Saiyaara KR SS - FF - Drabble Series *Part 11 - Page 34 - 19/04/2014* - Page 16

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Dude. Plan on updating? 😡
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Originally posted by: Aquilia_Aditi

Dude. Plan on updating? 😡


yes! pretty soon 😛
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Part 9

Kriya, Sharon and Swayam were waiting outside their homes. Rey had gone to bring the car. Sharon was continuously chattering with Swayam. Well, this was one of the things Sharon was good at. Actually two. Making new friends quickly and then chattering away with them. Kria was just standing and waiting. Rey came with the car and they settled in it. Rey was driving, swayam beside him, Sharon behind swayam and kria behind rey. Still Sharon was talking to swayam. These both seemed lost in a world of their own. Kria was sitting quietly, looking out of the window.

"Di, are you okay?" Sharon asked worried keeping a hand on her shoulder.

"huh?" Kria replied

Rey stopped the car and both Swayam and Rey turned back their heads.

"kya hua kria? Tum theek toh ho na? all ok? Pakka?" rey asked in a breadth

"mujhe toh kuch bhi nahi hua. Main bilkul theek hun" kria said confused by their behavior "Shar, tujhe kyun laga ki I'm not well?"

"wo.h...woh...woh aapne itni der se kuch bola nahi na toh main darr gayi thi. Aapko toh bolne ki itni aadat h. I thought ki aapki tabiyat theek nahi h" she replied cheekily.

Rey let out a sigh of relief and everybody laughed out loud at Sharon's childish behavior.

***

Rey's thoughts

Oh god rey! Get a hold on yourself dude! Why did you have to blurt out those things. You would have seemed so desperate. Arrggghhh! What the hell is happening with me. Universe ji, please help! Please please please...wait a sec. did I just say Universe Ji'. Bloddy hell, yes! I'm done with it now. Everytime I try to forget her, something or the other just reminds me of her. She was the one who used to speak Universe ji! *sigh*

***

They soon reached the theatre. Sharon as usual while talking to Swayam took the seat next to him. After Sharon kria was coming, she took the seat next to Sharon and the last seat was occupied by rey. The movies started. While the movie was going on, rey hand slightly brushed kria's. both looked at each other and were lost in each other eyes. For a long time they were staring at each other. They came back to earth when they realized that it was interval. Both were feeling a little uncomfortable.

"Di, what do you want?" Sharon asked "haan bhai, aap bhi bata do. Main aur Sharon lekar aate h" Continued Swayam.

"Popcorn and a Soft Drink" both said together and looked at each other

***

"Swayam"

"Ya"

"Can I asl you a question. Umm...it's a little personal but..."

"obviously Sharon, from the past 2 hours we have been talking about everything and anything. I guess we are friends now. Right?

"of course"

"so then, you ask me whatever you want" saying this swayam smiled

"ok...umm...do..do you have a girl friend?" she closed her eyes after blurting out the words. She slowly opened her right eye to look at his reaction ut she found him smiling rather grinning and waiting for her to open her eyes.

"answer?" she asked

"well, to be frank...umm...ummm.."

Sharon was expecting he would say yes, because he was taking a lot of time to answer. But swayam thought about a little fun.

"ummm... NO" he concluded and then was laughing uncontrollably

"Sharon, your face was worth watching" he still couldn't stop laughing.

Sharon being Sharon walked away angrily to get the things but deep down somewhere she was happy to know that he did not have a girlfriend.

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Hey everybody! I'm so so so so so sorry! Infinite sorry :(
i haven't updated any of my works from a very long time. But i promise from now onwards, updates will be regular as my holidays have started.
Next update of this will be in the evening and then tomorrow morning. i hope that would be the compensation and then regular updates :)
hope you all are good :)
Thanks
Much Love
Anjori <3

Edited by Anjori_ArSha - 11 years ago
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superb.. Thanks for pm
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AWSUM update..
update soon
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amazinggg part👏
hayeee rey worried abt kriya and thinking abt her😉
lovedd d swaron part😆
continue soonish😊
and good to c u back🤗
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aswom update loved it...

bechara rey...

nd last swaron scean was cute


update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
i read the ful story again..

mein pura bhul gayi thi...

well the update was as usual awsome..

liked the swaron part...

loved rey's talk with universeji..

update it soon


with love
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wow it was such a cute update really liked it 😃
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Part 10

Rey and Kria were sitting in the hall, an uncomfortable silence prevailing between them. They did not know what to talk. So, they preferred to stay silent and blankly look at thee screen. After a while when it became impossible for Kria to stay silent, she finally gave up and started talking.
"So Rey, what do you do?"
At first, Rey was a little shocked to see her initiating a talk but then thought better of it. He was kind of happy but did not know why. Kria once again asked him.
"Rey! You there?"
"huh! ya"
"I asked you something"
"Pardon"
"What do you do?"
"I'm a second year engineering student. CS"
"ohh, that's nice"
"you?"
"Somewhat similar! even I'm doing engineering and that too in CS, difference is i'm in 1st year"
"wow! what a coincidence" he smiled
"ya right"
"btw, which college?"
"St. Louis"
"what?"
"I said 'St. Louis' "
"really?"
"yes"
"it's the same college as mine"
"that's awesome" she sounded excited.
This was the first time they were alone after their first meeting and surprisingly, they were free and comfortable while talking to each other. they didn't expect such a thing before they started talking but destiny has it's own ways.

***

Meanwhile Sharon was standing by the counter, waiting for the other person to give her the things. Swayam came from behind. He called out her name. She didn't react. He again tried but all he got was a cold shoulder. Everytime he tried to talk to her, he got a royal ignore. All the way back to the hall, he was trying to talk to her and apologise for laughing so much but she being Sharon Rai Prakash was nowhere to listen to him. They reached the hall, handed over the things to Rey and Kria and sat down. Soon the movie resumed. Sharon still didn't forgive Swayam. Swayam had no other option rather than waiting for the movie to end so that he can have a conversation with Sharon.

***

All the four Souls sitting there were thinking about each other.

The movie was long forgotten.


Edited by Anjori_ArSha - 11 years ago

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