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sias2

@sias2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#841

Arnav not going with her...noo... team building would b so much fun.
please update soon. it was an awesome update

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rati123

@rati123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#842

This Sheetal is such a character ! and Shyam as usual is unspeakable.

I wonder when Arnav will break away from the clutches of Sheetal and acknowledge Khushi.

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#843

Awesome...

Loved Khushi and Arnav moments... They are trying to forget about their attraction and be friends... but is it possible... Why is it so complicated...

Nani have seen what no one else can see...

Arrgghh... i hate that sheetal... She has no feelings for Arnav but is wiyh him for her benefit... Now Arnav is going with her... I m hating this...

Anjali know about her husband... then why is she quiet??

Feeling really bad for khushi... 😭

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archmink

@archmink

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#844

Shital doesn't give two hoots about his family ... She just came cuz Shyam ask her too ... Anjali seems to know her husband is not what he seems to be and she is stuck somewhere in her past .. Not

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rajvta

@rajvta

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#845

Beautiful update, there is a yearning, melancholy in their growing love which is so perfectly expressed thru your writing. I so wish that everything gets resolved for them. But am afraid that Arnav is too beolden to Sheetal's dad and he and his spoil daughter are not ready to let him go.

So Koorg it is in next chapter.. wonderful hum tum aur coffee and the monsoon rain.. never knew coffee could be a catalyst for a love story:-)

Loving the story.

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#846

Kavi...one of these days i'm gonna have a heart attack reading your Arnav Khushi scenes. Serious palpitations and you haven't upped the S-quotient yet.

Arnav in his tracks and wet T-shirt, Khushi dressed to kill were a sight to behold. I wanted him to so badly reach out and tuck her hair behind her ear...that I waited with bated breath but alas he couldn't coz they are just friends.

What a scene that was? Stunning. Loved loved loved it. And Arnav holding her hand to put it under running water and the concern, the awareness and their apprehension...absolutely mind blowing. The awareness is intense. I also loved that Khushi accepted Arnav's reasons for paying buaji's hospital bills. Aakhir haq hai na...albeit only in the depths of their heart right now.

I love nani. Am glad Khushi has somebody's support in the family. Is it only me or Anjali is a bit selfish here? She seems totally self-centered. Why would she merely think Arnav is engaged so he is happy? even if he said that a while ago...She attributes Arnav's attrcation to Khushi's beauty and equates it to Shyam's attraction...yikes...am not comfortable with her character somehow. While Shyam is creepy...Anjali is too self-absorbed.

Next the photo and the bed scene...OMG Kavi...what are doing to us. Dhak dhak dhak dhak dhak dhak...

and then Sheetal enters and my heart broke with Khushi's.

The kheer part was so beautiful that my heart wept for this young couple who are unable to express their love for each other.

I know Arnav will be in Coorg. Obviously he could not refuse Sheetal right away after all he is engaged to her. But his way of getting Khushi to Coorg is to say he is not going. HE NEEDS TO GO...How can he survive that many days without her? he needs her for his survival :)

Thanks for that amazing chapter Kavi :)

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spongebobchick

@spongebobchick

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Posted: 11 years ago

#847

I feel so sorry for Arnav. It's almost as if he's trapped in a web of lies; he's lying about his relationship with Sheetal, he's lying about how he feels for Khushi and he's lying about the reason he's so indebted to Sheetal's father.

I feel like Khushi has acknowledged the fact that Arnav means something more than a friend to her, but obviously the blinding fact that he is engaged is causing her to step back and not speak her feelings out, and I feel like if she did, or in some way reassured Arnav that it wasn't one sided he might just stop being such a dumb fool and stop with the farce of the relationship he has with Sheetal. It was interesting to see that Sheetal too knew about Arnav being engaged to her out of obligation not really choice; I'm really intrigued to see what it is that made Arnav and Sheetal decide to get engaged. I loved Nani in this! She refuses to acknowledge Arnav's engagement having seen the change in him when Khushi is around. The fact that Anjali noticed that Shyam had been leering at Khushi and she seemed to so casually acknowledgeit was worrying, but I'm hoping that if Shyam ends up doing something pricky (which we obviously might), she'll know that he was acting like a leech before too, while Khushi was seemingly obliviously.

Great updates! Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#848

Arnav and Khushi are so meant to be, they share an unspoken communication and closeness that defies definition. In addition to the simmering desire and passion that they both have under almost strict control, there is such caring and concern that it brings tears to my eyes. Love Naniji for her astuteness in recognizing the undercurrents.

Sheetal appears so unfit for Arnav and yet she is so confident that Her father owns Arnav. Shyam is up to his shady chaal to get to Khushi. When will these two and their manipulations be noticed?

Wish Arnav was going to the team building event. I feel so sorry for Khushi that she has to watch Sheetal claim her rights on Arnav right in front of her eyes and is powerless to do anything about it. Somehow I think he will go ...won't he?

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#849

more than khushi's my heart is breaking thinking that arnav would be spending time with that good for nothing sheetal in udaipur when he could have joined the team and enjoyed a lovely weather with interesting people and mostly with khushi!

I cant believe that shyam and sheetal are stooping that low, they are both cheating on the raizadas siblings but thank god anjali has already started seeing the hidden facade of her husband's personality!

mind blowing update, loved it

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Dimz13

@Dimz13

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#850

Nani has come to some conclusions and also probably made some decisions regarding Arnav and Kushi..and Anjali is sitting on the fence..but can be swayed...I can see teams being formed.

So Anjali is not as I mine to the goings on..she has seen how Shyam looks at Kushi...but does nothing says nothing... I suppose she has nothing concrete to point fingers I suppose.

And Sheetal...happily sleeping around and generally doing everything a spoilt rich brat is expected to do. And she know her fathers hold on Arnav...but will that be enough to overcome this gargantuan attraction and love that's blossoming between Arnav and Kushi... Sheetal should be wary...but she believes she has the ace.

Shyam is a wicked man...offering his wicked advise to Sheetal."both deserve each other..but one against Arhi.

Poor Kushi has n o clue what is going on with her heart that's breaking into itty bitty pieces at every little hurt that comes her way from Arnav...I suppose his heart is breaking as well.