AsHlok SS - Hostile Takeover Chptr 06 pg 28 updtd - Page 10

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Amazing update.

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

OMG You updated!! Can't explain how excited I got when I saw it said part 2! :D You should be surprised I did😆. I am a lousy updater.

And this second part was just as good, or ever better than the first. Honestly, I am so impressed with your writing skills and the way you've created this strong Astha!

What to say. I love strong females and there is a severe lack of them in Indian television. Innocent , naive heroines are good but strong ones are enjoyable too. Astha's cuteness we all enjoy now let me see if I can create a strong one.😳

Shlok changed in Astha's absence? 😳 That line definitely warmed my heart though I know he's probably still majorly misogynist (or not?) but the fact that Astha's absence made a difference to some extent in his dark life is really pleasing. :D

Shlok has changed but to what extent needs to be seen. Astha walking out of his life has effected him but if the misogynyst is fully gone or still there has to be seen.

And have to say, my favourite line had to be this:

" In business relationships doesn't matter. I learned that from the best Mr. Agnihotri" Astha replied and Shlok felt as if someone had landed a stinging slap on his face.

That and all the other dialogues exchanged between them was pure genius! 👏 That's humbling to know you felt so. This Astha is no longer the shy girl.

Overall, I heartily enjoyed this chapter and am super-excited for the next. PM me if you do pm's and continue soon!

I do pm's but please like the post above the last update so I don't miss you out. Thank you for the comments they mean a lot to me😊

Originally posted by: dmegha

fantastic and superb update!!

I loved Aastha nad Shlok covo!!

Neena and Aastha's banter was sweet!

And Suresh's p.o.v. in between was amazing!

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

nice update

Originally posted by: rbb1

Wow great update, love the new strong Astha, can't wait to read your next update

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Hey nidha,,..finally u update ...nice one...I like this powerful astha...and when will u update temptation...have been waiting for it

Originally posted by: -babyblue-

mindblowing update.. 😊

waiting for next one .

do update soon..

Originally posted by: .Siham.

awesomeee updateee :)

Originally posted by: MalikaRose

Another great update :)

I'm really enjoying the story

great work Nidha

continue soon

Cheers>