 . The teary hugs , the breakdown . I so want to see sharon sob in front of him and him consolling her . Next gift segment we'll pack and parcel you to them . We need you as a creative head there .😆You should be grateful I read the OS only when it was all completed else I would have sent huge dhamkis too .😡 Priya told me you had stopped the first part at the hug only. That was so cruel .
Anyways, this was seriously awesome. Looking forward to more bedtime stories .😛

Edited by diya90 - 12 years ago

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Namsie pehle a big 🤗 for writing this OS. It was extremely well written. Nd I luvd how they came across each other in the abandoned corridoor. Place selection is awesome. :D they wl not go to each other and are thnking the other one doesn't care, so when they see each other in miserable state they r in tab jake inki dimag ki ghanti baji *ting di ting ting*. :P Sharon's breakdown is what I wnt to see nd u brought out a beautifully scene of that. Their convo was vry good. Nd finally they r together. As I hav always said in ur write up nams. Ur write ups r nvr too flowery or heavily emotional. They are very simply written but yet touches the right chord which is the USP of ur writing style. Wonderful work once again. Keep writing. :) Har din bedtime stories likha kar :P. Tu humlogon ki granny :P har din ek nayi kahani sunayegi. 🤣

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Namratha

@nami2811

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: tanha29
Nami di a biggg hug to you for writing this. Sachi.😳🤗

I am seriously loving SwaRon fans take on the current track ! But you took it to a different level ! I have read a few one shots on the current track and to be frank, I loved this one the most coz it had a practical and rational end to it! The content was very practical and very nicely depicted ! This is something which I wouldn't mind happening! Because this is very much incontinuationto the story we are watching at present!

Loved this one shot.😊

-Mihika.😳

Aww Mihi 🤗
This really means a LOT!! 😳
Thank you for liking it!! :)

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Namratha

@nami2811

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: tannu_swayam
Namsie pehle a big 🤗 for writing this OS. It was extremely well written. Nd I luvd how they came across each other in the abandoned corridoor. Place selection is awesome. :D they wl not go to each other and are thnking the other one doesn't care, so when they see each other in miserable state they r in tab jake inki dimag ki ghanti baji *ting di ting ting*. :P Sharon's breakdown is what I wnt to see nd u brought out a beautifully scene of that. Their convo was vry good. Nd finally they r together. As I hav always said in ur write up nams. Ur write ups r nvr too flowery or heavily emotional. They are very simply written but yet touches the right chord which is the USP of ur writing style. Wonderful work once again. Keep writing. :) Har din bedtime stories likha kar :P. Tu humlogon ki granny :P har din ek nayi kahani sunayegi. 🤣

@bold 🤣

Granny kisko bola?! 😡
Jaa ab se no stories! Hmph!!

Waise I'm glad u liked it! 😆

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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Awesome OS namratha😊😊😊 i had loved this version of their patch up...it goes really well with the track😊😊😊

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

it was awesome

nice attack of the story from ur side

I liked it

thanks for the pm

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Vishaka

@-Vishaka-

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

tera pm dekhakar daud ke aa gayi padhane;)
it was a amazing os nami di...and you have so beautifully written as always. A perfect step by step description of emotion were brillently done..

i would be glade if we get such things onscreen...
and ye kya itna piche res:( koi baat nahi nxt time i wil res first for bedtimes stories😆