ARSHI SS:Between the Lines|T2| LINK TO THD 3 [CHP 17] - PG 140**

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pravallika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#341

-unres-
Awesome update dear..
Loved the way arnav said kushi that he din't regret the kiss 👏
Atleast he cleared that...
Hope there will be some progress in their relation in the next update..
Waiting to see her reaction when she knows the truth about pike..
Really liked the way arnav was enjoying when she praised pike..
Waiting to read more..

Edited by pravallika - 11 years ago

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srilathas

@srilathas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#342

Dear excellent update...

what is it in your writing that brings out the best from arshi? the conversation between them was written excellent...since u had already prepared the readers of what to expect i am not commenting anything about the story...

i like this story very much...so much different from the rest...

keep it up...great work...

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divya

@diyadivya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#343

wonderful updt

i really wonder wt wud b her reactn vn she cums 2 knw itz none other dn d man himself- arnav

Edited by diyadivya - 11 years ago

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#344

And our Crispin pike is back:)

I'm loving it...aarti...

somehow I like this bit of theirs than the attraction phase!!! Out would be an added bit when the attraction is coupled with insight to each others life albeit without revealing directly... I'm kinda certain Khushi will chance upon his writing one day and will easily recognize it!!! But will pretend to not know it until the time comes...wow!!! That would be fun!!

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sman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#345

Feeling so sad for Arnav..he truly deserves Kushi

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Arati

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Posted: 11 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: LeenaRocks
And our Crispin pike is back:)
I'm loving it...aarti...
somehow I like this bit of theirs than the attraction phase!!! Out would be an added bit when the attraction is coupled with insight to each others life albeit without revealing directly... I'm kinda certain Khushi will chance upon his writing one day and will easily recognize it!!! But will pretend to not know it until the time comes...wow!!! That would be fun!!

Haha...now that will be a good plot change :)) guess u'll have to wait n watch...or in his matter...read !

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arshi_1982

@arshi_1982

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Posted: 11 years ago

#347

"unputdownable" is one word for all ur writings. It happened with me when i was reading "Maid in Love"

I was wishing u would have written more about the festival, however how much ever u mentioned was interesting.

Their interaction, though with much distance, seem to have the unavoidable sparks. I am eager to know if Mr Pike will get close to Khushi first or Arnav. I mean will Arnav let her know abt his attraction before he discloses the real identity of Mr. pike.

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Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#348

😃

I had a happy smile while reading this update ...

Loved reading Khushi performing the rituals of the puja ...

and most of all the admiring glances she got from Arnav for

dressing up in a saree with flowers and all ... 😳

They both are so cutely stubborn ...

inspite of acknowledging their attraction for each other they

decide to be just friends ... 😲 😕 incorrigible ...

But the cutest was when he wanted to hear Khushi's opinion about

Crispin Pike !!! and his style of writing ...

Really enjoyed the update ... Thank you ...

Edited by Kishmish - 11 years ago

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#349

Missie did you just realize you actually poured out everything or conveyed to The Pike!!!?

Hmm nice update? Actually it was like watching a volleyball match the ball travelling from one court to the other but the same two contenders only thing different emotions were the other players!! I hope I make sense :p

These two can never talk what they actually feel eh? Apart from you are completely covered lmao that part was fun!

Khushi giving her opinion about living and he marveling in the thoughts was good!

But pike parah was the best! Sigh if only they confess what they actually feel! Would it be too soon?

Cheers