Astha Shlok FF -IPK-EPB - WILL LOVE HAPPEN??LAST PART updated- page 69 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice Update..!
pOor astha😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it please pm me when u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: emanali

Superb...ba itx tooo short na...kindly make sure next update shd n long plx...


i will try dear.. i dont know how to write long ffs like many others do.. my thought process not that good.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great update. just loved it.i just hope, soon shlok will come to know the truth and will be in love with her...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi guys.. i have been bit unwell hence unable to make quick updates.. i have made a short update of the story .. soon a good part will be updated soon.. till then thanks for the patience and support

Part 13

Astha and Shlok reach the house..

They enter the house to see Niranjan, Anjali and Varad..

They all look at them in shock.. Astha and Shlok in wedding attire and garland and all

Shlok starts walking away without paying any heed to them.. NA calls aloud " SHLOK !!!"

Shlok and astha stop walking .. Shlok tells astha " go to my room"

Astha quietly goes away to his room..

Shlok comes back to his father " baba, I will tell u everything"

NA has full anger in his eyes.. He SLAPS across Shloks face in anger..

Anjali and Varad are shocked " how can u take a decision like this.. u dint even think of talking to me first"

" no baba.. I know what I am doing.. Astha and I married.. I know u will be angry with me.. but trust me baba I did the right thing"

" Shlok what are u saying? Are u out of your mind?" NA is irritated

"yes baba.. please don't question me anything now.. I cannt explain anything to you" Shlok says without being able to look in the eyes of NA

Anjali puts her hand on NA's shoulder to calm down..

Shlok just walks away to his room

Varad looks at Shlok and is worried.. Varad gives a worried look to NA and they both are tensed.

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Astha is standing in Shloks room and looking here and there not knowing what to do

Shlok comes into the room and throws his garland on the bed and walks around.. He picks up a drink bottle and starts drinking fast..

Astha looks in worry

Shlok gives a stare at astha " go and change ur clothes"

Astha is tensed but walks away to change.. She goes to the washroom and starts weeping.. She starts washing her face and then calls gauri " is mom fine?"

Gauri is tensed " Astha where are u? are u alright? I hope shlok is not misbehaving with you. Your mother is alright. She can be taken home in 2 or 3 days"

Astha in tears "thanks gauri. Please be with her. Please do one favour for me. Please don't tell her anything for now.. I will explain everything to her."

Gauri says " alright astha.. but please take care of yourself"

Astha disconnects and changes her clothes and comes out

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Shlok looks at astha very angrily.. Astha is tensed..

Shlok gets up and locks the room door.. Astha gulps in tension

Shlok slowly starts walking towards Astha and corners her. Astha looks into shloks eyes and is breathing heavily..

Shlok puts her hand into her hair slowly and caresses her and says " its our suhagraat isn't it.. aren't u happy and excited"

Astha's tears rolls down her eyes..

Shlok runs his fingers on her cheeks and wipes off her tears

Astha pushes him a bit and walks off...

Shlok holds her from her waist and pulls her towards himself.. slowly he starts to hold her hair from his fingers and puts her hair on one side

Then he slowly unzips her dress from the back..

Astha is shocked.. she doesn't want this but she has no way..

Shlok turns her around and carries her and puts her on the bed..

And starts moving closer to her.. He gives a cold stare at her and then he takes the pillow and gives it in her hand...

Astha looks confused..

He says " go sleep on the sofa there".. " get lost" he says very rudely

Astha immediately gets up from the bed irritated..

Shlok smirks and goes off to sleep in the bed

Astha takes her pillow and corrects her dress and lies down on the sofa.. Astha gets many images of what all had happened in the past from her liking to shlok to getting a chance to work with him and today he is totally degrading her.. she looks at shlok sleeping peacefully and sheds a tear

She starts feeling cold.. Astha gets up to look for a blanket.. she is unable to find one..

She tries to open the room door... but shlok has locked it and has they keys of the room.. Astha cant believe that shlok actually locked up the room

Irrirtated astha just goes back to sleep in the cold

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Varad and NA talking to each other

" shlok has done wrong by marrying that girl" NA says

"I think shlok is upto something dad. As much I know shlok he is not in love with her. He hates her .. she spoiled yours and his reputation and shlok will never forget that"

"It doesn't take much of a time for hate to change into love.. and this girl knows all our secrets.. soon shlok will also know.. we need to do something soon"

" don't worry dad.. I will do everything.. Shloks hate for astha will always remain.. if not then astha will not be alive for shlok to trust her" Varad says with seriousness

" No varad we cannot openly kill astha.. she is a part of this family now.. and moreover she had put a case on us before.. so we cant take this risk" worried NA saya

" We cant do it openly.. but an accident is very easy to occur... I will do the needful very soon.. trust me" Varad confidently says

" ok do what u want but carefully.. I don't want anything happening to my son in all this.. do u get it" firmly says NA and leaves

Varad smirks and says to himself " oh dad.. I am sorry.. I cant promise u that.. For my dreams to come true shlok needs to go as well"


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Precap - Shlok is running and pulls astha and both fall down.. 😉

Edited by namratavyas - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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excellent update. thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi,
Get well soon 😊
loved reading your update, thank you. Now can't wait to read the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update!
And dont worry...get better soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hope ur fine now !
And very lovely update , beautiful .omg varad s so cruel , hate him. update d next part asap :-) and thanku for d pm :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice updates so far.
So much has happened!
I really hope Varad's plans stop working

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