Meri Aashiqui Ab Tum Hi Ho ~ KR FF

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heya peeps..!!
Is there need of ma intro..?? nhi na..abhi tak to pechan ne lage honge ki me kon ho..
so me aur ek FF start kar rahi ho..socha tha joh ongoing works hai mere use pehle complete karo..magar kya karo meri cutiepie (neha) hai na jo itne awsum ideas lati hai..to mujhe likhne ka maan karta hai..
so me Abhilasha (Abhilashaarsha) & neha (Neha_KR) we both are going to start this FF...this ff is on the ongoing track of D3 where reyam r frnds now bt they r still on trip..
so ab meri bak bak ban nd ye lo 1st chaapy..

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MERI AASHIQUI AB TUM HI HO...!!



Rey was sitting near pool side nd was in his deep thoughts...

REY's POV

Aaj mujhe meri frndship wapis milgyi hai..magar mere baje se aaj mere dono best frnds ke relationship me problem aagyi hai..aaj mere dono frnds ne mujhe maaf toh kar diya hai..magar me apne aap ko maaf nhi karonga jab tak me undono ko waspis swayam and Sharon se swaron nhi bana tha...I hope sab pehle ki taar thik hojaye..wo dono ek saat kitne happy the magar meri ek mistake ke bajse sab kuch kharab hogya (flashback of reyam slap scence) kash me uss time swayam ki baat suntan aur adi kin hi to ye sab nhi hota...god I cnt handle this..dono ne mujhe maaf kar diya hai..magar ek dusre ke taraf dekh bhi nhi arahe hai...nd bcoz of that I still think ki wo dono ne mujhe maaf nhi kiya hai...(looking up toward the sky) god ab aap hi kuch kijiye plzz...meri help karo plzz...me Sharon nd swayam ko SWARON wapis banaonga..nd I promise that to myself...

POV END

At that time a girl passed by the pool side she was looking at rey...her face was cover with scraf over...and she had tears in her eye...as soon as rey look at her she in hurry strted to walk...only one word came out of reys mouth "BAATCUTTER"
And rey went behind dat girl...he went and took hold of her wrist nd pulled her towards him in this process they fell down in the pull that girl banged in reys chest nd then looked up to meet reys eye...nd then there started the llhh with BG same as d3)

Rey slowly moved his hand to her face and slowly removed her scraf frm her face her tears where now flowing down of her cheeks and she was looking down rey agn said "BAATCUTTER" listening to it she looked up and agn met his chocolate brown orbs and both agn got drawn in each others eyes...rey cupped her face and rubbered away her tears...

With sound of other peoples they came back to their sense and both moved away frm each other and looked toward each other with immense love in their eye fr each other... "Kriya tum.." rey was going to say some thing bt was cut by kriya.. "sorry I need to go" and saying this kriya went away frm there..

Kriya was crying badly after meeting rey at pool side she was sitting on the rock near the sea and looking at the beautiful sunset...

KRIYA's POV

Rey m sorry...rey m sorry...(flashback of all KR scence)mujhe pata hai ki aap bohot problems me ho...mujhe pata hai ki swayam and Sharon ne aapko maaf kardiya hai and m happy for u dat u got ur two best frnds back in ur life...magar mujhe ye bhi pata hai ki un dono ne apko maaf kiya hai magar aapne apne aapko maaf nhi kiya hai...I knw aap chate hai ki swayam and Sharon wapis swaron banjaye..i knw aap chate hai ki jo relationship apke ek mistake ke bajese toota hai wo wapis jood jaye aur (wipping her tears away) issme me apki help karongi rey..i will help u out...magar apko kbhi pata nhi chalne dungi ki me aapki help kar rahi ho...I promise that to myself...

POV END

Rey on other side after kriya left went to an open area and was looking at the beautiful sunset...

REY's POV

Kriya..!! meri baatcutter...wo yaha..?? wht is she doing here wo yaha kya kar rahi hai...miujhe ye pata lagana hi hoga...(looking at the sky) kya ye aapka koi sign hai..?? kya kriya meri help karegi swaron ko wapis ek saat lane me..?? magar wo idhar kya kar rahi hai...??

POV END

Kriya got up frm the rock on which she was sitting with a determission in her eyes to bring back swaron agn nd to help rey without letting him knw...

On other hand rey got up with a determission in his eyes to bring back swaron agn and to find wht is kriya doin her..

Both hearts at different place bt thinking abt each other nd also beating fr each other...with same ditermission in boths eyes...they said together "I will do whtever is possible frm my side"

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Hope u like it..!!
plzz hit like tab nd leave ur reviews..
have a nice day ahead..😊
Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Index
part 1: above
teaser: pg 12
part 2: page 16
part 3: page 28
Edited by Neha_KR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me 1st. . . .
Me 1st. . . . . .
Me 1st . . . . . . . . .:-D
yuppieee. . . . . . . . . . .
Wow yr. . .u guyss r writing A KR STORY on current track. . .uuhhuuu :-D
m so loving it. .
So Rey is blaming himself for SS ka breakup, and is asking help 4m universeji. .
And universeji ne uski sunn li aur humari Kriya entry ho gayi. .wow. . .
Bt,kriya bhaag gayi waha se. .
And nw kriya is going to help rey to unite SS indirectly hi sahi. .
And rey is going to unite SS n find about kriya. .
Wow. .guys realy Amazing . . .
I so so so loved it. . .
Update d nxt part soon. . .
Me waiting. .waiting
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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recent track me KR ff wowieee me luving it

chlo shw me toh dekhne ko nhi mila atlst FF me padhne ko milega me so happy happy thnku🤗

n update was suprb mast,,,👏⭐️
ab kriya rey ko help karegi wahhh gr8😃
update jaldi plzz😃

sry 4 late cmt
Edited by kuhu_Arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I found t 😛
Wow amazing start 👏
Kria n goa 😳
Kriyaansh met 😳
Continue soon 😊
Waiting for the next update 😊
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
res
unres. . .
Starting toh intrstng lagti hai. .
Kriya in goa. .
Rey found her. .
Dono ko ek hi determination. . .
Lets c. . .
Edited by sanju_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWW sahi naam rakhaa hai aashiqui... ahm ahm
storyline mast hai... n K ki entryy 😃😃
I lovedd her entryyy... ek kone main rey n dooosre n K..😳
K ka alone scene looking at sky wass damn awesumm..
aimning fr d same mission... amzingg concept..
im lovin it... ab next update jaldii... sorry short comment
n reason uh knoee
Edited by K.R_ackraal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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reswa.
unres...
again a new work rom u both devils 😲
tum dono ka dimaag kithna chalta hai yaar...
anyway as long as u give me cute n romanti KR, mai tum dono ka torcher bare karungi 😃
soo this is continuation or current track...
nyc one...
eagerly waiting for KR SS reunion...
jaldi update karo...
Edited by Princess_Devil - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh this is awesome!!
awesome idea!!
hayee baatcutter
very good both of you!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow nice start
kria is here to help him.,great
update soon

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