AsHlok SS - Hostile Takeover Chptr 06 pg 28 updtd

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Ishq-Dua

@Ishq-Dua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Another great update :)

I'm really enjoying the story

great work Nidha

continue soon

Cheers>

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TehsinaJFJ

@TehsinaJFJ

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Beautiful!Ur writing style and storyline reminds me of Penny Jordan!😉But I have to say it was a pleasure reading the chapters..I am loving it!Plz update soon!Nd do PM me!😛

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fanraya

@fanraya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Wow, amazing, please update soon..👍🏼 loving your story..

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Serviana

@Serviana

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Whoooaaa! Update soon again!!!👏

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Payal

@-iPayal-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

I'm such a fan of your writing now.

You don't use many words, but the intention and 'feels' come across with a bang!

Astha after the heartbreak is a treat to watch (or read rather). I hope in later on in the show they actually show her like this. It would be so wonderful to see Shlok getting intimidated, that too by a woman, ;)

My only complaint is that it's too short, I'm very greedy,I need more! Lol.

-Payal.

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ANAM

@khuwahish

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

GREAT.. REALLY ENJOYING😊

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LuvStrk-001

@LuvStrk-001

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Amazing update dear!!!like this strong Aastha..!!!Really cant wait to know what made her such strong!!!Thanks for sharing and do pm me when u update this story!!!

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writergrl1992

@writergrl1992

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

It's amazing! Though it's a scenario I pray won't happen in the IPK-EBP world..(Don't want Astha to suffer so much 😭) I love how this is playing out 👏 Please PM me too! 😊😊😳😳😳