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Hey all!!

Well here I am with a SS. Well the idea for this story goes to Suwin. Umn this story will have something different!! It will have most probably 10 or 12 chapters. I will complete it asap. Well this will be continued only if u like its prologue.

At first I was like what shall I write? But then my mind worked and I came up with this. Two days I was thinking about its name but nothing came up in my mind. So it will be a favor if u will suggest me name after reading prologue. I will credit u haan if u do!!

Acha no bak bak now... Below is the Prologue..

PROLOGUE

Khushi was crying all night and her husband was sleeping with all comfort without any worries. Khushi was crying and thinking to escape from Gujral Mansion again. She got up and took some money and went near the door and silently she opened the door and went to the gate. When she reached there she saw Abhi Gujral ( Khushi's husband) standing at the gate.

He kept his hand on her hairs and pulled her hairs tightly so that she should scream louder and louder. He kept his finger on her mouth and said," koi faida nahi hai chilake... yahan koi nahi aayega!!" ( It will be of no use darling. No one will come here) and laughed evilly.

Khushi tried to get rid of him but all her efforts went in vain. He went inside dragging her to the ground. All Khushi did was to cry and requested to leave her.

Next morning Khushi made breakfast and tea for her so called husband.

As Abhi asked her to do daily she came and kissed him on his cheek and offered him tea saying," jaanu get up."

He woke up and looked at the clock and threw coffee on her face saying," it's 10 am and u are making me wake now?"

He further said," Now go and get changed."

Khushi's face was burning but she didn't utter a word because she was used to this.

Khushi went and took a saree and get dressed in it. It was a plain red saree with golden border. It was Karwa chauth that day.

Karwa-Chauth: A fast which is kept for husband's long life.

Khushi came dressed well and asked her husband," Abhi can I go to mandir today as its Karwa chauth and I.."

Before she could complete Abhi hugged her and allowed.

Khushi smiled and went to remove his clothes from wardrobe for his office.

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Who knew the smiling girl who gives happiness to everyone will have to face all this?

Who thought she will marry to a guy who changes his behavior every second?

Who thought that a devil will marry Khushi just for money?

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Marriage isn't a game. It's a bond which is for lifetime.

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Hope u all like the story line. Pls do comment that I must continue or not.

Will be waiting for ur likes and comments.

Harsha

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Posted: 12 years ago
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INDEX

Prologue : Page 1 (above )

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For PM's like this post! :)


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sounds interesting...:)
Looking forward to the UPDATES..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the start
plz update soon
thanks for the pm
Twinkle
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting proloug poor girl hmm excited for the update. Thks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting prologue. Thanx for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very touching concept...a girl married to a man who change his behaviour towards her at will and for no reason... I'm sure he is mentally sick... Even though he married her money...there was no need to hurt her so much that she wants to run away from him...
As per title... How about KHOSHISH... a try to adjust in her husbands life... A try to change her life ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
Unres!!

Wow new wala ss?
Hayye!! 🥳

Awesome proluge man oh sorry lady!! 😆

Well does he suffer from split personality or something? 🤔 😕

Or is something is wrong with that person? Jo bhi ho Arnav ki entry jaldi se laa aur us Abhi ki waat laga de 😡

Ohkay chal abhi ke liye bas itna hi...baki ka main next updatr main likhungi

Bye and love uu...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for starting a new story
Prologue is interesting and sad at the same time as khushi is being hurt by her husband...
Continue soon!!!
Thanks for the pm 😉

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