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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
brilliant piece.
hope this one is nt a dark story coz i love happy ending :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
awesome chapter.hope arnav will change his habit .what will be khushis reaction afer see her father?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Hey thnxx for d pm,loved d update. Omg shyam and arnav both hate khushi. Hope shashi is nt doing nythng wrong in bringing khushi in india. Fab. Keep updating.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Its brilliant.. cant wait to read more..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Amazing Update...

Loved it...

Can't wait for next one...

Update Soon...😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shruti21

update is quite long.. :D

Yeah, I went on and on, and actually lost track of number of words 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
res
unres!!

i am crying and this is your fault!
do u even know how difficult it was for me to open this chapter and read considering you already told me what to expect!!

you know what? i absolutely dont want arnav and khushi to meet, this is anything but pleasent!
i hate to see this jerk-type arnav and this amazing khushi!

i loved how khushi handled herself throughout the update.
i am so impressed by her.
usually we say that khushi doesnt deserve arnav but here all i can say is that arnav doesnt even deserve the sight of khushi's one strand of hair.
look at her, after everything she has gone through, after every lie she was fed, after knowing her mother dies, her father abandoned her and her 2nd mother was brutally killed, she was still mature, smart and knew how to react to situations and look at that ba**ard, he cant even take his parents death properly. he still had his family, yet he went ahead to destroy his and so many other lives.

Shashi Gupta. i dont know what to say. he was amazing!
he had the guts to go through so much in his life and yet stand strong.
the love of his life was taken away from him, his daugther, a part of HER, had to be sent away and not told about his existance and yet he stood strong
his daughter denied him of his position in her life, that same daughter who was a symbol of their love refused to accept him as her father, yet he stood strong!
he had to recall all the memories of him and his love and tell it to his daughter, but this time he wanted to break down. he wanted to tell her how much he loved Garima and wanted her back but he didnt, he couldnt.
this was about her life and he could not risk to loose the symbol of his love.

the way u have potrayed their story, i cud not help but let the tears trickle down my cheeks. it was the most beautiful and heart wrenching story i have read!
i doubt i would ever be able to fall in love with arnav and khushi as a couple in this story but i sure have fallen in love with shashi and garima!
i dont know how shashi has kept himself alive after all of this but he is the most strong person in this story.
but at the same time i was also very very disheartened to read about how he got his legal wife pregnant. khushi was right, how cud he claim to love Garima yet make sheetal pregnant. i am only hoping that there is a story behind this, a story which tells us that he is not the biological father of shyam.

khushi on the other side has done such an amazing job.
the right expressions on the right time.
she knew what shashi was saying was true but how could she believe him?
how cud she be sure that he would not come the next day and tell her this was all a joke and he is not her father? this was about her heart which had been broken so many times that she could not even think of going through it again.

i dont know how khushi would react when she comes to know about arnav's hand in all of this. i dont know how she is going to accept him, honestly, she should not. he doesnt deserve to be loved after everything he has done.

i dont know what to expect but i cant wait to read more!!!
amazing job done, get us some more soon!!!
Edited by cherrybloom1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE LOVED THE FATHER AND DAUGHTER MEET AND THE CONFRONTATION WICKED VERY INTENSE UPDATE LOVED HOW SHE WANTED TO KNOW WHY YET HE IS STILL KEEPING BACK WHY HER MOTHER WAS KILLED AND WHY THEY KEPT TRYING TO KILL HER AWESOME UPDATE THANKS FOR THE PM
Edited by dumas - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Just read the first chapter and gotta say it was an intense one filled with every other emotion you possibly could name. Arnav has taken his parents death really badly. Also what ever nani has told he has taken in a wrong light as I see. So he badly wants to revenge his parents untimely death and the way he is panning on doing that is by destroying Garima's and Shashi's daughter who turns out to be Khushi. If Shyam is involved obiviously something is gravely wrong, maybe it's too early to make assumptions on characters as yet, but I have a feeling Shyam might be having an ulterior motive behind his quest. Gotta say I was totally blown away by your writing. It was fantabulous! You have explained everything so vividly could visualize each and every minute of the update, it just was beyond exceptional. Khushi is returning to India, and she seems to be aware of Arnav. Can't even imagine how their story will begin and how it could be😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Khushi is awesum
Muhaaa i loved her

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