Astha Shlok FF -IPK-EPB - WILL LOVE HAPPEN??LAST PART updated- page 69

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neha2005

@neha2005

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#221

What an exciting and action packed update! i feel sooo bad for shlok but i hope he can get astha back now with the help of his mom. thanks for the pm!

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ankita sharma

@Ankita__S

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Yipeee u updtd feeling like dancing.
Fabbb updt yaar. It was mind blowing.
Thank god shlok came to know dis side of his dad but now he deserved to b alone. I still hate shlok alot.
Thanks for d pm.

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Ishita Irani

@IshitaIrani

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Awesome update
I know shlok is repenting for his mistakes bit what was astha mistake in all this as she has to suffer
He blindly love his dad but she lost het dad in all this
Cont soon
Waiting for next update

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#224

he knows the truth ...but its too late

some wounds in life never heal they leave a scar as it is too late to put medicine

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Susanrao

@Susanrao

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#225

finally, omg i loved the update, poor shlok, i wish him luck in getting astha back

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ruhiluvzaya

@ruhiluvzaya

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#226

i read four part its lovely

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@rbb1

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Wow finally he knows the truth that's good, thank you for the update. It's nice his mum is back hope he gets Astha soon

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tamanna-azaan

@tamanna-azaan

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#228

i read all the parts in one go...
and it was awsum..
very beautifully written...
pls pm me next time..

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Poor shlok...

Feel bad for him...

He Blindley trust his father and he broke his trust

Now he understand Aastha's pain...

Very nice updet...

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nikhilanand912

@nikhilanand912

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#230

I respect your writing. I was able to visualize the serial reading you FF. Simple language and faultless writing makes your FF very close to the reader. Keep up this good work and continue writing with your heart