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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aashi12

Paakhee.. You forgot one really important charecter.. How could you yaar..??


Edited!! Check now😊
Edited by camlin - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aashi12

Paakhee.. You forgot one really important charecter.. How could you yaar..??

adding ur name anu di?😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting update. All the dots are connecting slowly.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanx for mentioning my name dear!
Feeling really blessed at the moment :)
Nicely described sketch, it doesn't reveal much.
D way u described Shashi shows his power.
Also Arnav is d son of Shashi's friend, so Shashi might b knowing about Arnav being Khushi's neighbour.
May be i am reading too much between d lines, will wait for d story to unfold.
Thanx for d bonus 'summary' :)
Great going.
Garima's sacrifice reminds me of the song:
'' Ishq bina kya marna yaara, Ishq bina kya jeena''
Edited by Sj236 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
is rana singh related to sashi gupta?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey thnxx for d pm,loved d update beautifuly written. Now i understood y rana is lyk dat. A very lovely update. All chahracters are potrayed strongly. Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
arnav is a model!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wating for next one

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow this story is so interesting... Very captivating... I was planning to go to bed after reading the 1st chap n was planning on reading the rest next day ... N here I'm reading the latest update at 3am ... Very brilliantly written... Eagerly waiting for the next update ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow , so I was correct about Bipasha Basu.

Please learn something from my case , even if something is inspired never give credit. There is a possibility that people won't recognize that it is inspired. You never know when someone decides to sue you for plagiarism. 😆

Hats off girl !! A very well written update. Your vocabulary is fantastic. I felt like I was solving a reading comprehension passage from AIMCAT.

The kind of effort you have put is showing prominently. I liked many lines from the update like :



There is always a fine line between right and wrong, good and bad, black and grey... Smudging the line is easier than intercepting it.



The decisions we make, decide who we are.

Motivated me to get back to solving the Quant section I was solving before but left midway.




truth is the darkest secret and the most desired opulence, but also the most feared thing

Wow. You have a way with words girl. Brilliant ! There is a way of presenting things. Its the packaging that matters. Your writing is very riveting, the words are far from banal and make me see the same thing in a different light. They make you ponder over a simple thing because you present the simple thing so beautifully.




nude models, with sexy figures paraded around him. Some without bra initials, some without briefs. He had long ago stopped wondering, if modesty was still integrity? But then again, in back stage world, there were no reverences if it was a female body or a male body.

Reminded me of the many articles I have read about modelling world and fashion show's backstages. It just confirms your thorough research on the subject. You have put some serious efforts girl !


Arnav's arrogance and over confidence reminded me of Kangana Ranaut's character from Fashion. People tend to accrue haughty attitude as they approach the apex in their career.

You have introduced Rana's character and set the ball rolling for the future updates. I am eagerly waiting to read further.


The character sketch put the things in perspective but I had not confusion since I had read each and every update carefully. * pats self on back *
Edited by harsha.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: harsha..

Wow , so I was correct about Bipasha Basu.


Please learn something from my case , even if something is inspired never give credit. There is a possibility that people won't recognize that it is inspired. You never know when someone decides to sue you for plagiarism. 😆
Lesson learn't 😆😆

Hats off girl !! A very well written update. Your vocabulary is fantastic. I felt like I was solving a reading comprehension passage from AIMCAT.
Look who is talking!!!😲

The kind of effort you have put is showing prominently. I liked many lines from the update like :



There is always a fine line between right and wrong, good and bad, black and grey... Smudging the line is easier than intercepting it.



The decisions we make, decide who we are.

Motivated me to get back to solving the Quant section I was solving before but left midway.

Really? Thank you so much 😳😳 When you mention them like this, It feels like I am reading a thesis on my work!! Thank you so much 😃



truth is the darkest secret and the most desired opulence, but also the most feared thing

Wow. You have a way with words girl. Brilliant ! There is a way of presenting things. Its the packaging that matters. Your writing is very riveting, the words are far from banal and make me see the same thing in a different light. They make you ponder over a simple thing because you present the simple thing so beautifully.
Harsha you are actually making me blush!! Itanai Tareef??😲😲
But, seriously Thank you so much 😊


nude models, with sexy figures paraded around him. Some without bra initials, some without briefs. He had long ago stopped wondering, if modesty was still integrity? But then again, in back stage world, there were no reverences if it was a female body or a male body.

Reminded me of the many articles I have read about modelling world and fashion show's backstages. It just confirms your thorough research on the subject. You have put some serious efforts girl !

Yes the articles and all helped me here. Efforts ?? I am lazy!! 😉


Arnav's arrogance and over confidence reminded me of Kangana Ranaut's character from Fashion. People tend to accrue haughty attitude as they approach the apex in their career.
I would say he is more of Priyanka's character. You will see in future how. One thing, he won't compromise with his job. Just that for now!😆

You have introduced Rana's character and set the ball rolling for the future updates. I am eagerly waiting to read further.
This character was the most difficult for me to write. I was absolutely drained after writing his part.
But I hope I don't disappoint you😕


The character sketch put the things in perspective but I had not confusion since I had read each and every update carefully. * pats self on back * 😆😆


You have made me so nervous after such a detailed feedback. I was about to update, but now I think I will again revise the chapter 😛

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