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@-.QTPie.-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

awesome os bhaii,
loved it...
the song sequence was so perfect...
loved it.
ur a awesome writer bhai...

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

I really liked this OS since you are a newbie with writing, you still write quiet good.

i really liked how you showed the emotional re-confession between them! That 'you are so wild' and 'you are so shameless' scene was like funny. 😛

Keep it up and write more.

-Marium

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Ayesha

@Ayesha.behroz

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

heya howz you?
finally u update yar
wow amazing loved it
thnc for the pm
i loved ur writting style
pleasewrite more
den surely pm me
u are amazing writting
this os is so so nycc
i loved ur working
style,thinking,concept
all over all amazing
superb fantabuloyse
brilliant os keeo it up