KriYaansh Drabble Series:With the Strings and Love|[C] - Page 27

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Vaish24 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
u got to strip a piece of ur attir for every failed task.. ;)
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Link to Chapter 10 : Chapter 10



Chapter 11



*Turn the Speakers On :)




Jaddu Tainu Vekhiyaa
Pehli Vari Main Taan
Tennu Hi Takda Raiya
Jachda Nahi Si
Tere Naal Main Taan
Phir Vee Jachda Raiya


Does she even know, How beautiful she looks when she fold her arms across her chest, with her red-angry nose and curled lips? He smiled, looking downwards, fidgeting with his fingers, trying to rub off any remnant thoughts about anything else than her. She might think he is ignoring her, but in no heaven he can ever ignore her; And can he ever? She is the most prettiest person he have ever met, Her eyes- so innocent, her heart- even more innocent than that of a kid, he always wondered what would it feel like to wake up with her every morning, lifting the bed sheet cover to find her still sleeping in his embrace. Certainly, a little she knows how much he really adores her. And he was happy this way, letting things go with the flow, let the increasing proximity creates magic in between them which both just couldn't deny, and fall into each other's arms...



Khinchda Raiya Tainu Apni Ore
Tainu Main Kenda Raiyaan
Khinchda Raiya Tainu Apni Ore
Tainu Main Kenda Raiyaan


Her lips, her soft, her extremely soft lips, he just couldn't wipe that sensation off from his mind, still he feels that tickling sensation on his lips and he rubs them hard as it was distracting him from his mission. The feeling of pulling her close and letting his fingers travel down her sculpted shoulder blades, planting few wet kisses down there, rubbing of the edges with thumbs, kissing the soft spot of her throat, and then pressing her womanly form into his manly stature to feel every vein pumping blood in her body, he was desperate, Desperate to turn all his dreams into reality.


O Heeriye Tainu Le Jaana
Yeh Gal Tu Maan Vich Basaa
Nahi Jeena Tere Bina
Saanu De Naa Sazaa
O Heeriye Tainu Le Jaana


He saw her face suddenly turn gloomy and he knew why she was sad. Of course why not? He damn loved her, and she wanted to hear her name as the answer of that question, and frankly he wanted to obey her feelings and do the same... But there are few priorities of them both, that moment needs to be much more special, private. And in no way he could let anybody spoil it.
He wanted to declare this to whole world that she belongs to him, but not without her content. So he opted an easy way out and let that moment wait for them a bit more... And this time it should more private. And in that moment he hated being a celebrity.


Jaane Naa Tu Aye Kyu
Teri Teri Yaadon
Mein Tanha Hua
Tere Liye Saansein
Chale Meri Zinda Hua

Tu Jo Kahe To
Paaniyon Pe Chal Dun Main
Karaa Tera Sadka
Tera Hi Sajda Karaa


He felt sorry, watching her partially broke down. She must have waited for this moment... And this thought was killing him from inside.
He saw her get up and leave from the lawn; he was quick to do the same.

"Hey... Kria..." He said loudly, stopping her in middle of lawn.
And she turned around to face him, giving him a not-so-pleasant look.

"Erm... Are you going home?" He asked her randomly after thinking for seconds. Firstly, he didn't expect her to stop and secondly she seemed a bit lost and angry.

"Yes..." She replied with a stern smile and turned around to leave.

"Hey Kria..." He spoke again, this time only to stop her, mindlessly.

"Now what?" She said angrily.

"Can I drop you at home?" He asked, shivering, praying to his god for saving him from her wrath.

"Don't I have a Car or Legs?" She replied instantly. "I can manage" she added.

"No... Please... Let me do it..." He said, holding her arm.


O Hiriye Tainu Le Jaana
Yeh Gal Tu Maan Vich Basaa
Nahi Jeena Tere Bina
Saanu De Na Sazaa
O Heeriye Tainu Le Jaana

And she looked into his eyes, he was concerned for her genuinely , and somewhere it gave her immense satisfaction. She agreed, but that doesn't meant she wasn't angry!



Second One for today! 🤗
Now shower some kisses 😆
And Yes! My heart just beats for Ayushmann! 😳 Hayee.. I am in Love with this Song.

Yeah, The song used is "O heeriye" Sung by Ayushmann Khurana ! ❤️

And Second last chapter
I hope you all enjoyed this so far.
I will try me level best to meet everyone's expectations. Some of you might be able to guess the end :( 🤢
But Hey, I am unpredictable! 😆 LOL!

Love :*

And hey, If you haven't checked my Index (WC)
Do drop a comment there.

Edited by Incandescence. - 11 years ago
Vaish24 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
main cheating karna chahta tha lekin nhi huyi cheating..
geeky moment: kisi cheez ko dil se chaho so u get it... i wanted first comment got it without cheating...

that was so effing adorable..

i cud totally imagine the entire scene..

she pouting.. and his thoughts and everything..

bornfire bhi kar liya maine imagine.. ;) irrespective ki woh hai ki nhi.. :P

i really loved how you showed the thoughts..

thoughts of a loverboy... ;)

it was so sweet pupu..

now check the previous page.. a little bit hint ki how iwll i proceed in the OS..

and fir WC check karo.. and meri prob ka haran karo pupu... :*
Edited by -Vaish- - 11 years ago
Vaish24 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
meri dost ka bhi fav hai woh song... :P
changed ur pw??

i wanted to cheat.. :'(
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Posted: 11 years ago
resss

unress

OMG uppuu...

2 updates back to back... *eee* ...

Dil khush kar ditta tune mera toh... 😳


both the parts were just simply fantastic...

Rey toh solid wala laga raha hai Kria ki by god... 😆

and Kria... like evry other girl... Burning from all the angles... 🤣


but.. its a must for a private moment.. 😉

and.. happy ending too...😛


Loved the end..

i think now i shld expect somthing..shouldnt i... 😛 😉


Loved bothh the parts... 😃


and..

P.S. - I love the songgg 😃 😳

Ayushmann Rocksss..!!! 😃




Edited by akanksha_arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Two updatess wowwowowowo Treaat on dusherra...
Awsumm.EEP n ayushman ki voice on series nycc ideaaa...
I loved both if themmm Thanxxx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
unres
vaishu tu meri jaga kha gayi... Gandi tharki
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Upiii upi upi :* 🤗
i love you


*i guess my comments comes with this tagline on ur updates evrytime*
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hehe
eeepppss
i loved it...
So so beautifully written
sachi...you are an amazing writer
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hehe...bechara rey kitna wait karing to tell kria...
Bt control karwa usse...pata nai kya kya soch ke rakha hai🤣
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so she agreed...finally...dono akele honge kahipe...


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Ahhh mahn..itna jaldi khatam hoing yeh story.. :'(
i'll miss it

chal ab fatafat last part bhi update karde...
Am getting a feeling ki woh mere type ka part hoga.. <3 <3
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love u dher saara

thanx for the pm
Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 11 years ago
Ocean.eyes thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
kidhar gaya tera tantrum...ek bhi nai pheka
huh
gaya mera 1st place
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...
it was really nice...
GTG
in a hurry so short comment.. 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
A beautiful update dear..
loved it..
didnt expect a second one today
oh heerye is one of my favs now...
And with this all i can say is i'm speechless
next update dede soon..

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