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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
congrates for the new thread. eagerly waiting for 31. please update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
di is here...i m dancing..or woh bhi update k sath...wow
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
congrats on new thread...
eagerly waiting for the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: chetna19

di is here...i m dancing..or woh bhi update k sath...wow


Same pinch yaa... Evn I'm dancing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
congrats to ur new thread and now waiting for new update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
👏👏👏
Thread 7..

Wuhu DEEP DI

Unres...

Part 1

Huh Arnav you Dumb man.. She left Khushi like that and went for his long drive.

and he thought that she dint love him

What is the relation between you and me Arnav? Who are you to me? What am I to you?

Why dont you believe me? Why dont you see through my actions?

Why is it difficult for you to understand what I feel for you? What am I doing wrong?

Should I remain silent or Should I speak out loud? Or Should I accept it quietly and wait for that one Miraculous day to hear you speak your heart out.


Khushi's these Words.. literally affected me.

How come Arnav dint understand her?

and that Pic.. Di.. Ufff.. Really i had tears in my eyes.


(I never cry u know di? my friends n parents used to call me stone hearted.)


There Arnav was trying to hit himself for misunderstanding her feelings for him as love..


God what wrong with him


Damn it.. and he just started distancing him from her.

Hai ram

Good that Khushi also stayed quiet without talking to him.

When Khushi said that

This should serve you right Mr. Raizada

Really I thought that she is upto something.. something like that wood toast


Part 2

Hahaha.. she put chilli garlic sauce

He deserves

Huh but it went overboard.

He literally starting spitting fire


Urghhh here comes the Unexpected.

Milk Kiss

Really? Kiss with Milk in mouth?


Di u know u r incredible. Only you could think such things.

Taming the shrew

Loved the way she just held him and kissed him even after she transferred the milk.

Huh never knew A kiss could bring out the unsaid feelings.

Well I am not that good in writing shayari like Pooj or good in words like others.


All i could say is

This moment in this Chap was itself like a poem.

No words nothing.. just feelings play

Beautiful Di


And then the confession


it was the best confession I have seen or read.


Loved it

U nailed it Di

Actually I expected something When I read that Khushi was wearing Black sari with thin Silver Border.. But...

the Kiss


Ufff


Just a kiss can make the surroundings feel hot.. well this one did.

and the edits perfect match


The part where Arnav covered Khushi from rain by tilting her and then deepened the kiss..

uhhh That was heights.



The Dawn In their life.

Loved the whole chapter.



Edited by MeenuArshiCrazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Deepthi di Congo for becoming goldie
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
😲
main kis duniya mein thi...
My res...😳

***unres***

First of all congrats for turning golden Deepthi Di...Ab toh tum mere jaisa ho chuki ho...😛(Shorna means gold like 😳)

Ab mere tube-light dimaag uss sawal ka matlab samjhi...😳 and my gutter mind is activated now...😛
Mujhe bhi woh drink ka naam janna hai...😊 I am waiting for that...

well coming to the update...Just yesterday I was wondering 30th September itnaa dur kyun hai...and just then got ur pm...yaha aakar dekha you've already updated...OMG...that too THIS update...ArShi first proper kiss...confession...WOW...

when Arnav left her just like that, what amazed me most was though both were seeing the incidence differently, but they were thinking almost same lines...
"What is the relation between you and me Arnav?"
"I do not know what relation I share with you and what I should share with you!"

And returning back, how he noticed every tiny detail of her feature...if only he knew why she had cried...*sigh*

So Arnav flew away to avoid Khushi...And Khushi got angry...she had every right to do that...yeh Raizada samajhte kyun nahi...

So Arnav asked Aman how Khushi was...I loved that...

Oh God...Khushi punished him with spicy food...serves him right...buddhu ko pata hi nahi, kis baat pe sorry kehna chahiye and kis baat pe nahi...silly boy...

And then THE KISS...with milk...OMG...Di...what was that...I was as shocked as Arnav...too unique Di...I just loved it too much...

And finally Arnav realized everything...that she's fallen for him...and also that he is an idiot...

Di...I loved how he asked her..."Khushi, yeh sab? Kab Se?" and Khushi's telling him everything...WOW...

And then his confession...OMG...one of the most beautiful confession I've ever read or see...his opening his heart out to her...just AWESOME...


and then the KISS...in rain...in details...also with pictures...so so amazing...

Thanks Lala & Tanu...for such fabulous words...they are too beautiful...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
congrats on new thread😊
UnRes😳
edited-
OH MY GOD!!!! OMG OMG OMG *screaming like hell and doing dance in KKG style*
GOD!!!! Deepthi, speechless!!!!!!
superb, mindblowing, fabulous, fantastic, ek dum dhamakedar update⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
seriously I didn't imagine it at all that this much will happen between them as arnav left her alone... but wow... they way you turned the events left me speechless
felt bad when arnav was feeling guilty thinking he forced her and for khushi coz she wa just too confused not knowing what to do and what is right and what is wrong...
and arnav why the hell you didn't meet and left early in the morning.. well glad he left only for a day and planned to return back that evening itself... I was kind of thinking that he might left for 2-3 days or weeks but glad it didn't happen *thank god*
well done khushi.. he deserve silent treatment from you,😛 .. how could he all that what he has done!!! and it surely rile him and again happy that it did.. but he apologize but for what!!! damn raizada.. he apologize for bloody thinking she was not ready.. very bad.. *magar aaj mai itni khush hoon ke meine tujhko maaf kiya vats*😉😉
I loved the way khushi tried to make him understand what he did was not right and especially for what he apologize... but she way too much... well it brought her to kiss him😉
and gosh.. kiss like.. she used all power to control😆
loved the after effects of the kiss.. especially when and how arnav said 'wow' to himself..😳😉
wow.. they finally did it.. they finally confessed and such a beautiful and heartfelt confession it was.. I was close to tears seeing them like this yaar and was so happy for them🤗
OMG.. those kisses.. well did you edit those pics☺️.. coz you know what I just LOVED them.. it made my though go far away.. well losing myself to them and their charisma😳
again loved how they behave after their kiss like perfect lovers...
beautiful lines guys
thanks for updating In tight schedule...
continue soon😳
thanks for the pm😃
Edited by jas0308 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
too good, did not anticipate the kiss to be like that 😆

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