ArHi OS: I am just asking, part 2 pg 29 up.

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Yup we would love to read 2nd shot too!!

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_G1234_

@_G1234_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Its a big YES.

waiting for the next chapter. ;)

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sugarhugs

@sugarhugs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

yeh bhi koi poochnay wali baat hai..obviously yes...😆 waiting..😉

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BS.ILoveYou

@BS.ILoveYou

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Omg...you are the same writer woh md me cry.. 😲
And now I m blushing.. ☺️ 😆
Superhot OS... 😉

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Ofcourse !! Neki aur pooch-pooch! Lol
ps- i was gonna ask u to give an alternative ending to 'change' as well...but then i read your thanku note and decided against it...
Will be waiting for the part 2!

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Superb 😳

Edited by arshi-sugi-ipk - 12 years ago

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sabz105

@sabz105

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Congrats Rotten on your second OS!!!!!

It was beautifully written even though very naughty!!!

Thoroughly enjoyed reading it, I'm glad Khushi got the approval from Arnav to stay at her maternal home for a week using similar tactics Arnav used!!!! Lol!!!! It was just hilarious!!!!! Poor Arnav!!!!

Anyways hope you'll write many more OS's like these!!!!!

Great job Rotten!!!!

Can't wait for your next OS!!!!!

Thanks for sending me the PM with the links, really appreciate it!!!

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sabz105

@sabz105

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: rotten.tomato

~NOTE~

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First of all, a bade wala thanks for liking this debut attempt of mine in this genre..i appreciate all the comments n response i got n certainly,every single word of appreciation boosts my confidence, for which i'm really grateful.

Coming to the point now, while going thru the feedback i realized many of you were asking for another part..i hadnt thot this while writing the OS but i blv it could be extended.

so, are u all OK with another part of it..TWO shot..what say?...well,i am just asking..😆..anything you say..i am ok wid it.

keep reading,
Love Rotten!:)