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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#241

Finally some progression in Arnav Khushi relationship.

I liked reading their awkward conversation. But more than that I liked reading your description about NK. It was adorable. I could actually picture a hapless guy trying to string together some English words to make some sense to the foreign returned Ma'am.

Shashi was amused at the phone call as he was already expecting some threat. They must have had planned something big for him to be so relaxed and chilled out about the phone call.

Anjali and Shyam both know each other and are trying to out smart each other. The game just got better !

You are doing a fab job girl !

Keep it up.

Edited by harsha.. - 11 years ago

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#242

res 4 me😳

Unres-

OMG! Whenever I read ur update of this story..its like m reading a thrilling and mysterious novel perfectly executed by perfect author👏

In the chilling, biting cold he was standing there shirtless, she saw across the mini wall separating them. His hair was messy tangles. His eyes as usual filled with amusement and his perfect jaw sprinkled with day old stubble.

Perfect jaw?! Where did that come from?! When had she started related something as good as perfect with this idiot?!

Her voice suddenly caught in her throat, as she checked his broad chest and taut and pecked stomach displayed naked in front of her. As her eyes traveled up she could she a vain pulsing in his neck, this Adam's apple bobbing as he swallowed making her swallow tightly with him. The hollow base of his neck with strong collarbone was so gorgeous, she almost drooled. His black track pants hung very low on his narrow waist. The broad muscles of his tanned upper arms rippled and stretched as he crossed his arms over his chest, drawing her attention again to that area. He was so well sculpted, so smooth...

Stop it Khushi, she chided herself and closed her eyes tightly.

Arnav saw her shutting her eyes and suppressed a chuckle. He had seen her eyes widen as she took his shirtless form in. He knew he had major effects on the opposite sex, but to have this girl unnerved enflamed his male ego to no end.

It was also bothering though, that he was affected by her as much.

In those black tracks and grey looses howdy she looked so adorable. Her black her were carelessly drawn back into a messy ponytail and her lips, nose and cheeks had that cute reddish tinge to them.

Cute? Something mocked him. Cute weren't his kind. He liked kinky and bold. But she is feisty. He remembered. Plus he did like this combination of coy kitty and roaring tigress. He knew she was passionate, was sure of the fact. But, this sudden bashfulness pleased him beyond words. A rare combination...(Both were checking out eachother..sparks already are flaming from time to time whenever they met/collide😉)

So the game is ON!!😉

Anjali and shyam both are aware of eachother real identity and they both are thinking that they are smarter than the other!😲

Hats off Pakhee👏👏👏 for writing an amazing and great story😛

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#243

i'll un-res at night or kal.. Mummy calling! Sorry!

Unres~

paakhee, you have given me lots of fodder to think upon! Really with each new chapter a new twist comes up!

Its not that hard to understand Khushi, anyone who's shifted to a different place, froma place they have spent some really important and long years of their life, would understand her lonliness.. Besides she is in an entirely new country, the one she has only heard about, all alone with few ground breaking revelations to accept and ponder on!!

She basically is under : 'House Arrest' and that will easily frustrate many but Khushi here is showing lots of patience and courage!

NK seems a nice guy .. Sweet, shy but nevertheless, friendly. Besides Khushi can teach him 'English'.. And he can be a good friend too :)

about Arnav, every time i'm unsure. Really! I said it last time and i stand by it, he shows himself for what he is not! But around Khushi his mask falls.. Like he is not even bothering to hide!

*Make Khushi drool over his half naked state, often, gives us a fair idea about his sexiness.. ;)

the call shashi received from Rana, so the wheels have now set into Motion!

** even ablind can see a Black Bugatti.. But the way you write, i mean your vocab and choice of words is such fun to read! :' its a four wheeler fanatic's wet dream'.. I loved this!

Aman is the sensible while Anjali is fast and furious.. Daring and vivacious!
So Shyam Gupta is equally aware of who she is, as much as she is aware of who he is..!

Besides both of them are brother-sister right..? Shyam is Rana and Sheetal's son! And rana had raped Anjali's mother, which had led to Anjali's birth.. So it makes them Bro-sis! Haina..??

Shyam is already aware of Anjali, asli pehchan..! They must also know about how Shashi is planning to set them up, because Anjali is a major part of their plan! her identity being already known, puts a lot of things in open!

P.S : do tell me if i'm thinking wrong anywhere.. Hum tum par nirbhar hain!

Anywys.. Great Going.. Already making my brain work hard!;)

Edited by aashi12 - 11 years ago

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arnshi

@arnshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#244

hmm so the game is on from both sides...let see how its proceeds

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Richa

@richaarshi

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#245

amazing update...

anjali is using other name...

loved the conversation between anjali and aman

superb

thanks for the PM

update soon

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koisk

@koisk

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#246

Oh shyam knows that it's Anjali, how?

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#247

Hey thnxx for d pm,loved d update. Amazingly good. Cudnt be more better. Loved evry bit of it. Fantastic. Ohh so anjali is khushi muriel, lovely. Woowie anjali and shyam meet. Update soon